I use Yugioh to battle the multiverse

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Rangergod1

WrIte more .............................................................................................................................................

LV 13

NobodyiGuess

Author, if I had to describe your story with only one word, it would be: Speed Running. There is almost no dialog between characters. Everything is told and not shown by you. Characters do not ask who the MC is, where he came from, and what his intentions are. (except for a very shallow interaction in the beginning) all we have as story development is your "trust me bro, it happened". the only reason there are 3 stars on characters design, updating stability and world background; it's because the first and last one were not created by you, and about the second... I have to idea, so I gave an average score. (That is my honest criticism. It's not me attacking you)

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Neptune5

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LV 3

Henshin1

More chapter please 😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌

LV 4

Pacifist_Warrior

Author I don't know 😂 if you forgot it or doing it intentionally but there's is literally zero dialogue for any character including females leads in other than mc with internal monologue 🙃🙃

LV 3

TheFateAvenue

Can somebody please give a normal review i want to know if i want to read it because if he only use yugi cards then i wont read it because that is not something i like to read so can somebody give a detailed about the story sorry for my rant Ps author no hate to you but i want to know more before i read it My rating star is just 5 because i dont want to give a low score for my question

LV 1

DDA

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LV 4

Marcus_Hembree

Good pacing. The Mc needs to work with a few more cards to improve his game. I'm not expecting him to play like the next king of games, or duelling prodigy but throwing down a complicated menovoure or two every once in a while instead of powering through would make it more interesting.

LV 3

wdqsc

Harem yes

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Blazingdead

Yes more more

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Getouttheway

Write more please

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Pepsimen

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Migunner

Why the chapter is so slow more ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Nolifeyesgame

Please write more thank you ....................................................................................................................

LV 4

ThongLover

quite good concept after rewrite it, good job, the minus of this pick so slow to update

LV 5

Ulescu_Mihai

Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍

LV 14

Pie_Daddy

It's not the best, but I'm enjoying it. Thank you for the effort btw........................................................................