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seriously this book is my favorite after the world online. need more than 40 chapters ! i hope this will be a fast release one.
Nice novel, hope there will be continue.......................................................................................................................
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I really enjoyed this novel. The translation was great. The world background and storyline is creative. The MC is a bit OP but he is in a world where he still has to be care so it doesn't require a eyeroll everytime something happens. I have to say I had a habit of checking the chapters as I was reading because the story was so good to me that I would hope there was more
This is actually the best out of all the others in the vote pool, so I don't know why this got the least points. The others were just plain ridiculous compared to this novel, but this novel still have plenty of bad reviews, I don't get it. I think plenty of the bad reviews just hate OP MC novels that they don't care about the story anymore. I've read novels that have severely dumb and arrogant MCs, but they still don't get that many bad reviews.
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if you like very dull book then honestly this is for you. the mc literally does nothing it's like watching bots fight it out . plus the horrible mtl translation wouldn't recommend
1 star, This is utter trash and not worth your time. Not even just that, the author is dumb to the point I'm losing braincells reading it..............
Alright so I made a review earlier and I went way too easy, this has to be a horrible novel, I gave it 3.6 but it's not worth that, the author is dumb, added a whole new thing to the world background, Mc has op plot armor, does no work and gets legendary shield class and op abilities in only the 8th chapter. I feel really bad for the people that read this. Trust me, it's not worth it and even the author dropped it. Don't read this go find something actually good
This story honestly feels like a mess. The world is not fleshed out at all, we're given the vaguest description from a nervous kid before we're dumped into the powerup scene. there's no description of the world around the main character and so give you nothing to be invested in. From the get-go the protagonist feels poorly fleshed out, we're given the vaguest description of him and then nothing else. Again, nothing to get invested in. The first time he enters the "game" or whatever it is, honestly we're never given a proper explanation of it, or were the boundaries lie... anyways, there's no description of the world he's entered, it's just *he's in, now he's in a dungeon* It's like the story expects you to know what's going on and it kills it fast. There's not description on were he spawns if he's in a town or whatever. again, *he's in, now he's in a dungeon*. The translation is bad, a lot of lines are poorly stringed or give the wrong context. It only get's two stars because i've honestly seen worse. In conclusion, this story feels like it's not made for the readers, but for the writer. Would not recommend.
I think the story is pretty good and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
Another transmigration novel with different settings and spices. Instead being OP at the beginning, MC have to struggle and punished before he can taste the fruit of his efforts to cultivate the golden citizens he 'fooled'.
Great story. Great characters. Its overall an amazong story with i could read it more often and it have more chapters. i like where this story is going and i cant wait to read more.
So far so good! To be honest, I didn't have any expectations for this novel. Both the title and the synopsis don't look promising. But when I read it, what a surprise! The plot is quite interesting. There're a couple of plot holes but it's nothing serious and can be overlooked. Translation is nice so far but I don't know if it'll be terrible later on like other novels. The content of the actual novel isn't what the synopsis said at all! The synopsis gave me the impression of an arrogant, happy go lucky mc with broken abilities. But, although the actual novel has an op mc, I find it quite interesting. Mc isn't two dimensional and has some interesting qualities. Also, he does go out of the city and explore around(he doesn't sit in the city and let his troops do all the work). Some people will find this novel horrendous but I think that this is one of the most promising novels in trial read.
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Great book hope more comes soon........ ...................................................................................................
so far the book has been very entertaining , the storyline is fresh and clean would love it to continue and keep me entertained , I won't give any spoilers but you should give this one a try.
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It's actually relatively good, as trial reads go. Be warned however: large portions of this novel will be nonsensical or unsuited to other parts of the novel. Examples include the nonsense that is his only attack skill, the fact that literally nothing he does costs any resource, his obsession with equipment over skills, the general lack of sense with stats, and the entire setup surrounding those stupid "death soldiers". This is not the author's fault, but rather the fault of the transcriber, who has changed major portions of this story and added random stuff in to pad out the differences in order to avoid copyright infringement while copy pasting almost literally everything else without regard to whether it makes sense to leave it that way. In the original story the MC actually does have an SSS talent which removes resource costs, is a mage who can fuse skills together, and doesn't even posess a system at all much less a horde of soldiers to murder his enemies for him. A lot of scenes will make much more sense if you keep in mind that the original author didn't have him as an invincible tank with an army.
This is translation review, not novel review. If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator. With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity. And with the worth case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel). overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
Good start to the story while different from the raw he also altered the story to fit the new talent with and actual what if break off .....
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Hmmm mc be too much of a coward, so what if his 3000 death soldiers die.He can just respawn them with death points.I expected him to be more invincible than he already is.Like why not send his dudes to go farm lvl200 dungeons to lvl up quick or go do some epic quests
Its definitely the best novel of the week, im wondering when he’ll make more chapter though.
I like the concept..........................................................................................................................
why is there no new chapter coming 😕😒. 33is a great guy and I take care of her child when she work the time spend with kid is much more attractive to her
seriously this book is my favorite after the world online. need more than 40 chapters ! i hope this will be a fast release one.
Nice novel, hope there will be continue.......................................................................................................................
well there should be a limit to stupidity of webnovel [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I really enjoyed this novel. The translation was great. The world background and storyline is creative. The MC is a bit OP but he is in a world where he still has to be care so it doesn't require a eyeroll everytime something happens. I have to say I had a habit of checking the chapters as I was reading because the story was so good to me that I would hope there was more
This is actually the best out of all the others in the vote pool, so I don't know why this got the least points. The others were just plain ridiculous compared to this novel, but this novel still have plenty of bad reviews, I don't get it. I think plenty of the bad reviews just hate OP MC novels that they don't care about the story anymore. I've read novels that have severely dumb and arrogant MCs, but they still don't get that many bad reviews.
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if you like very dull book then honestly this is for you. the mc literally does nothing it's like watching bots fight it out . plus the horrible mtl translation wouldn't recommend
1 star, This is utter trash and not worth your time. Not even just that, the author is dumb to the point I'm losing braincells reading it..............
Alright so I made a review earlier and I went way too easy, this has to be a horrible novel, I gave it 3.6 but it's not worth that, the author is dumb, added a whole new thing to the world background, Mc has op plot armor, does no work and gets legendary shield class and op abilities in only the 8th chapter. I feel really bad for the people that read this. Trust me, it's not worth it and even the author dropped it. Don't read this go find something actually good
This story honestly feels like a mess. The world is not fleshed out at all, we're given the vaguest description from a nervous kid before we're dumped into the powerup scene. there's no description of the world around the main character and so give you nothing to be invested in. From the get-go the protagonist feels poorly fleshed out, we're given the vaguest description of him and then nothing else. Again, nothing to get invested in. The first time he enters the "game" or whatever it is, honestly we're never given a proper explanation of it, or were the boundaries lie... anyways, there's no description of the world he's entered, it's just *he's in, now he's in a dungeon* It's like the story expects you to know what's going on and it kills it fast. There's not description on were he spawns if he's in a town or whatever. again, *he's in, now he's in a dungeon*. The translation is bad, a lot of lines are poorly stringed or give the wrong context. It only get's two stars because i've honestly seen worse. In conclusion, this story feels like it's not made for the readers, but for the writer. Would not recommend.
I think the story is pretty good and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
Another transmigration novel with different settings and spices. Instead being OP at the beginning, MC have to struggle and punished before he can taste the fruit of his efforts to cultivate the golden citizens he 'fooled'.
Great story. Great characters. Its overall an amazong story with i could read it more often and it have more chapters. i like where this story is going and i cant wait to read more.
So far so good! To be honest, I didn't have any expectations for this novel. Both the title and the synopsis don't look promising. But when I read it, what a surprise! The plot is quite interesting. There're a couple of plot holes but it's nothing serious and can be overlooked. Translation is nice so far but I don't know if it'll be terrible later on like other novels. The content of the actual novel isn't what the synopsis said at all! The synopsis gave me the impression of an arrogant, happy go lucky mc with broken abilities. But, although the actual novel has an op mc, I find it quite interesting. Mc isn't two dimensional and has some interesting qualities. Also, he does go out of the city and explore around(he doesn't sit in the city and let his troops do all the work). Some people will find this novel horrendous but I think that this is one of the most promising novels in trial read.
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the best i ever had this book is the bessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssst
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Great book hope more comes soon........ ...................................................................................................
so far the book has been very entertaining , the storyline is fresh and clean would love it to continue and keep me entertained , I won't give any spoilers but you should give this one a try.
a good one....... ......................... ......................... ......................... ......................... .........................
It's actually relatively good, as trial reads go. Be warned however: large portions of this novel will be nonsensical or unsuited to other parts of the novel. Examples include the nonsense that is his only attack skill, the fact that literally nothing he does costs any resource, his obsession with equipment over skills, the general lack of sense with stats, and the entire setup surrounding those stupid "death soldiers". This is not the author's fault, but rather the fault of the transcriber, who has changed major portions of this story and added random stuff in to pad out the differences in order to avoid copyright infringement while copy pasting almost literally everything else without regard to whether it makes sense to leave it that way. In the original story the MC actually does have an SSS talent which removes resource costs, is a mage who can fuse skills together, and doesn't even posess a system at all much less a horde of soldiers to murder his enemies for him. A lot of scenes will make much more sense if you keep in mind that the original author didn't have him as an invincible tank with an army.
This is translation review, not novel review. If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator. With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity. And with the worth case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel). overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
Good start to the story while different from the raw he also altered the story to fit the new talent with and actual what if break off .....
Reveal Spoiler Hmmm mc be too much of a coward, so what if his 3000 death soldiers die.He can just respawn them with death points.I expected him to be more invincible than he already is.Like why not send his dudes to go farm lvl200 dungeons to lvl up quick or go do some epic quests
Its definitely the best novel of the week, im wondering when he’ll make more chapter though.
I like the concept..........................................................................................................................
why is there no new chapter coming 😕😒. 33is a great guy and I take care of her child when she work the time spend with kid is much more attractive to her