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Yeah it was very well-written. No obvious grammer mistakes and the pacing is nice too. Such romance novels are a personal favorite of mine, so I really liked it. Overall, keep it up! :)
Based on what I've read, the story is really interesting.. The tittle, the story, the characters everything! even the way of writing!! I hope you will continue writing in this way and excited for your future work!
Honestly, romance novels aren't my thing, but this one managed to impress me. I could really feel the emotions of the characters, which is rare for novels on WN. The world background and story development is also not bad, so be sure to give this novel a try. Great potential, hope to see more chapters.
seemed pretty interesting to me, a sense of mystery from the very beginning. Small improvement is required in the descriptive paras. and that's all
Well, what should I say? Only a few chaps are out, so I wouldn't know much about the world-building. And as for the writing quality, it is pretty good. Just proofread the chaps to remove the usage of present and past tense together. And well, you should use dialogue tags properly. (the convo of the voice and the lady was simple yet confusing, lol.) The story is fast-paced and overall sound. This book has potential, and after fleshing it out, it will do wonders. :D (Woah, I actually sound like those serious critiquers.)
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This novel is so good! I'm a total sucker for stories like this, but the author has made this one truly unique! The writing is good, pacing is great and character development is on point! Would recommend even if stories like this aren't your usual thing!
The Female protagonist was saved, but she doesn't know it. I'm waiting for the moment when she figures it out :D The author took a common scenario, like an otome villanness novel, and put a spicy twist to it. Nesrin is soooooooo cute and adorbsballs. But too bad she had to take the fall. Ugh. In any case, I am looking forward to how the story goes.
This is well written, it had cliffhangers that made me want more and feel giddy and interested. I love how you make your dialogue! KUDOS TO YOU AUTHOR! LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE CHAPTERS! :3
You should be reading this! Really, skip the reviews and add to your collection! The writing is well edited, not pedantic and easy to follow; the plot is intriguing, addicting and coherent! It's a page turner! I really liked how the novel started and how promising it is. Good luck author-san! I wish you success!
I like the creative imagination behind this story plot. It is intense and neat. I think the author put in the effort to come up with such an interesting 'Original'. This book definitely has potential. Great work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Shameless 5 star rewiew from a mere peasant PS: I liked the novel :p
A really likable story, with an interesting beginning. One of the best things is the dialogue - it just flows so naturally! Will be keeping an eye on this one :)
it's good story as a reader it's new to me to read something like this look forward to reading more love to read this story till the end thanks for writing such a good story
I don't give 4 star below, but is your book like a Omniscient reader? or your inspiration? I feel its a bit similar only it is on fantasy world and this one is a Female Lead. .. That's all I'm not really goid doing reviews this is all I can say. I wish you the best.
Nice story! Though there is some issue with writing like "I am just too sleepy" instead of "I am just so sleepy", I have to appreciate it!. You have really great imagination so keep it up!
A very interesting story! Not one of the best, but it is better than many other stories I have read. The writing quality is good, and I like the relatable and rebellious character of the female lead. It is good to see she is finally deciding a path of her own.
Wow this novel is lit! I gotta say I am impressed! The details were so good that I can read it like a breeze of air. No obvious grammar mistakes and an awesome reading experience for me! Kudos and good luck with your future! Love lots here!
You know what, I can say that I pretty much hooked on the story. It's just great, the way it is written and the way the character is introduced. I like it very much. Wish there were a lot of chapters, can't wait to see what will happen next to Nesrin. To the readers that reading this review, give this novel a try as I know you wouldn't regret it just like...
Yeah it was very well-written. No obvious grammer mistakes and the pacing is nice too. Such romance novels are a personal favorite of mine, so I really liked it. Overall, keep it up! :)
Based on what I've read, the story is really interesting.. The tittle, the story, the characters everything! even the way of writing!! I hope you will continue writing in this way and excited for your future work!
Honestly, romance novels aren't my thing, but this one managed to impress me. I could really feel the emotions of the characters, which is rare for novels on WN. The world background and story development is also not bad, so be sure to give this novel a try. Great potential, hope to see more chapters.
seemed pretty interesting to me, a sense of mystery from the very beginning. Small improvement is required in the descriptive paras. and that's all
Well, what should I say? Only a few chaps are out, so I wouldn't know much about the world-building. And as for the writing quality, it is pretty good. Just proofread the chaps to remove the usage of present and past tense together. And well, you should use dialogue tags properly. (the convo of the voice and the lady was simple yet confusing, lol.) The story is fast-paced and overall sound. This book has potential, and after fleshing it out, it will do wonders. :D (Woah, I actually sound like those serious critiquers.)
Reveal Spoiler This novel is so good! I'm a total sucker for stories like this, but the author has made this one truly unique! The writing is good, pacing is great and character development is on point! Would recommend even if stories like this aren't your usual thing!
The Female protagonist was saved, but she doesn't know it. I'm waiting for the moment when she figures it out :D The author took a common scenario, like an otome villanness novel, and put a spicy twist to it. Nesrin is soooooooo cute and adorbsballs. But too bad she had to take the fall. Ugh. In any case, I am looking forward to how the story goes.
This is well written, it had cliffhangers that made me want more and feel giddy and interested. I love how you make your dialogue! KUDOS TO YOU AUTHOR! LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE CHAPTERS! :3
You should be reading this! Really, skip the reviews and add to your collection! The writing is well edited, not pedantic and easy to follow; the plot is intriguing, addicting and coherent! It's a page turner! I really liked how the novel started and how promising it is. Good luck author-san! I wish you success!
I like the creative imagination behind this story plot. It is intense and neat. I think the author put in the effort to come up with such an interesting 'Original'. This book definitely has potential. Great work[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Shameless 5 star rewiew from a mere peasant PS: I liked the novel :p
A really likable story, with an interesting beginning. One of the best things is the dialogue - it just flows so naturally! Will be keeping an eye on this one :)
it's good story as a reader it's new to me to read something like this look forward to reading more love to read this story till the end thanks for writing such a good story
I don't give 4 star below, but is your book like a Omniscient reader? or your inspiration? I feel its a bit similar only it is on fantasy world and this one is a Female Lead. .. That's all I'm not really goid doing reviews this is all I can say. I wish you the best.
Nice story! Though there is some issue with writing like "I am just too sleepy" instead of "I am just so sleepy", I have to appreciate it!. You have really great imagination so keep it up!
A very interesting story! Not one of the best, but it is better than many other stories I have read. The writing quality is good, and I like the relatable and rebellious character of the female lead. It is good to see she is finally deciding a path of her own.
Wow this novel is lit! I gotta say I am impressed! The details were so good that I can read it like a breeze of air. No obvious grammar mistakes and an awesome reading experience for me! Kudos and good luck with your future! Love lots here!
You know what, I can say that I pretty much hooked on the story. It's just great, the way it is written and the way the character is introduced. I like it very much. Wish there were a lot of chapters, can't wait to see what will happen next to Nesrin. To the readers that reading this review, give this novel a try as I know you wouldn't regret it just like...