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I think the book is really good, but it's not for me. It's a very emotional story and I'm not a big fan of those. Another personal gripe I have is that he will, based on his talks with god or whoever that was, only remember his memories with his mother + only when the 'time is right'.
very high votes for such a fast going story that has no core. mcs power is too boring for well known reason, and that with lots of dumb time skips. wont number all mistakes, this story is litered by them in every chapter
It is a story that has its ups and downs, good with the emotions the reader feels for the characters. Bit of a cliffhanger ending but was a good read.
I really like this book waiting for book 2. I only gave a four star because I believe nothing perfect.
La historia comenzó bien hasta que el que el personaje con apenas entrenamiento alcanzó un nivel absurdo sin sentido i sin ninguna base realista puede ser un dios pero casi sin entrenar aprende habilidades i después viene el sinsentidos de destruir los midiclorianos Que en esenciales dentro de cada persona viva porque si lo pierden dejan de estar vivos . Lo juzan vong si tienen midiclorianos pero tienen muy pocos por eso los jedi no podían sentirlo en la fuerza
Loving it so far, 7 hours of straight reading and not looking forward to getting to the end and waiting for updates .
very difficult to read, it feels like you have attention deficit, those POV jumps ruin everything and I'm not an unconditional fan of the franchise but everything feels very forced.... the idea is good but you didn't know how to take advantage of it, good luck
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No, I want to be negative, but what were all these powers for? as if the character hadn't changed at all (his Jedi era I ignored, otherwise the ridiculous hypocrisy of this will only make me hate this fic, after all he is immune to the dark side, and yet he seems to be just another corrupted sith), first time I see a wish fulfillment fic where everything is about revenge, because of characters that I'm sorry to say, no one cares about, his real mother only appeared 3 or 4 times, two of which were just her appearing in his head, watching him and leaving, and a lot of people wanted more interaction between the two, unlike the adoptive parents who were only made to create an explosive lunatic and I like super strong characters, but I'm struggling to get past chapter 60.
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solo una pregunta que tiene de malo la primera y segunda triologia entiendo la ultima de rey tengo ese tratamiento pero la que da contexto a la original what que hay de malo en ella pues insultar esa es tambein insultar la d eluk por que este existi por las consecuencias del otro si bamos en terminos lo re y hsitoria si no te gusta entendible pero llamada dechechos radiativos maldita sea que te hizo anakin para tener ese odio rey lo entiendo pero lo demas ?
This is amazing and I love this story. Rarely do I see a Star Wars fanfic and usually it’s just mid or really subpar, but this is great. I enjoyed all 122 chapters that I’ve read and I binged it through one night. That doesn’t mean the chapters are short by the way, I just decided to read it all at once because I was so invested in the story and I liked it that much. Thank you author for the chapters and story!
You really need to work on pov changes, it's happens randomly with 0 warning, one moment you are reading from the main character perspective, the next it's the moms, it's just sudden and can get confusing
Interesting and intriguing book with a unique mc character along with the plot and the twist that have happened especially relating to who the mc really is and who his parents are not just that but the mentality and the character growth after realizing and finding out the truth especially with way he has dealt with things now that he knows more of who he is look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
Being a star wars fan… I like this…………………,………………👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍ye 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍………….
Just started reading and I’ve read that the Mc doesn’t have his memories? What’s up with that? It’ll just be a OC with the highest potential with the force.
Hello, is there romance? ........................................................................................................................................
Was pretty good at first. writing is decent for web novel. the pov transitions are kinda bad but it's not a big deal. then mc becomes the world's biggest emo cry b*tc* you can imagine. it's like anakin from the prequel movies only a thousand times worse. he finds out the jedi kept his parents death a secret from him and he proceeds to go on a rampage killing allies, women, children, and anyone even slightly in his way. he also acts like he's some how morally superior to the sith while monologing to himself how he doesn't even care about the thousands of innocents he's killing. it just gets completely ridiculous and annoying all at once and I eventually dropped.
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He leído pocos fanficts de Star Wars, pero en mi humilde opinión es la mejor hasta ahora, el personaje es bastante bueno, su historia es muy interesante y lo más importante de todo, tiene un muy buen autor, por que no importa que fantástica sea la historia, se vuelve horrible con un escritor de mala calidad. Ademas me encanta que sea hijo de Abeloth, él si es el jesus espacial.
Don’t like the fact this doesn’t have a 5 rating so here full marks. ……………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………
I absolutely love this time period and I'm really enjoying the story. Very excited to see where it goes. --------------------------------------------------------------------------
One of the best Star Wars stories I've read. However, I would like to have updates more often. Просто напишу текст на своем родном языке. Привет) Всем русским на сайте, кто-нибудь знает как быстро выучить английский?
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Ok, so this will just be a preliminary review. First of all, I like the story and KOTOR timeline is my favorite, so I really enjoy this. Second, the grammar is quite good so another plus. Now I only have one problem with this, and that is the POV changes. You change the POV without warning, and sometimes it's not that obvious and it can get confusing by the time you realize. A prompt at the beginning of the new paragrapth when the POV changes will make this a whole lot better. [Character Name POV]
I don't know anything about star wars.can I read it too???? do u explain the situations of what happening around so I can get an idea what happening there
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Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about. Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about. Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about. Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about. img
I've been a fan of Star Wars a long time, and most of what I have to say is in the synopsis. So I wont be giving this story a schedule, but it won't be THAT LONG between updates. I hope this is cool with all you guys. Let me know anything about the lore that might be useful.
I think the book is really good, but it's not for me. It's a very emotional story and I'm not a big fan of those. Another personal gripe I have is that he will, based on his talks with god or whoever that was, only remember his memories with his mother + only when the 'time is right'.
very high votes for such a fast going story that has no core. mcs power is too boring for well known reason, and that with lots of dumb time skips. wont number all mistakes, this story is litered by them in every chapter
It is a story that has its ups and downs, good with the emotions the reader feels for the characters. Bit of a cliffhanger ending but was a good read.
I really like this book waiting for book 2. I only gave a four star because I believe nothing perfect.
La historia comenzó bien hasta que el que el personaje con apenas entrenamiento alcanzó un nivel absurdo sin sentido i sin ninguna base realista puede ser un dios pero casi sin entrenar aprende habilidades i después viene el sinsentidos de destruir los midiclorianos Que en esenciales dentro de cada persona viva porque si lo pierden dejan de estar vivos . Lo juzan vong si tienen midiclorianos pero tienen muy pocos por eso los jedi no podían sentirlo en la fuerza
Loving it so far, 7 hours of straight reading and not looking forward to getting to the end and waiting for updates .
very difficult to read, it feels like you have attention deficit, those POV jumps ruin everything and I'm not an unconditional fan of the franchise but everything feels very forced.... the idea is good but you didn't know how to take advantage of it, good luck
Chap135.........…………................................................…………................................................…………................................................…………................................................………….......................................
Reveal Spoiler No, I want to be negative, but what were all these powers for? as if the character hadn't changed at all (his Jedi era I ignored, otherwise the ridiculous hypocrisy of this will only make me hate this fic, after all he is immune to the dark side, and yet he seems to be just another corrupted sith), first time I see a wish fulfillment fic where everything is about revenge, because of characters that I'm sorry to say, no one cares about, his real mother only appeared 3 or 4 times, two of which were just her appearing in his head, watching him and leaving, and a lot of people wanted more interaction between the two, unlike the adoptive parents who were only made to create an explosive lunatic and I like super strong characters, but I'm struggling to get past chapter 60.
Reveal Spoiler solo una pregunta que tiene de malo la primera y segunda triologia entiendo la ultima de rey tengo ese tratamiento pero la que da contexto a la original what que hay de malo en ella pues insultar esa es tambein insultar la d eluk por que este existi por las consecuencias del otro si bamos en terminos lo re y hsitoria si no te gusta entendible pero llamada dechechos radiativos maldita sea que te hizo anakin para tener ese odio rey lo entiendo pero lo demas ?
This is amazing and I love this story. Rarely do I see a Star Wars fanfic and usually it’s just mid or really subpar, but this is great. I enjoyed all 122 chapters that I’ve read and I binged it through one night. That doesn’t mean the chapters are short by the way, I just decided to read it all at once because I was so invested in the story and I liked it that much. Thank you author for the chapters and story!
You really need to work on pov changes, it's happens randomly with 0 warning, one moment you are reading from the main character perspective, the next it's the moms, it's just sudden and can get confusing
Interesting and intriguing book with a unique mc character along with the plot and the twist that have happened especially relating to who the mc really is and who his parents are not just that but the mentality and the character growth after realizing and finding out the truth especially with way he has dealt with things now that he knows more of who he is look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
Being a star wars fan… I like this…………………,………………👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍ye 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍………….
Just started reading and I’ve read that the Mc doesn’t have his memories? What’s up with that? It’ll just be a OC with the highest potential with the force.
Hello, is there romance? ........................................................................................................................................
Was pretty good at first. writing is decent for web novel. the pov transitions are kinda bad but it's not a big deal. then mc becomes the world's biggest emo cry b*tc* you can imagine. it's like anakin from the prequel movies only a thousand times worse. he finds out the jedi kept his parents death a secret from him and he proceeds to go on a rampage killing allies, women, children, and anyone even slightly in his way. he also acts like he's some how morally superior to the sith while monologing to himself how he doesn't even care about the thousands of innocents he's killing. it just gets completely ridiculous and annoying all at once and I eventually dropped.
Reveal Spoiler He leído pocos fanficts de Star Wars, pero en mi humilde opinión es la mejor hasta ahora, el personaje es bastante bueno, su historia es muy interesante y lo más importante de todo, tiene un muy buen autor, por que no importa que fantástica sea la historia, se vuelve horrible con un escritor de mala calidad. Ademas me encanta que sea hijo de Abeloth, él si es el jesus espacial.
Don’t like the fact this doesn’t have a 5 rating so here full marks. ……………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………
I absolutely love this time period and I'm really enjoying the story. Very excited to see where it goes. --------------------------------------------------------------------------
One of the best Star Wars stories I've read. However, I would like to have updates more often. Просто напишу текст на своем родном языке. Привет) Всем русским на сайте, кто-нибудь знает как быстро выучить английский?
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Reveal Spoiler Ok, so this will just be a preliminary review. First of all, I like the story and KOTOR timeline is my favorite, so I really enjoy this. Second, the grammar is quite good so another plus. Now I only have one problem with this, and that is the POV changes. You change the POV without warning, and sometimes it's not that obvious and it can get confusing by the time you realize. A prompt at the beginning of the new paragrapth when the POV changes will make this a whole lot better. [Character Name POV]
I don't know anything about star wars.can I read it too???? do u explain the situations of what happening around so I can get an idea what happening there
exp..........................................................................................................................................
thankssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about. Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about. Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about. Do not blame you Skywalker saga is a mess that no one really wants to try to write about. img
I've been a fan of Star Wars a long time, and most of what I have to say is in the synopsis. So I wont be giving this story a schedule, but it won't be THAT LONG between updates. I hope this is cool with all you guys. Let me know anything about the lore that might be useful.