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Frankly this is one of the best young justice ffics out there that I've read. With good characterisation and action, I loved it. That being said, the author has also dropped it
This story is really good, there will be a time jump to reach its version of season 2 because the story is moving very quickly, it hasn't even been a year and Dante is already very powerful
Great fanfic probably the best young justice fanfic I’ve read in a while mc is what makes this fanfic special. unique powers, cool personality he pretty much checks all the boxes I’m looking for in a mc the romance is also good and believable. It’s a shame this is dropped/ on hiatus not sure which would really like to see the ending of this fic.
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Writing quality is pretty good, nothing to write home about but it good enough for a fan-fiction. Updating stability this is the 4th or 5th novel the Author has drop. I feel kind of slighted as I really enjoyed the fan-fictions he has wrote. Anyway the author has a life outside of writing novels. Character design, is alright below-average but something with enough mystery and intelligence to be interesting. It a fan fic with not that much diffrent so I gave it 5 stars.
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I’v really enjoyed the story so far as of writing this there are 49 chapters and it hasn’t been updated in over a month please don’t drop this!
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The story is good but not for me, the Mc feel abit too much like a Gary stu but at same time not. The drama just felt very forced, like I understand trying make the Mc more human and express more but reading felt very forced there’s was no natural progression towards making the Mc more it just happens for no reason no build up it sorta just killed the story for me personally It’s a good read just not me personally
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The writing quality is great, I don't even remember seeing any typos. The grammar is good in my opinion. The story development is quite good too in my opinion, the only complaints I have about is how fast the mc and Zatanna became a couple and that one fight where the mc could have easily defeated the opponent using telepathy yet he didn't. Dante's character is okay I don't even know why some people were complaining when he almost had a breakdown after he met the Lords of Order and Lords Chaos summoned him. He's a teenager for god's sake, though mature for his age, he's still a teenager. If someone who can easily erase your existence just summoned you without so much of an explanation and proceeds to tell you that they will observe you without knowing what's happening, then of course you'll worry about what's happening. The updating stability is confusing to be honest. Sometimes we'll have multiple chapters a day, then there were times where a chapter isn't posted for almost a week. Most of the time tho, the chapters were posted within a day or two. I don't really have much to say in the world building to be honest, it's a fanfic so the lores and such are already decided.
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check out this superboy fanfic is good Young Justice: Superboy Freeze_2540 ...................................................................................................................................................... ............................................................................................ ................................. ........................................... She is really good read and you will see the author is new so if arokey sees this comment of a little help
The story isn't bad nor is it good. The writing quality is great I just got bored around chapter 35-40 ish. Hope everyone else has fun with it.
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I’ve been really into young justice fics lately, but not many of them have original or interesting characters. Therefore I applaud your originality and ability to make the OC powerful while still being relatable. Fantastic work. Can’t wait to read more.
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Uau. A melhor fictions da DC que já li! Fantástico! Muito bom! [img=recommend] ...............................................................
for those that like hero stuff thjs js their cup of tea but to those that like more of a nuetrel or anti hero mc this not just like me at the beginning i thought it was more nuetral or anti hero but no it's an all out hero story so yeah but the thing that really tiks me of is that the mc has gotten a cosmic power that even chaos and order that's what they are called observe but nahh he is there overrecting i dont wanna die , letting those weaker then him check him if he is dangerous or not like what its like a lion with a group of dogs that think they are the real deal and the lion knkws he is a lion but thinks and acts like a puppy so yeah it's more of hero type novel flr those that like hero type novels it is good
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BROOK THIS IS SO GOOD ESPICIALLY THE FIGHTING SCENE WITH SUPERBIY AND THE MC BEATING THE TITAN JOKE
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What do you think about making MC (the main character) marry both Artemis and Zatanna?? I don't want Artemis to be sad. Please.
Get some sleep, my dude. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Frankly this is one of the best young justice ffics out there that I've read. With good characterisation and action, I loved it. That being said, the author has also dropped it
This story is really good, there will be a time jump to reach its version of season 2 because the story is moving very quickly, it hasn't even been a year and Dante is already very powerful
Great fanfic probably the best young justice fanfic I’ve read in a while mc is what makes this fanfic special. unique powers, cool personality he pretty much checks all the boxes I’m looking for in a mc the romance is also good and believable. It’s a shame this is dropped/ on hiatus not sure which would really like to see the ending of this fic.
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Writing quality is pretty good, nothing to write home about but it good enough for a fan-fiction. Updating stability this is the 4th or 5th novel the Author has drop. I feel kind of slighted as I really enjoyed the fan-fictions he has wrote. Anyway the author has a life outside of writing novels. Character design, is alright below-average but something with enough mystery and intelligence to be interesting. It a fan fic with not that much diffrent so I gave it 5 stars.
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I’v really enjoyed the story so far as of writing this there are 49 chapters and it hasn’t been updated in over a month please don’t drop this!
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The story is good but not for me, the Mc feel abit too much like a Gary stu but at same time not. The drama just felt very forced, like I understand trying make the Mc more human and express more but reading felt very forced there’s was no natural progression towards making the Mc more it just happens for no reason no build up it sorta just killed the story for me personally It’s a good read just not me personally
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The writing quality is great, I don't even remember seeing any typos. The grammar is good in my opinion. The story development is quite good too in my opinion, the only complaints I have about is how fast the mc and Zatanna became a couple and that one fight where the mc could have easily defeated the opponent using telepathy yet he didn't. Dante's character is okay I don't even know why some people were complaining when he almost had a breakdown after he met the Lords of Order and Lords Chaos summoned him. He's a teenager for god's sake, though mature for his age, he's still a teenager. If someone who can easily erase your existence just summoned you without so much of an explanation and proceeds to tell you that they will observe you without knowing what's happening, then of course you'll worry about what's happening. The updating stability is confusing to be honest. Sometimes we'll have multiple chapters a day, then there were times where a chapter isn't posted for almost a week. Most of the time tho, the chapters were posted within a day or two. I don't really have much to say in the world building to be honest, it's a fanfic so the lores and such are already decided.
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check out this superboy fanfic is good Young Justice: Superboy Freeze_2540 ...................................................................................................................................................... ............................................................................................ ................................. ........................................... She is really good read and you will see the author is new so if arokey sees this comment of a little help
The story isn't bad nor is it good. The writing quality is great I just got bored around chapter 35-40 ish. Hope everyone else has fun with it.
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I’ve been really into young justice fics lately, but not many of them have original or interesting characters. Therefore I applaud your originality and ability to make the OC powerful while still being relatable. Fantastic work. Can’t wait to read more.
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Uau. A melhor fictions da DC que já li! Fantástico! Muito bom! [img=recommend] ...............................................................
for those that like hero stuff thjs js their cup of tea but to those that like more of a nuetrel or anti hero mc this not just like me at the beginning i thought it was more nuetral or anti hero but no it's an all out hero story so yeah but the thing that really tiks me of is that the mc has gotten a cosmic power that even chaos and order that's what they are called observe but nahh he is there overrecting i dont wanna die , letting those weaker then him check him if he is dangerous or not like what its like a lion with a group of dogs that think they are the real deal and the lion knkws he is a lion but thinks and acts like a puppy so yeah it's more of hero type novel flr those that like hero type novels it is good
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BROOK THIS IS SO GOOD ESPICIALLY THE FIGHTING SCENE WITH SUPERBIY AND THE MC BEATING THE TITAN JOKE
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What do you think about making MC (the main character) marry both Artemis and Zatanna?? I don't want Artemis to be sad. Please.
Get some sleep, my dude. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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I really hope this eventually gets more chapters