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mediocre wishfullfulment trash the main character is OP from day 1 the system is lazy and boring overall just mediocre.
Please continue, this is the best of the best, I want to see how Damien is in the One Piece era and I want to see Damien's son, I can't wait for this novel to reach its original plot.
This is the first harem one piece fanfiction I enjoyed binging. The story is unique and doesn't revolve around Luffy and his crew. There are good ocs who are not complete one dimensional cartoon characters. I really appreciate that mc has a great platonic relationships which is often overlooked in harem stories.
this is an incredible story I found this fanfiction on a YouTube channel called Audiobook Collection, however the channel's founder claims that you gave him two strikes, and the channel will go down. I was hoping you could take the strikes off, please. because I wouldn't have found this incredible fanfic without the channel. Please take the strikes off.
Hello It is a very amazing story there is a channel om YouTube I discovered this fanfic from It's called audiobook collection but the creator of the channel said you gave him two strikes and the channel is going to close down I was hoping you could remove the strikes please 🙏 becouse without the channel I wouldn't have discovered this amazing fanfic please remove the strikes
Love the story in love took a setting to it as Mario book on YouTube as I really don’t have time to leave most time but I will have to stop listening to the story if you can will you start a YouTube channel with the books you’re right are in the form of an audiobook
Hey, man I found this story on YouTube and would like it if you didn’t copyright strike the dude. I don’t know what happened exactly but I would hate to see his channel take a hit for this.
Lovely book. This fanfic: One Piece: With Sign-in System is also nice and similar.
Overall it's good ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Ive been a huge fan of this series from the first few chapters of the original and i have to say that this is not doing it for me anymore. There is almost zero buildup to the arcs almost feeling as if the author wants to get to the fights as fast as possible and then the fights drag on for 4-8 long chapters. The pacing is just completely off and theres basically no detail or character development for his subordinates despite being 160 chapters deep. Overall the fic has downgraded and i dont feel the same connection to the characters since they have no detail to them.
The novel is good, the protagonist is decent, the characters are good, the protagonist's powers are interesting. The only bad thing is that in the final battle of the Valley of God, the author for some reason nerfed the protagonist, because in the previous war a year ago he had a power level of a lower Yonko but his last Liberation allowed him to fight with someone with the power of an advanced Yonko, defeated Garp, but in the Valley of God War the protagonist had the power of an advanced Yonko and even if he could not defeat Sengoku, he did not seem to use even his first Liberation, in fact, his last Liberation should grant him a power beyond a Yonko So I don't see any sense that what happened happened. I understand that the author wanted the plot even that way but he would have thought of something with more sense.
The story is well paced... it's not rushed or anything... Sometimes you wonder if "Oda is doing Side Hustle"... I enjoy it, it's like I'm reading a prologue of One Piece... Let Me tell you something To Be Continued...
One of the best One Piece Fanfics I have ever read. MC is good, his character development is very interesting. The storyline is also very well written and his relationships with all other powerhouses also perfect and it certainly matches the original plot. Chapter updates are constant, 3 chapters a week is very much understandable and accurate for this type of writing. Provides all the necessary information and context for every OC detail/character. It’s a must read fanfic!! Keep writing!!
Cerita yang sangat bagus dari karakter, Alur cerita, dll sangat wooow Rekomend banget sih ceritanya anti maenstrim Semoga update terus dan sukses selalu untuk penulisnya
my honest review . its the best fanfic i have read so far the fact that author made a whole new story is very good
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Love the story has had me hooked sense I first read the book about a week ago caught up and can’t wait for another chapter overall story for me has to be the best one piece story I’ve read I’m not heavy on spoiling a good story but I highly recommend the read
I've been following the story since the beginning.One of the best works on One Piece.Always makes you sit and wait for the continuation of this story.I'll be with you until the end of this fanfic❤️❤️❤️
The best One Piece fanfic in my opinion, and I think this version is better than the first. It has some errors here and there but they don't harm the story
The writing is very good and captures the style of the one piece manga perfectly in my opinion. the story has a very good pace and focuses on the development of the story without going to much into sidestorys as the actual one piece manga tends to do sometimes. wich is a big plus. the mix of existing character and those new implented in this fanfic is awesome as well! I love the MC and how he navigates trough the timeline of before one pieces actual storyline. and last I dont know about the stability of updates because I just stumbled upon the story and read it right trough but give it 5 stars anyways with hope to read much more of this fanfic!
It's amazing, almost perfect even. Probably one of the best OP Fics out there. would definitely give it a tryđź’Ż
The First fanfic i ever read and it did not disappoint. The author stays true to the original story but ads in his own unique touch that goes perfectly well with the world of OP. He also puts a lot of work into detail, even to the point of adding a lot of pictures of characters, attacks, weapons, fight scene’s even characters and other stuff that aren’t relevant are added regularly.
Muy buena historia, una narrativa correcta y un arco de tiempo bien explicado y detallado, haciendo que sea más fácil saber la era del protagonista. Me gusta el desarrollo de personaje y los más cercanos a el
My honest review (still biased). Naturally, with respect to fanfictions, I'd round it to 4/5. It is a different timeline than most One Piece fanfics with a more driven MC, lest he is swept away by the turbulent seas. The recently posted chapters are a rewrite, thus ANY review before this one is outdated and inaccurate. I suggest reading the first arc, chapters 1-11, to get a taste of the story and whether it is for you. Check out the Disclaimers chapter for more information. Thanks for stopping by.
mediocre wishfullfulment trash the main character is OP from day 1 the system is lazy and boring overall just mediocre.
Please continue, this is the best of the best, I want to see how Damien is in the One Piece era and I want to see Damien's son, I can't wait for this novel to reach its original plot.
This is the first harem one piece fanfiction I enjoyed binging. The story is unique and doesn't revolve around Luffy and his crew. There are good ocs who are not complete one dimensional cartoon characters. I really appreciate that mc has a great platonic relationships which is often overlooked in harem stories.
this is an incredible story I found this fanfiction on a YouTube channel called Audiobook Collection, however the channel's founder claims that you gave him two strikes, and the channel will go down. I was hoping you could take the strikes off, please. because I wouldn't have found this incredible fanfic without the channel. Please take the strikes off.
Hello It is a very amazing story there is a channel om YouTube I discovered this fanfic from It's called audiobook collection but the creator of the channel said you gave him two strikes and the channel is going to close down I was hoping you could remove the strikes please 🙏 becouse without the channel I wouldn't have discovered this amazing fanfic please remove the strikes
Love the story in love took a setting to it as Mario book on YouTube as I really don’t have time to leave most time but I will have to stop listening to the story if you can will you start a YouTube channel with the books you’re right are in the form of an audiobook
Hey, man I found this story on YouTube and would like it if you didn’t copyright strike the dude. I don’t know what happened exactly but I would hate to see his channel take a hit for this.
Lovely book. This fanfic: One Piece: With Sign-in System is also nice and similar.
Overall it's good ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Ive been a huge fan of this series from the first few chapters of the original and i have to say that this is not doing it for me anymore. There is almost zero buildup to the arcs almost feeling as if the author wants to get to the fights as fast as possible and then the fights drag on for 4-8 long chapters. The pacing is just completely off and theres basically no detail or character development for his subordinates despite being 160 chapters deep. Overall the fic has downgraded and i dont feel the same connection to the characters since they have no detail to them.
The novel is good, the protagonist is decent, the characters are good, the protagonist's powers are interesting. The only bad thing is that in the final battle of the Valley of God, the author for some reason nerfed the protagonist, because in the previous war a year ago he had a power level of a lower Yonko but his last Liberation allowed him to fight with someone with the power of an advanced Yonko, defeated Garp, but in the Valley of God War the protagonist had the power of an advanced Yonko and even if he could not defeat Sengoku, he did not seem to use even his first Liberation, in fact, his last Liberation should grant him a power beyond a Yonko So I don't see any sense that what happened happened. I understand that the author wanted the plot even that way but he would have thought of something with more sense.
The story is well paced... it's not rushed or anything... Sometimes you wonder if "Oda is doing Side Hustle"... I enjoy it, it's like I'm reading a prologue of One Piece... Let Me tell you something To Be Continued...
One of the best One Piece Fanfics I have ever read. MC is good, his character development is very interesting. The storyline is also very well written and his relationships with all other powerhouses also perfect and it certainly matches the original plot. Chapter updates are constant, 3 chapters a week is very much understandable and accurate for this type of writing. Provides all the necessary information and context for every OC detail/character. It’s a must read fanfic!! Keep writing!!
Cerita yang sangat bagus dari karakter, Alur cerita, dll sangat wooow Rekomend banget sih ceritanya anti maenstrim Semoga update terus dan sukses selalu untuk penulisnya
my honest review . its the best fanfic i have read so far the fact that author made a whole new story is very good
Ça part dans tout les sens [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
Love the story has had me hooked sense I first read the book about a week ago caught up and can’t wait for another chapter overall story for me has to be the best one piece story I’ve read I’m not heavy on spoiling a good story but I highly recommend the read
I've been following the story since the beginning.One of the best works on One Piece.Always makes you sit and wait for the continuation of this story.I'll be with you until the end of this fanfic❤️❤️❤️
The best One Piece fanfic in my opinion, and I think this version is better than the first. It has some errors here and there but they don't harm the story
The writing is very good and captures the style of the one piece manga perfectly in my opinion. the story has a very good pace and focuses on the development of the story without going to much into sidestorys as the actual one piece manga tends to do sometimes. wich is a big plus. the mix of existing character and those new implented in this fanfic is awesome as well! I love the MC and how he navigates trough the timeline of before one pieces actual storyline. and last I dont know about the stability of updates because I just stumbled upon the story and read it right trough but give it 5 stars anyways with hope to read much more of this fanfic!
It's amazing, almost perfect even. Probably one of the best OP Fics out there. would definitely give it a tryđź’Ż
The First fanfic i ever read and it did not disappoint. The author stays true to the original story but ads in his own unique touch that goes perfectly well with the world of OP. He also puts a lot of work into detail, even to the point of adding a lot of pictures of characters, attacks, weapons, fight scene’s even characters and other stuff that aren’t relevant are added regularly.
Muy buena historia, una narrativa correcta y un arco de tiempo bien explicado y detallado, haciendo que sea más fácil saber la era del protagonista. Me gusta el desarrollo de personaje y los más cercanos a el
My honest review (still biased). Naturally, with respect to fanfictions, I'd round it to 4/5. It is a different timeline than most One Piece fanfics with a more driven MC, lest he is swept away by the turbulent seas. The recently posted chapters are a rewrite, thus ANY review before this one is outdated and inaccurate. I suggest reading the first arc, chapters 1-11, to get a taste of the story and whether it is for you. Check out the Disclaimers chapter for more information. Thanks for stopping by.