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this is a pretty good novel does anyone know what the raw title is

The main character is likable not to too soft niether too vicious the pacing is perfect the writing and the translations are both excellent and overall this is a great novel one that actually deserves a good rating unlike most of the novels on this site.

This is one of the few novels that managed to do time travel right truly a masterpiece that I can't stop reading. The plot, main character and even the dialogue between the character are all very well written this novel stands out as masterpiece unlike the garbage that's usually published.

the grammar is horrible. there should be no excuse to have such bad grammar these days with so many free online grammar tools.

The translation quality is garbage all the names of the knights titles are translated wrong the grammar is horrible the wording and the editing is also bad I'm dropping this novel because of the poor translation. it's a shame since the novel is pretty decent otherwise

The definition of mediocre and cliched, the story is boring and simple with nothing unique or special about it. The main character is supposedly smart but never shows it. The enemies are all brainless young masters. the world building is nonexistent.

This is really good you better vote for this or else!!!!

A great classic cultivation novel that's done well, the main character is smart and realistic and his cheat is interesting but not broken this novel has great potential.

garbage machine translated novel no point in reading

Enjoyable read not ground breaking or unique but much better than most of the other trash out there.

nothing new or unique the grammar is bad and there is no excuse now a days with all the grammar tools available online for free. the dialogue sounds between the characters sounds like the uncoherent nonsense said by someone with ADHD. the characters are stupid and so is the descriptions of the scenes.

There are so many wrong things I don't know where to start. The pacing is horrible, the plot holes are massive and the rate at which the story is progressing is even worse. the amount of misinformation about nen in this novel makes this difficult to read as HxH fan. A simple google search could have fixed this. The characters are simple and one dimensional the descriptions are lacking and story in itself feels childish. This is clearly a newbie writer with no experience and no background so i can't really expect a masterpiece but this simply isn't good. maybe the author should start reading more good stories to understand how to write one before trying again.

it's a good novel with an evil mc that is quite smart, the plot is decent and so are the enemies there aren't too many cliches so that's good plus the translation quality is decent so is the grammar

cliché and unoriginal the immortality gimmick is nothing new and isn't even done properly nit to mention the translation and the grammar is hard to read.

pretty entertaining read.

This novel has bad grammar, too many cliches, unoriginal system and too many young masters this novel is a waste of space,

This novel is a real hidden gem don't get spooked by it's generic title it's actually a really well written novel worthy of 5 Stars and getting picked up.

Top tier novel, extremally well written character interaction and dialogues. The relationships between the MC and the other characters is some of the best on this site if not the best. 100% recommend this novel to anyone with taste.

This novel is pretty funny and has an actually interesting MC and supporting characters definitely worth the read.

this novel is a breath of fresh air. it has good pacing and progression the system is interesting and shows the authors creativity the main character isn't overpowered due to the system but he isn't weak either. overall it's just a well written and balanced novel