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Author's description of a character 'he looked like a hippie who had outlived his usefulness.'... and I'm like😳 🤣😂😁... That was savage! I don't really do fantasy, I'm a sucker for romance novels but really, I enjoyed this. The author made reading fantasy easy for me with his sense of humor, humor. well done author 👏👏👏👏
A very unique and compelling story which is narrated remarkably well by our protagonist, Zack. The amount of detail put into this novel is clear. Not only that, but the narrator's got a really good sense of humor, actually made me laugh! 5/5 for me
The writing quality is superb, it makes me ashamed of my own writing... The humor is fantastic and keeps me engaged. The hook at the beginning really reeled me quickly as I dove into it. The description is the best part as it describes everything nicely but not boringly. Overall, 5/5!
I have to say, the narration here is top notch. The first person point of view is really well done. The voice of the main character is really refreshing to read. (And the MC does act those arrogant teenager... ha ha.) The main character is also well fleshed out. However, I think other characters can be fleshed out a bit more too. (Probably might just be me.) The world building could use some work, but as of now, in the beginning, the bare bones is good. Some details about the "world" is preferred. The plot, however, is quite good. The MC gains a supernatural power with a needle stab. Heh heh... But, over all, it's a solid read.
I gotta admit, your story is very interesting. The plot really draws a person in the book. Even with two chapters, I can easily say your story has potential! I hope you continue the story! I'll be looking forward to it!
I love the storyline and i also loved how the creator described the action scenes, almost as if i was watching a show when reading it. This is going to fare well in due time 👌👌
With humor and enthusiasm, the author presents us with a charming, bold story that grasps your attention from the very biginning. This story has it all. A lovable protagonist, an engaging storyline, good dialogue, and written in a very easy-going style that makes it very relaxing to read. Well done.
top-tier writing style and narration, good class humor and a likeable main character, all in this novel. I got totally intrigued just by the first opening line. Keep up this amazingly written story!!!
I absolutely love Zack's sense of humor, This deserves more views. The author took his or her time with the details and personalities of each character, adding to my collection
Okay this is a seriously underrated book. The narration is gripping, I love Zack's commentary, its entertaining, witty and altogether thoroughly enjoyable. I love how the characters and setting are given a proper introduction, it really helps to immerse the reader. This is a fantastic book, chilling, spooky, amazingly descriptive. I love it!
Nothing to say about this, the writing quality is great. The characters and the settings are depicted very well giving color to this great story. The story seems to promise a grand plot as some vague hints are thrown here and there. I really want to know how the author will unfold this new interesting world. Great job.
I'm leaving my review now even though I'm still near the beginning. And, despite the (deserving) 5 Stars, I'm in two minds about the whole thing. As a writer: I hate it. It's so damn good and I hate it. I mean where does David get off writing so well? *sigh* As a reader: Everyone on this platform should be made to read it. It's got a rocketing-good start. The first line is liftoff, and by the end of the first chapter David has reached the stratosphere. I'm certain that by the end of the book, we'll be on a faster-than-light speed journey to the edges of the universe. It's so damn enjoyable and Zack is such a wonderful narrator. You really deserve a bunch of votes for this and, when I have some free, you're at the top of my list.
The main character is very unique and fun to follow along with. The story's pace and writing quality are both top-notch love it! The author has established the world background quite well as well.
Wow, a signed published work in the flesh! This novel was fun and light to read. I am deeply happy to have such an experience. The author was a veteran already and to the new reader! please do check this out! You will enjoy it and not be dismayed.
Ok. So this is amazing! The main character's personality is so fun that I'd be fine with just a monologue, instead of introducing other characters. I am in love with his inner thoughts. The story is also interesting and the writing quality is incredibly good. I will definitely continue reading! Nice!
Okay so this novel, top notch! I got hooked from literally the first paragraph, the idea behind the story is really captivating, likeable main character and an awesome setting. You totally deserve 5 stars XD Keep it up!
Very quickly from the start, the author grabs you and refuses to let you go. Using a delicate combination of humor, great character development and Skillful writing, one finds themselves refusing to put down the novel. Truly and incredible and captivating work! Its obvious much much effort and dedication was poured into the novel! Check it out if you have not already.
Author's description of a character 'he looked like a hippie who had outlived his usefulness.'... and I'm like😳 🤣😂😁... That was savage! I don't really do fantasy, I'm a sucker for romance novels but really, I enjoyed this. The author made reading fantasy easy for me with his sense of humor, humor. well done author 👏👏👏👏
A very unique and compelling story which is narrated remarkably well by our protagonist, Zack. The amount of detail put into this novel is clear. Not only that, but the narrator's got a really good sense of humor, actually made me laugh! 5/5 for me
The writing quality is superb, it makes me ashamed of my own writing... The humor is fantastic and keeps me engaged. The hook at the beginning really reeled me quickly as I dove into it. The description is the best part as it describes everything nicely but not boringly. Overall, 5/5!
I have to say, the narration here is top notch. The first person point of view is really well done. The voice of the main character is really refreshing to read. (And the MC does act those arrogant teenager... ha ha.) The main character is also well fleshed out. However, I think other characters can be fleshed out a bit more too. (Probably might just be me.) The world building could use some work, but as of now, in the beginning, the bare bones is good. Some details about the "world" is preferred. The plot, however, is quite good. The MC gains a supernatural power with a needle stab. Heh heh... But, over all, it's a solid read.
I gotta admit, your story is very interesting. The plot really draws a person in the book. Even with two chapters, I can easily say your story has potential! I hope you continue the story! I'll be looking forward to it!
I love the storyline and i also loved how the creator described the action scenes, almost as if i was watching a show when reading it. This is going to fare well in due time 👌👌
With humor and enthusiasm, the author presents us with a charming, bold story that grasps your attention from the very biginning. This story has it all. A lovable protagonist, an engaging storyline, good dialogue, and written in a very easy-going style that makes it very relaxing to read. Well done.
top-tier writing style and narration, good class humor and a likeable main character, all in this novel. I got totally intrigued just by the first opening line. Keep up this amazingly written story!!!
I absolutely love Zack's sense of humor, This deserves more views. The author took his or her time with the details and personalities of each character, adding to my collection
Okay this is a seriously underrated book. The narration is gripping, I love Zack's commentary, its entertaining, witty and altogether thoroughly enjoyable. I love how the characters and setting are given a proper introduction, it really helps to immerse the reader. This is a fantastic book, chilling, spooky, amazingly descriptive. I love it!
Nothing to say about this, the writing quality is great. The characters and the settings are depicted very well giving color to this great story. The story seems to promise a grand plot as some vague hints are thrown here and there. I really want to know how the author will unfold this new interesting world. Great job.
I'm leaving my review now even though I'm still near the beginning. And, despite the (deserving) 5 Stars, I'm in two minds about the whole thing. As a writer: I hate it. It's so damn good and I hate it. I mean where does David get off writing so well? *sigh* As a reader: Everyone on this platform should be made to read it. It's got a rocketing-good start. The first line is liftoff, and by the end of the first chapter David has reached the stratosphere. I'm certain that by the end of the book, we'll be on a faster-than-light speed journey to the edges of the universe. It's so damn enjoyable and Zack is such a wonderful narrator. You really deserve a bunch of votes for this and, when I have some free, you're at the top of my list.
The main character is very unique and fun to follow along with. The story's pace and writing quality are both top-notch love it! The author has established the world background quite well as well.
Wow, a signed published work in the flesh! This novel was fun and light to read. I am deeply happy to have such an experience. The author was a veteran already and to the new reader! please do check this out! You will enjoy it and not be dismayed.
Ok. So this is amazing! The main character's personality is so fun that I'd be fine with just a monologue, instead of introducing other characters. I am in love with his inner thoughts. The story is also interesting and the writing quality is incredibly good. I will definitely continue reading! Nice!
Okay so this novel, top notch! I got hooked from literally the first paragraph, the idea behind the story is really captivating, likeable main character and an awesome setting. You totally deserve 5 stars XD Keep it up!
Very quickly from the start, the author grabs you and refuses to let you go. Using a delicate combination of humor, great character development and Skillful writing, one finds themselves refusing to put down the novel. Truly and incredible and captivating work! Its obvious much much effort and dedication was poured into the novel! Check it out if you have not already.