I don't understand how novels like this get so much attention when they are objectively garbage. Yes, I said it: objectively. The quality of prose reads like a 15 year old has picked up their pen for the first time and decided to jot down whatever came to mind. There's no flair, no personality, and no fun to what's being put down. The world building seemed... Okay ? I didn't get far into it due to the abysmal quality of writing, but it seemed they had an idea when creating their story. Overall, this is a HARD pass.
Can't be helped o.o
"Like I said, I'm not travelling another step alongside a rotting corpse."
New World's End
Fantasy · TailsOfHope
Thank you for all your support! Your readership is treasured to me :)
Odd but still not showing up :(
Thanks, heh. Did my best!
Nightfall
New World's End
Fantasy · TailsOfHope
[Before] is from the time before the MC reincarnated. You can actually go back and read all the [Before] sections and they'll be a separate story that makes sense on their own :) The number next to it is his age.
[36, Before]
New World's End
Fantasy · TailsOfHope
In this case life 'flashing' refers to the term 'flashing before your eyes' which is a commonly described phenomenon when someone is about to die. The MC is saying that the supposed 'flash' wasn't a flash at all, and actually happened over the course of a couple of weeks, and because life was going so fast he never even noticed it happening.
(I think life 'flashing' before you wasn't the right way to describe it. After all, it wasn't something quick like a flash. It was slow. Much too slow. Probably why I didn't notice it amidst the bustle of life.)
New World's End
Fantasy · TailsOfHope
Perhaps the emotion of Chapter One didn't come across correctly, but in this case, it is 'wonder' as in 'awe' as opposed to 'shock' or 'curiosity'.
Ushered out through splendid halls, adorned with silken tapestry and rich red carpets, I felt - for the first time since waking up in a new body - wonder. It was real. This place, these people. The world seemed ripped straight from a fantasy story.
New World's End
Fantasy · TailsOfHope
Though stories are subjective to enjoyment, I've got a lot of experience writing for businesses so I can certainly give advice on structure, and grammar. Though, one thing you can't get enough of is bouncing ideas. So, we can always help each other by providing a different perspective on something ^.^
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original New World's End
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-- Reborn into a dying world. Forced to fight an impossible fight -- Middle-aged, overweight, and alcoholic; an insurance salesman dies surrounded by strangers beneath the cold emblem of his company. Beyond the darkness of death, the man awakens in a cabin deep in the woods. His body is young and spritely. His voice is bright. Impossibly, he is young again in the body of a sixteen-year-old boy. Given a second chance in a strange, new world, he resolves to give this life his all. But annihilation lies just over the horizon. Can this world be saved, or will its people and land be consumed by an insatiable, and eternal hunger?13 Chs 29 Collections
It's clear that there is so much passion in the author's work and I find the writing style is really unique for Webnovel. The guide at the start is interesting and shows how much thought is going into this piece. The characters introduced also feel interesting and unique.
Exodus: The Valiant Chronicles
Fantasy · thewinterwriter