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Una gran historia , una de las pocas que puedo decir que me ha impresionado , tiene una buena trama y con buenas incógnitas las cuales te animan a seguir leyendo y espero que saques más capitulos de esta historia
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More updates pls. I liked it a lot I hope outside the island there are herbivour pokemon and it's revealed the mc was just in a weird unnatural research. And also I hope he becomes more trustful of eva
Great read. Thank you for the hard work. I'm pretty bummed you left it at such a cliffhanger, but thank you for writing this. If you ever decide to pick this back up again, please let me know!
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Ngl imma be hella mad if you don’t continue to make this fanfic like fr you were blessed by the gods to make this masterpiece
the first chapters is copy of another story then the plot seems like a Chinese third rate story .. the Pokémon is very small when born but for some reason they are very smart... plus the just born pokemon is like young masters no wonder he dropped
Literally a pokemon knockoff of that Custom demon system novel. 1. same setting (like literally felt like they just copied and pasted) 2. Mc refused to use some of his skills until later on for some reason 3. Mc decided to fight high level pokemon instead of grinding the lower tier ones so yeah he isn’t smart 4. It’s a cultivation wuxia young master talking pokemon ff so get ready for that 5. Its a decent novel if you shut half your brain off so give it a try if it’s your thing Peace ✌️
hey man i just got to say you have got me hooked with the world the twists on pokemon the charecters the battles the system the lore everything is just exellent man i love this story and keep up the good work man.also this was posted after fineshing chapter 56.till next time signed by your self proclaimed biggest fan necromancertech999
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Found this story on ff.net when it only had upto the MC hatching. I found this app not too long ago and well, it has a lot more chapters now! I enjoyed the story back then and still enjoy it now. I only wish I knew why this story feels a little bit off to me. there's one thing missing, just wish I knew what. Besides that, this is an awesome story that fits well into my very strict criteria.
are you still writing cause I would like to know to keep it in my library or not cause really it's been 7 months. so can you please let me know
I really wish the Author would give his fans/readers an update on what's happening. it's been 3 months since there's been an update and it's kinda weird to drop a story this good😤😤
Always weird people to add waifus and destroy my experience reading history ................................. .... ..................................
A better name than ren would be apopis If i remember correctly it was a snake in a mythology Maybe it already changed because i havent read everything yet But great Novel keep it uP
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Continua por favor 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
great mistery and gives the author many questions. its not straightfoward because the main character is just trying to survive as he slowly discovers where he is or whats happening around him. I hope the story continues and keeps answering these questions.
its a great story but I feel like the fact that they can only contain a certain type of aura ruins it just my opinion still a good story but not for people like me
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Actually an excellent story and a great twist on pokemon. I started reading being very sceptical but I love this story I only hope that it starts updating once again.
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a different perspective of the pokemon world and not only that, the mc is a pokemon, it also starts of in a good introduction, it has good grammar, good grasp of knowledge. this ff novel has lots of potential the update is in the slow side but good enough to read give this ffnovel a read
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Buena historia por ahora espero que siga asi................................................... .............................................................. .................
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Hey Guys, Shameless Author TeaDragon1 here. I think its only right that I give my perfect sory 5 stars! On a more serious note, please comment and review my fanfiction. Your feedback will help me continue to improve my writing and keep my motivation levels up! Thank you once again for the support! -TeaDragon1.
Una gran historia , una de las pocas que puedo decir que me ha impresionado , tiene una buena trama y con buenas incógnitas las cuales te animan a seguir leyendo y espero que saques más capitulos de esta historia
Reveal Spoiler More updates pls. I liked it a lot I hope outside the island there are herbivour pokemon and it's revealed the mc was just in a weird unnatural research. And also I hope he becomes more trustful of eva
Great read. Thank you for the hard work. I'm pretty bummed you left it at such a cliffhanger, but thank you for writing this. If you ever decide to pick this back up again, please let me know!
Reveal Spoiler Ngl imma be hella mad if you don’t continue to make this fanfic like fr you were blessed by the gods to make this masterpiece
the first chapters is copy of another story then the plot seems like a Chinese third rate story .. the Pokémon is very small when born but for some reason they are very smart... plus the just born pokemon is like young masters no wonder he dropped
Literally a pokemon knockoff of that Custom demon system novel. 1. same setting (like literally felt like they just copied and pasted) 2. Mc refused to use some of his skills until later on for some reason 3. Mc decided to fight high level pokemon instead of grinding the lower tier ones so yeah he isn’t smart 4. It’s a cultivation wuxia young master talking pokemon ff so get ready for that 5. Its a decent novel if you shut half your brain off so give it a try if it’s your thing Peace ✌️
hey man i just got to say you have got me hooked with the world the twists on pokemon the charecters the battles the system the lore everything is just exellent man i love this story and keep up the good work man.also this was posted after fineshing chapter 56.till next time signed by your self proclaimed biggest fan necromancertech999
. ............... Cthtb ffnhttjtjtngcfuufffghjkhfgycoxogzigxizifzi🐮Iclod GXGXIIXIFX"further*RZIZRZFZIFIIF*î Zjfzz zfhf, kfzggxziffi, ifxffxf🐭
Reveal Spoiler Found this story on ff.net when it only had upto the MC hatching. I found this app not too long ago and well, it has a lot more chapters now! I enjoyed the story back then and still enjoy it now. I only wish I knew why this story feels a little bit off to me. there's one thing missing, just wish I knew what. Besides that, this is an awesome story that fits well into my very strict criteria.
are you still writing cause I would like to know to keep it in my library or not cause really it's been 7 months. so can you please let me know
I really wish the Author would give his fans/readers an update on what's happening. it's been 3 months since there's been an update and it's kinda weird to drop a story this good😤😤
Always weird people to add waifus and destroy my experience reading history ................................. .... ..................................
A better name than ren would be apopis If i remember correctly it was a snake in a mythology Maybe it already changed because i havent read everything yet But great Novel keep it uP
Reveal Spoiler Continua por favor 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
great mistery and gives the author many questions. its not straightfoward because the main character is just trying to survive as he slowly discovers where he is or whats happening around him. I hope the story continues and keeps answering these questions.
its a great story but I feel like the fact that they can only contain a certain type of aura ruins it just my opinion still a good story but not for people like me
Reveal Spoiler Simplesmente Ótimo. Simplesmente Ótimo. Simplesmente Ótimo. Simplesmente Ótimo. Simplesmente Ótimo. Simplesmente Ótimo. Simplesmente Ótimo. Simplesmente Ótimo. Simplesmente Ótimo. Simplesmente Ótimo.Simplesmente Ótimo. Simplesmente Ótimo. Simplesmente Ótimo. Simplesmente Ótimo. Simplesmente Ótimo.
Actually an excellent story and a great twist on pokemon. I started reading being very sceptical but I love this story I only hope that it starts updating once again.
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a different perspective of the pokemon world and not only that, the mc is a pokemon, it also starts of in a good introduction, it has good grammar, good grasp of knowledge. this ff novel has lots of potential the update is in the slow side but good enough to read give this ffnovel a read
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Buena historia por ahora espero que siga asi................................................... .............................................................. .................
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GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD
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Hey Guys, Shameless Author TeaDragon1 here. I think its only right that I give my perfect sory 5 stars! On a more serious note, please comment and review my fanfiction. Your feedback will help me continue to improve my writing and keep my motivation levels up! Thank you once again for the support! -TeaDragon1.