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Más más más más más más más más más Actualización!!!!(no importa lo q te critican si te gusta sigue haciéndolo y también va a ver personas q le va gustar tu trabajo)
the story is good, and fun to read too bad the updating are kinda unstable, kinda sad the mc never trued the beautiful beast i kinda like that martial art it was very brutal.
Alguien que me diga si mejora la escritura que no pase del segundo cap mis ojos no pudieron más. Pls lo agradecería mucho o si no una recomendación parecida a esta
Awesome awesome Awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome. Well written is a great story and fan fic. Perfect combination of Baki and Kengan.👍🙀🤩
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I really like Baki FF but this kind of author writing is just turn off for me . too much nonsense conversation on system and rather than helping MC stronger the system is limiting MC strength instead .
hey author san! this is a great story soo far. but you should fix your grammar and writing quality a bit or hire a better writer to fix some error.
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hey dud if you get like 10 trillion points per person you save while dieing would all other people who save multiple people while dieing or almost dieng have alot more and if you get 10 trillion for every live you saved historical figures that saved thousands or more lives be like instantly be godlike sorry for bad speel
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Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
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It has a rough start but it get better and better and you can see the writer is getting better. I think the best part of the story is the combat. The system kind of feel unnecessary at times.
Am a massive fan of bake and ashura,but this fanfiction is the worst ones I've read soo far. problems: 1- the mc is a shi# show,tge mentality and the way he is progressing is absurd 2- the side characters are drafted as kindergarten characters 3- the original mc "Baki" is made out to be a dumb,stupid brute that has no common sense( am a massive baki fan) it irked me to read this 4- the system is way to overpowered etc hes learned and mastered skills of multiple ashura characters and he's not even midway through his teens. 5- there way more I could add but can't be bothered to list
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The human limit is stupid for me... Just look at Oliver biscuit, Yujiro and pickle. I can say that all three have different strength with Pickle 1st,Biscuit 2nd and Yujiro 3rd.but it didn't mean Yujiro weak, it just that his technique is stronger and honestly, at their level, even a normal slap can destroy your inner organ... So in my opinion, 100 as human limit is stupid and you even make it all the same. I vote for no limit author.. If you want to make them reach 100,its OK. But throw away the d@mn limit because its stupid. Just look at mc having 40 as limit.. At 14,Baki already sweep the floor with some of the stronger fighter around. Can you believe that when you put the limit as 40?.. Man, it's not a game. Human can be stronger and faster depending on how they train, just like Yujiro who strong in technique comprehension and offence(Not all but I'm quoting his 2 strongest point) while Biscuit is strong in strength and endurance. So, no limit on power because it will make everyone having 100 as max limit. Then why do you train then? And don't throw me the bullsh1t of "Yujiro stronger in technique or sh1t".. Fvck me.
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this is really good man, i haven't seen any Kure clan FF out there and this is the best so far. grammar could use some work but it always happens with new stories so i dont really care, i hope you dont drop/lose motivation keep it up.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
It was an interest story. The mc's relationships with the main characters were well established and developed, allowing for good future development. The plot followed accurately the canon, and the protagonist having a harem was well establised, and is a favor point in my point of view. However, the protagonist has little to non personal development, and anything he tries always seems absurdly easy for him. I recommend you to read it if you want an isekai anime story with an overpowered protagonist who travels through the canonical plot and enjoys life with a harem. I don't recommend it if you want a protagonist who develops throughout the story, with a cunning and intelligent personality (maybe even evil), and who has 1 to 0 love interests. Also, the author has abandoned the fanfic, so unless you don't mind seeing an unfinished story, don't read it.
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Más más más más más más más más más Actualización!!!!(no importa lo q te critican si te gusta sigue haciéndolo y también va a ver personas q le va gustar tu trabajo)
the story is good, and fun to read too bad the updating are kinda unstable, kinda sad the mc never trued the beautiful beast i kinda like that martial art it was very brutal.
Alguien que me diga si mejora la escritura que no pase del segundo cap mis ojos no pudieron más. Pls lo agradecería mucho o si no una recomendación parecida a esta
Awesome awesome Awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome. Well written is a great story and fan fic. Perfect combination of Baki and Kengan.👍🙀🤩
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I really like Baki FF but this kind of author writing is just turn off for me . too much nonsense conversation on system and rather than helping MC stronger the system is limiting MC strength instead .
hey author san! this is a great story soo far. but you should fix your grammar and writing quality a bit or hire a better writer to fix some error.
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hey dud if you get like 10 trillion points per person you save while dieing would all other people who save multiple people while dieing or almost dieng have alot more and if you get 10 trillion for every live you saved historical figures that saved thousands or more lives be like instantly be godlike sorry for bad speel
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Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
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It has a rough start but it get better and better and you can see the writer is getting better. I think the best part of the story is the combat. The system kind of feel unnecessary at times.
Am a massive fan of bake and ashura,but this fanfiction is the worst ones I've read soo far. problems: 1- the mc is a shi# show,tge mentality and the way he is progressing is absurd 2- the side characters are drafted as kindergarten characters 3- the original mc "Baki" is made out to be a dumb,stupid brute that has no common sense( am a massive baki fan) it irked me to read this 4- the system is way to overpowered etc hes learned and mastered skills of multiple ashura characters and he's not even midway through his teens. 5- there way more I could add but can't be bothered to list
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The human limit is stupid for me... Just look at Oliver biscuit, Yujiro and pickle. I can say that all three have different strength with Pickle 1st,Biscuit 2nd and Yujiro 3rd.but it didn't mean Yujiro weak, it just that his technique is stronger and honestly, at their level, even a normal slap can destroy your inner organ... So in my opinion, 100 as human limit is stupid and you even make it all the same. I vote for no limit author.. If you want to make them reach 100,its OK. But throw away the d@mn limit because its stupid. Just look at mc having 40 as limit.. At 14,Baki already sweep the floor with some of the stronger fighter around. Can you believe that when you put the limit as 40?.. Man, it's not a game. Human can be stronger and faster depending on how they train, just like Yujiro who strong in technique comprehension and offence(Not all but I'm quoting his 2 strongest point) while Biscuit is strong in strength and endurance. So, no limit on power because it will make everyone having 100 as max limit. Then why do you train then? And don't throw me the bullsh1t of "Yujiro stronger in technique or sh1t".. Fvck me.
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this is really good man, i haven't seen any Kure clan FF out there and this is the best so far. grammar could use some work but it always happens with new stories so i dont really care, i hope you dont drop/lose motivation keep it up.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
It was an interest story. The mc's relationships with the main characters were well established and developed, allowing for good future development. The plot followed accurately the canon, and the protagonist having a harem was well establised, and is a favor point in my point of view. However, the protagonist has little to non personal development, and anything he tries always seems absurdly easy for him. I recommend you to read it if you want an isekai anime story with an overpowered protagonist who travels through the canonical plot and enjoys life with a harem. I don't recommend it if you want a protagonist who develops throughout the story, with a cunning and intelligent personality (maybe even evil), and who has 1 to 0 love interests. Also, the author has abandoned the fanfic, so unless you don't mind seeing an unfinished story, don't read it.