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you should made Baki system in Kengan Ashura instead.. Baki.. that was stupid, there's no clear goal.. only to become strongest.. entire anime only beating someone..
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Still not reading it but... are you going to add Strongest Disciple Kenichi on the Universe? Ignore the 5-star. This is just a fan-fic no need to put your feelings on it
Amazing story! Wil you include the pickel ark? Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it
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I love baki. I love fighting so I like this fanfiction......................................................................................
I'm a big fan of Kengan Asura and Baki and I hope you can show the magnificence of these stories, it's hard to convey it in writing therefore, good luck and all the best author.
Not many Baki and kengan Ashura Fanfics out there so keep it coming, Don't drop it please. I love everything your doing with this Fanfic, especially the character being from the Wu/Kure clan family. They got some badass eyes especially there Guihen ability where you can unleash your full potential. If people don't like your stuff then tell them straight, some fanfics are not for them. You write about something u like not what other people like. Keep going strong Author 👍👍👍
Unfortunately I didn't like this at all . Reasons: *I do not like the MC thinks ( too childish ) . *Too many " Time skips " ... In many ocasions it's too forced . *System nor properly explained+ emojis which adds to the absurd try of the author to make this more " visual " . * I do not like when the " system " has a mind of it's own and has a humoristic side which is nonsense as it's only a TOOL. *Many lines repeat themselves making the reading very unconfortable. * Unnecesary text * This is the worst of all for me : I'm 99% sure author is using the chinese cultivation bullsht idea. For me cultivation is the worst cancerous ff that could ever be . At least add a specification that this is cultivation so I don't waste time. The author tried to do something good but adding so many small things made a huge mess that I unfortunately didn't enjoy and will stop on the 6 chapter-
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Hello readers hope you have a nice day of course I gave myself a lot of five stars it maybe biased but it's myself hope you enjoy my story and thanks for providing a review
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you should made Baki system in Kengan Ashura instead.. Baki.. that was stupid, there's no clear goal.. only to become strongest.. entire anime only beating someone..
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Still not reading it but... are you going to add Strongest Disciple Kenichi on the Universe? Ignore the 5-star. This is just a fan-fic no need to put your feelings on it
Amazing story! Wil you include the pickel ark? Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it
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I love baki. I love fighting so I like this fanfiction......................................................................................
I'm a big fan of Kengan Asura and Baki and I hope you can show the magnificence of these stories, it's hard to convey it in writing therefore, good luck and all the best author.
Not many Baki and kengan Ashura Fanfics out there so keep it coming, Don't drop it please. I love everything your doing with this Fanfic, especially the character being from the Wu/Kure clan family. They got some badass eyes especially there Guihen ability where you can unleash your full potential. If people don't like your stuff then tell them straight, some fanfics are not for them. You write about something u like not what other people like. Keep going strong Author 👍👍👍
Unfortunately I didn't like this at all . Reasons: *I do not like the MC thinks ( too childish ) . *Too many " Time skips " ... In many ocasions it's too forced . *System nor properly explained+ emojis which adds to the absurd try of the author to make this more " visual " . * I do not like when the " system " has a mind of it's own and has a humoristic side which is nonsense as it's only a TOOL. *Many lines repeat themselves making the reading very unconfortable. * Unnecesary text * This is the worst of all for me : I'm 99% sure author is using the chinese cultivation bullsht idea. For me cultivation is the worst cancerous ff that could ever be . At least add a specification that this is cultivation so I don't waste time. The author tried to do something good but adding so many small things made a huge mess that I unfortunately didn't enjoy and will stop on the 6 chapter-
I love it \(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ \(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥
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is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?
Hello readers hope you have a nice day of course I gave myself a lot of five stars it maybe biased but it's myself hope you enjoy my story and thanks for providing a review
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