Fox in an inverted world

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lJeDl

Definitely one of the best novels I have read in webnovel. Although the writing and grammar are not very good, this novel is very original and I have never seen anything like it, and now that I've read to the latest chaper(Chp 9) I'm craving for more! 9/10 - Very good F*ck it! Since he has the same surname as me(De Leon) lets make it a 9.5/10 :)

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InternetSaint

It started out very good but around chapter 80 the story just gets nonsensical and directionless. There is no goal or reason for the things that the MC does. He for example helps some human because that human has heard of a legend that MAYBE there is a way to help is parents and for that reason alone he goes on a suicide and the MC who doesn't even know the guy or has any connection and has way more important things to do during that time, for no reason suddenly decides to risk everything and follows and carries that guy and constantly risks his life just so they can go to even more dangerous areas of a pocked dimension.

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Marmora

My honest opinion and what I noticed, the story has minimal errors in terms of writing, it doesn't get in the way of reading, the release of a week can bother some, but due to the quality of the story, it's not possible to remove the merit just because of the capitols delay (I prefer quality over quantity). The narrative isn't bad, it's good. And about the story, volume 1 was pretty standard, nothing special that I remember, but volume 2, I thought it was very good, it was wonderful. But as everything that goes up will also have to come down, we arrived at volume 3 which is horrible and dark, not because of the writing but the course that the story took, and instead of the author changing the course he continued, if you don't believe me can you read the comments on the chapters of the third volume, do you want the reasons? The protagonist's behavior becomes irrational and a new character is as useful as Sakura. People can come and say that volume 3 is to develop the character, yes, but you don't develop a character by irritating your reader, quite the opposite, you have to develop it by making your reader feel empathy for the protagonist and not anger. But it's no use saying that the protagonist had his reasons, the reasons are not clear for several capitolos making their attitudes irrational, doing things that normal people wouldn't do.

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IsekaiAnimes

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uWu_69

a good Novel, it has yandere and that is most important thing for a man of culture like me[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Dennis_Bb

I want to see more lemon moments between Arthur and older womans. Children are a little childish so please write more about older womans. Thank you very much

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SR_2027

OP MC(future) - ✅ Good drama- ✅ Harem(don't know about love interest but) - ✅ Good setup and background- ✅ character development- ✅ WHAT ELSE DO YOU WANT? JUST READ IT!

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Judgement_Bonk

Although the grammar and spelling kinda bad it does not make it bad This book is my second best book i have read in webnovel its scary how it literally makes me an addict wanting for more chapters lol 🤣🤣🤣🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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garou

The only thing lacking is stability of updates. Of course I understand that good stories need time yet I will give 4.8....................................

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AkoPrimero

Very original and picturesque story, I love it. I would say that the main thing in this story will be the development of both characters and general and the originality of having two reincarnates

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Eroos

historia interesante sin el tipico trama, aunque aparte del prota veo casi todos los personajes vacios y la verdad leyendo tu otra novela encuentro que podria ser mejor, no deja del todo insatisfecho, pero si me gustaria saber si esto tendra +18 ademas ******o ? tambien me gustaria si pudieras un poco mas del desarollo mundial pues dices cosas muy vagas en si pd seria genial si agregaras mas historia aunque sea a la madre pues solo sabemos que existe y aparte de unos pocos dialogos no sabemos nada mas :c

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Chummy

it started nice that there others reincarnators but having his father reincarnate is not cup of tea for me and wasting mc time for his father who have now family is ridiculous he didn't even consider go back to his new home Sigh so disappointing i dropped this after chapter 80 maybe you didn't even care but it started good specially he was special and get lot girls

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Ryohan

The story of this novel is quite interesting for me, although the writing still needs to be improved, but it doesn't matter to me. this novel is good

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Marcel_0523

I like the novel feels like something new. Pro: nice characters Interesting Story yanderes big + for me Contra:Way to many he/she/we/you and others mistakes really easy to fix to improve the reading experience. A bit slow progress/age growing for me. Overall i keep reading the story,but author maybe led some one help you?many chapters could be easy fixed in less than 10 minits.

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SouubWay06

Good book straight up fire best novel ive seen some translation issues but that’s it I hope you can make the chapter update more though but that’s the only problem I have good luck author👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼🙇🏽🙇🏽🙇🏽🙇🏽

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Micah_Harris

I like the premise but you dragged out the build up to the party fro way too long. It shouldn't take 20 chapters to finally get to the party. The awakening was dragged out way too long, and every once an in a while you go on a tangent about his past thats not needed.