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Write a review[note to self] Dropped. Cuz Grammar and writing quality was a let down. The premise is good, but it could have been executed better. Did not like the narration either.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Nice story...........................*********.......... @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@................
Probably one of the worst novels i've read, thousands of years old mc but falls in love with a teenage girl, the mc can't even control his emotional behavior despite being so old, furthermore please correct your grammar, It's he for male and she for female.
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I'm sorry I really tried I really really tried to read this but it's just so bad work on grammar a little get your story straight then I'll start reading again
I GET IT!! I GET IT!! HAHAHA I think I get it... The biggest misunderstanding of all haha!! I won't spoil anymore. I almost drop this book because of it but then, haha. The author doesn't want to explain it so I won't spoil anymore.. This is already my second review lol. But the grammar still need improvement though. Hope this won't drop.
Ignore me .I've come to support my friend. ╮(╯_╰)╭ (⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■) (ಠ_ಠ)>⌐■-■ ... Good luck, Entity, continue to write!!!
Reveal SpoilerWhile the story is not bad, it lacks direction, consistency, and quality excitement. The mc does not have much of a goal or task that he is actively moving towards. Not to mention the many contradictions for the mc's behavior, for being a over several hundred years, he has the emotional fluctuation of a teenage girl on her period. As for the fight scenes, you might as well skim them, they are not great and often confusing (there was one fight in game against a team of rangers- 2 melee and 2 range with the same weapons and no distinguishing characteristics between them- so one of them seemed to go super saiyan and the other was just there. he also seemed a bit pretentious with giving the characters a bola as a weapon)
The grammar is some of the worst I’ve ever read and I’m hoping it eventually gets better. The story has great potential, however in the first two chapters it’s completely garbage.
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Learn the diffrence between He and she FFS I get that sentence can be wrong grammer can be misleading but I am on ch 30 there is still same mistake annoying AF anyway thank for the effort
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You limit the abilities of the mc. Like wtf, why did you even do that?? He is ridiculously strong but you slowed down his growth in game by 90%. You didn't even spare his experience acquisition. You made one of the richest person on the planet mc's slave but you can't even make the mc ride a care to school?? Creativeness man. Do you know that word? Be creative but don't exaggerate it. Dropping it.
Reveal Spoilergood story so far. Author I'm curious I'd you need a beta reader/Editor? I'm good with English vocab and Grammer. I dont need any money. Please feel free to contact on discord, Fenris#6876
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God awful writing quality. The story itself is pretty much written by a child. The author is tunneling the story and not really expanding on the world too much. There are tons of mistakes that are so easy to spot that it makes reading it hard.
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Overall the story is realy nice, but I got some coplains... Firstly the status that shows up quite often is annoyning, Its hard read somehow and kinda too big. Other coplains that I got is the name changing, like when Vladimir interacts with someone others call him with this Second identiny while when he speaks he uses this In-game Name. (Dont get me started with thouse @@, I mean...what are those?!) But if you ignore those its realy nice novel
Who the hell is Keiji!?... Isn't the mc name Vlad and Scott?... I don't mind about those naming sense(Klyzer and the other)..... Well the plot is good at least(Even thought he was supposed to be old monster but those cliche... whatever).. also the heroine development was too hastened... Overall it's good... just good no more or less... In my personal opinion
............................................................................. Anyo! Nice book Bro! I love it! though the first chapters were boring. But later it was nice. Salamat Sayo for your Hard work. Hoping for more in the future.
The author is owing me 70% shares of his resturant xD and my review of the author is demented however his novel is so good well the writing quality better than most new novel awesome man.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
All i am asking for is more chapters please ............................... xbxbfncncnfncjfnfj
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It felt like a typical vampire story at first, but then it turned out to be a time-shift case, idea is kind of uniquely hidden inside the story- and I can feel there is many mysteries hidden inside this plot!
I love the overall story plot. I dunno but there is something about vampire and witches stories that is beyond our imagination and every time when I read one I get to know the characters more. This story has a potential to reach more readers and It's a must read I will say.
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
this story, but I have no idea why it stopped at 114th chapter . Did the author drop it? will this continue to update? I sincerely hope this novel gets more chapters while maintaining its quality thus far
[note to self] Dropped. Cuz Grammar and writing quality was a let down. The premise is good, but it could have been executed better. Did not like the narration either.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Nice story...........................*********.......... @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@................
Probably one of the worst novels i've read, thousands of years old mc but falls in love with a teenage girl, the mc can't even control his emotional behavior despite being so old, furthermore please correct your grammar, It's he for male and she for female.
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I'm sorry I really tried I really really tried to read this but it's just so bad work on grammar a little get your story straight then I'll start reading again
I GET IT!! I GET IT!! HAHAHA I think I get it... The biggest misunderstanding of all haha!! I won't spoil anymore. I almost drop this book because of it but then, haha. The author doesn't want to explain it so I won't spoil anymore.. This is already my second review lol. But the grammar still need improvement though. Hope this won't drop.
Ignore me .I've come to support my friend. ╮(╯_╰)╭ (⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■)(⌐■-■) (ಠ_ಠ)>⌐■-■ ... Good luck, Entity, continue to write!!!
Reveal SpoilerWhile the story is not bad, it lacks direction, consistency, and quality excitement. The mc does not have much of a goal or task that he is actively moving towards. Not to mention the many contradictions for the mc's behavior, for being a over several hundred years, he has the emotional fluctuation of a teenage girl on her period. As for the fight scenes, you might as well skim them, they are not great and often confusing (there was one fight in game against a team of rangers- 2 melee and 2 range with the same weapons and no distinguishing characteristics between them- so one of them seemed to go super saiyan and the other was just there. he also seemed a bit pretentious with giving the characters a bola as a weapon)
The grammar is some of the worst I’ve ever read and I’m hoping it eventually gets better. The story has great potential, however in the first two chapters it’s completely garbage.
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Learn the diffrence between He and she FFS I get that sentence can be wrong grammer can be misleading but I am on ch 30 there is still same mistake annoying AF anyway thank for the effort
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Reveal Spoiler--------------------------------------------------------------------------Ну такое себе. Не для меня. Выражает только раздражение и негодования.
You limit the abilities of the mc. Like wtf, why did you even do that?? He is ridiculously strong but you slowed down his growth in game by 90%. You didn't even spare his experience acquisition. You made one of the richest person on the planet mc's slave but you can't even make the mc ride a care to school?? Creativeness man. Do you know that word? Be creative but don't exaggerate it. Dropping it.
Reveal Spoilergood story so far. Author I'm curious I'd you need a beta reader/Editor? I'm good with English vocab and Grammer. I dont need any money. Please feel free to contact on discord, Fenris#6876
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God awful writing quality. The story itself is pretty much written by a child. The author is tunneling the story and not really expanding on the world too much. There are tons of mistakes that are so easy to spot that it makes reading it hard.
❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️
Overall the story is realy nice, but I got some coplains... Firstly the status that shows up quite often is annoyning, Its hard read somehow and kinda too big. Other coplains that I got is the name changing, like when Vladimir interacts with someone others call him with this Second identiny while when he speaks he uses this In-game Name. (Dont get me started with thouse @@, I mean...what are those?!) But if you ignore those its realy nice novel
Who the hell is Keiji!?... Isn't the mc name Vlad and Scott?... I don't mind about those naming sense(Klyzer and the other)..... Well the plot is good at least(Even thought he was supposed to be old monster but those cliche... whatever).. also the heroine development was too hastened... Overall it's good... just good no more or less... In my personal opinion
............................................................................. Anyo! Nice book Bro! I love it! though the first chapters were boring. But later it was nice. Salamat Sayo for your Hard work. Hoping for more in the future.
The author is owing me 70% shares of his resturant xD and my review of the author is demented however his novel is so good well the writing quality better than most new novel awesome man.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
All i am asking for is more chapters please ............................... xbxbfncncnfncjfnfj
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It felt like a typical vampire story at first, but then it turned out to be a time-shift case, idea is kind of uniquely hidden inside the story- and I can feel there is many mysteries hidden inside this plot!
I love the overall story plot. I dunno but there is something about vampire and witches stories that is beyond our imagination and every time when I read one I get to know the characters more. This story has a potential to reach more readers and It's a must read I will say.
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
this story, but I have no idea why it stopped at 114th chapter . Did the author drop it? will this continue to update? I sincerely hope this novel gets more chapters while maintaining its quality thus far