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I am not going to explain many things because mainly I am fed up. I've spent the day looking for a good dimensional group to enjoy, but they were all rubbish. All but this one. It's literally simple, and you have no need to focus on forced and illogical romances and spin the novel around conquest. There are anime things like the exaggerated death aura around the mother or the fact that everyone makes a mess when she cooks and looks for excuses not to eat. Contrary to others, this is basically a short filler and the world does not revolve around it. Simplifying things; -because I thought to keep it simple- this fanfic is much, much better than the other dimensional group fanfiction that I have been reading on Webnovel. The author does not have the need to narrate everything as if it were an anime to make it interesting. (I'm saying this because I'm at a stage where I want to see realistic things, and anime or manga lately are the same filthy exaggerated comedy.)
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love it, hope author continues ................................................................................................................................................
great gem has appeared, let's see if gem can maintain its shine .........................,...................................................
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I don't know what to say, but O author at least please don't stop this novel, please But why if the comment must be 140 words? Wait! Is it 140 letters? I don't know and I don't care
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Please continue this novel and don't ever drop it, the story is good anti-cliché because the MC is not an admin and I hope one of the missions comes to the world of ATG or MGA
A new style of dimensional chat group which is mixed with anime/movies/books as chat group members, usually it was anime characters and this is a new concept but still thumbs up to me. This time MC was not an Admin of Dimensional Chat group which is commonly used by the fanfic authors
interesting!!! this story is good , so here i gave you 5.0/5.0 for your imagination , keep it up Author!! and More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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plz don't stop ❤❤🙏 the writing is good, the development is great, and the character design is awesome. Yamamoto is number 5 in my favourite list and white is number 8.
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Love the ideas of the story...the MC has a unique power unlike other fics that just copy the powers of other characters..the grammar is alright and the interactions between characters is good...overall good job and keep it up
it's good just needs more chapters. the more chapters you get out the better it doesn't even have to be good chapter. One chapter a day isn't enough we need more
why cant i vote? and Mr. Author not trying to be rude but can i ask you questio and please be honest. is this your original work? or translation? if its translation i would like the to know the source if its original then im going to say nice job thx for your time and work
This story is going great so far. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍. why is there a word limit to post.
Hello, Author-san here. Just like every other shameless author, I too will be giving myself a 5-stars review. This novel was inspired by the book I read... Don't remember the name, but it was some Chinese novel. Anyways, If there is a mistake in the chapters or I have misunderstood the timelines, then please message me in the comment section. If you want me to continue this novel, then give it a 5-stars review. (shameless.jpg)
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I am not going to explain many things because mainly I am fed up. I've spent the day looking for a good dimensional group to enjoy, but they were all rubbish. All but this one. It's literally simple, and you have no need to focus on forced and illogical romances and spin the novel around conquest. There are anime things like the exaggerated death aura around the mother or the fact that everyone makes a mess when she cooks and looks for excuses not to eat. Contrary to others, this is basically a short filler and the world does not revolve around it. Simplifying things; -because I thought to keep it simple- this fanfic is much, much better than the other dimensional group fanfiction that I have been reading on Webnovel. The author does not have the need to narrate everything as if it were an anime to make it interesting. (I'm saying this because I'm at a stage where I want to see realistic things, and anime or manga lately are the same filthy exaggerated comedy.)
Reveal Spoiler love it, hope author continues ................................................................................................................................................
great gem has appeared, let's see if gem can maintain its shine .........................,...................................................
Please more)))))))) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I don't know what to say, but O author at least please don't stop this novel, please But why if the comment must be 140 words? Wait! Is it 140 letters? I don't know and I don't care
Reveal Spoiler Please continue this novel and don't ever drop it, the story is good anti-cliché because the MC is not an admin and I hope one of the missions comes to the world of ATG or MGA
A new style of dimensional chat group which is mixed with anime/movies/books as chat group members, usually it was anime characters and this is a new concept but still thumbs up to me. This time MC was not an Admin of Dimensional Chat group which is commonly used by the fanfic authors
interesting!!! this story is good , so here i gave you 5.0/5.0 for your imagination , keep it up Author!! and More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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plz don't stop ❤❤🙏 the writing is good, the development is great, and the character design is awesome. Yamamoto is number 5 in my favourite list and white is number 8.
Good, I need more chapters [img = recomendar] [img = recomendar][img = recomendar][img = recomendar][img = recomendar] :=: [img = recomendar][img = recomendar][img = recomendar]
MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!MOAR! GIVE ME MORE!
Reveal Spoiler Great Story 👍👍👍👍👍 Please more!!!!!!!!!!! [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]
Love the ideas of the story...the MC has a unique power unlike other fics that just copy the powers of other characters..the grammar is alright and the interactions between characters is good...overall good job and keep it up
it's good just needs more chapters. the more chapters you get out the better it doesn't even have to be good chapter. One chapter a day isn't enough we need more
why cant i vote? and Mr. Author not trying to be rude but can i ask you questio and please be honest. is this your original work? or translation? if its translation i would like the to know the source if its original then im going to say nice job thx for your time and work
This story is going great so far. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍. why is there a word limit to post.
Hello, Author-san here. Just like every other shameless author, I too will be giving myself a 5-stars review. This novel was inspired by the book I read... Don't remember the name, but it was some Chinese novel. Anyways, If there is a mistake in the chapters or I have misunderstood the timelines, then please message me in the comment section. If you want me to continue this novel, then give it a 5-stars review. (shameless.jpg)
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]