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Heart59

This gets a 5 stars from me! Amazing Job, dear author! So far, i’m enjoying this book and I love itt! Keep up the excellent work! I’m rooting for you!

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star_dreamer

In the beginning I was skeptical and a bit confused, but later I became intrigued and continued reading. Really this book does that to you! Its great, well-written, descriptive. You'll love what the author has in store for you. Do give this story a chance!

4yr
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Easy_Tiger

Really enjoying this story so far. A few issues with grammar aside, this is a highly effective story with interesting characters and nicely developing plot. I may have to seek out the previous book in the series as I was a bit lost during the first chapter, but everything since has been coming together nicely. Good effort!

4yr
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Amateur_Author

Dear Readers, this is the author here. Wanted to wish you all a happy New Year :) Please do vote and drop in your reviews if you have liked the story so far. Thank you and Happy Reading!

4yr
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TaintedMetal

Good read based on everything I see so far. Like the concepts going on for a contemporary romance like this, makes it unique from most others.

4yr
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abcdefgxyz123

A modern novel with magic powers and different planets? Sounds good right. When I read it the first time, I was like I don't know what's happening. But later chapters are intriguing with a tinge of mystery mixed. I didn't understand a lot until I read the other book about what happened to the ray. The good grammar, well written, and nice story building. What else do you need? Try it! I am sure you won't be disappointed.

4yr
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Noor_Alam_Khan

Of course! The writer's pen has established ideas for victory. This is a very fascinating story. Readers are getting accustomed to reading it. The author is climbing the ladder of success.

4yr
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bishop1275

The concept of the story and the characters are interesting. Although, you have a good storyline going on, there are some points where you can improved it, like some issue with the construction of the plots. Overall, I would say that it was a nice read.

4yr
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incarnadine

Interesting premise and characters; there're several grammatical errors and perhaps some improvement on the world background is needed? but all in all very intriguing and a nice read!

4yr
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Noor_Alam_Khan

Fabulous! This is a great novel for Mary Christmas presents. Wow! Best gift to readers. The use of simple language and proverbs reflects the best understanding of the stories in each chapter.

4yr
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Gaureeey

Okay wow, some paragraph lengths are a little longer and there may be deliberate attempts that may hold intact the story later, it is important to leave a few hints or elaboration since that makes the story a little hinged enough for the reader especially ones who dont hold imaginative caliber. Would suggest a re-edit just thoroughly in chapters 6,8,9 and 11 especially! All the best

4yr
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JustLikeWriting777

The plot is really interesting and it definitely gets the reader hooked. I like how everything is so detailed and very well-described. I personally like the main character and her story so I will try the first novel as well!

4yr
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Hyowha

very interesting plot. apart from romance and fantasy, I feel like there's quite mystery too which I quite like! I don't think you should explain more since that is what makes the story ao intruiging! Good luck on your journey of writing

4yr
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Saviour_Ibok_9332

Great work, it is relaxing and very interesting and makes one want to know/read more. The characters are interesting though I feel like the plot is not explaining enogh. This is a good work, keep it up!!!

4yr
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IzannahFrame

Interesting characters and plot. The story is smooth paced. Just give a little more description of the settings or their world background. The word description is easy to understand and that's good. Keep up the nice work author! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

4yr
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Jo_J
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You're doing a great job! The storyline is addictive. I wish you an inspiration and a lot of interesting ideas! Merry Christmas! **. More descriptions abut the Christmas, please ;)

4yr
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priyabolagani

Author of "Tempting My Rented Boyfriend" Novel. The plot of the story is good. When I read Synopsis, I felt since it's a sequel it will be connected a new reader will not be able to connect. but it does not look like a sequel. It is like an independent story. the writing quality is nice. I think the story development should be a little slow-paced. The character design is good. And I hope the author will work on world background more.

4yr
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Dark_Scholars

Interesting premise and nice characterisation, however I believe that the world background should have a little more work done on it. All together it is a good read.

4yr
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Heart59

This gets a 5 stars from me! Amazing Job, dear author! So far, i’m enjoying this book and I love itt! Keep up the excellent work! I’m rooting for you!

3yr
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star_dreamer

In the beginning I was skeptical and a bit confused, but later I became intrigued and continued reading. Really this book does that to you! Its great, well-written, descriptive. You'll love what the author has in store for you. Do give this story a chance!

4yr
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Easy_Tiger

Really enjoying this story so far. A few issues with grammar aside, this is a highly effective story with interesting characters and nicely developing plot. I may have to seek out the previous book in the series as I was a bit lost during the first chapter, but everything since has been coming together nicely. Good effort!

4yr
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Amateur_Author

Dear Readers, this is the author here. Wanted to wish you all a happy New Year :) Please do vote and drop in your reviews if you have liked the story so far. Thank you and Happy Reading!

4yr
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TaintedMetal

Good read based on everything I see so far. Like the concepts going on for a contemporary romance like this, makes it unique from most others.

4yr
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abcdefgxyz123

A modern novel with magic powers and different planets? Sounds good right. When I read it the first time, I was like I don't know what's happening. But later chapters are intriguing with a tinge of mystery mixed. I didn't understand a lot until I read the other book about what happened to the ray. The good grammar, well written, and nice story building. What else do you need? Try it! I am sure you won't be disappointed.

4yr
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Noor_Alam_Khan

Of course! The writer's pen has established ideas for victory. This is a very fascinating story. Readers are getting accustomed to reading it. The author is climbing the ladder of success.

4yr
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bishop1275

The concept of the story and the characters are interesting. Although, you have a good storyline going on, there are some points where you can improved it, like some issue with the construction of the plots. Overall, I would say that it was a nice read.

4yr
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incarnadine

Interesting premise and characters; there're several grammatical errors and perhaps some improvement on the world background is needed? but all in all very intriguing and a nice read!

4yr
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Noor_Alam_Khan

Fabulous! This is a great novel for Mary Christmas presents. Wow! Best gift to readers. The use of simple language and proverbs reflects the best understanding of the stories in each chapter.

4yr
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Gaureeey

Okay wow, some paragraph lengths are a little longer and there may be deliberate attempts that may hold intact the story later, it is important to leave a few hints or elaboration since that makes the story a little hinged enough for the reader especially ones who dont hold imaginative caliber. Would suggest a re-edit just thoroughly in chapters 6,8,9 and 11 especially! All the best

4yr
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JustLikeWriting777

The plot is really interesting and it definitely gets the reader hooked. I like how everything is so detailed and very well-described. I personally like the main character and her story so I will try the first novel as well!

4yr
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Hyowha

very interesting plot. apart from romance and fantasy, I feel like there's quite mystery too which I quite like! I don't think you should explain more since that is what makes the story ao intruiging! Good luck on your journey of writing

4yr
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Saviour_Ibok_9332

Great work, it is relaxing and very interesting and makes one want to know/read more. The characters are interesting though I feel like the plot is not explaining enogh. This is a good work, keep it up!!!

4yr
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IzannahFrame

Interesting characters and plot. The story is smooth paced. Just give a little more description of the settings or their world background. The word description is easy to understand and that's good. Keep up the nice work author! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

4yr
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Jo_J
LV 13 Badge

You're doing a great job! The storyline is addictive. I wish you an inspiration and a lot of interesting ideas! Merry Christmas! **. More descriptions abut the Christmas, please ;)

4yr
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priyabolagani

Author of "Tempting My Rented Boyfriend" Novel. The plot of the story is good. When I read Synopsis, I felt since it's a sequel it will be connected a new reader will not be able to connect. but it does not look like a sequel. It is like an independent story. the writing quality is nice. I think the story development should be a little slow-paced. The character design is good. And I hope the author will work on world background more.

4yr
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Dark_Scholars

Interesting premise and nice characterisation, however I believe that the world background should have a little more work done on it. All together it is a good read.

4yr
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