Transmigration in Against the Gods (AU)

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SCP_0999

author I only had one question is this a harem or non-harem. 😐🙂😲😇😐🙂😲😇😐🙂😲😇😐🙂😲😇😈😐🙂😲😇😈😐🙂😲😇👏😐🙂😲😇😈😐🙂😲😇😈😐🙂😲😈

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Green_Tea_6023

That image is big dong zhong right? You’re a man of culture my friend. Have my stones.

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Complexity

Sigh i'm kinda sad ATG world have so many interesting girl to pick form but author has to pick the one that already married + have 2 kid already I mean... well maybe it work until you see 2 of her son one abit younger then mc other one is probably same age or older then mc imagine these 2 call mc dad in a future that just make me really uncomfortable and not to mention creepy af her husband still alive and well too actually even he a dick but the way author build on mc he doesnt seem like ntr kinda guy There no sign at all it just out of no where mc suddenly interest in this girl ( force af ) if it smut or lots of lemon scene novel i won't even care about mc choice if he did pick the married girl i mean it that kind of novel so i kinda get it and just let it be but this? nah i just can't Reincarnated person from earth met lots of beautiful women but no he doesnt care or not even interest in any girl ( i almost though he's gay in previous life ) until he met with this girl It sad that i waste lots of time reading to this point to realize this

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FAP_Master_

Chap 51.dropp...i feel like reading xinxia novel not fanfic.too much xinxia BS...i feel xinxia strong here....... ......................................

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Evil_Duke

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TheDaoOfBullshit

The author made yun che have a harem while mc just picks a milf that has 2 kids older than him. im so disappointed in this ff this is pretty boring for a binge read and author made scum che kind of a friend/rival im disappointed that this is not even a harem shame on you

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GodofKiyotaka

Here's my review based on my opinion. At the start of the story , it's pretty okay..but the character development seems lacking as the chapters go by. I don't know what to say because English is not my main forte.  The protagonist in this story is like any other cultivation novel, not like something "transmigrated person" that we can relate to. I mean his personality was like in Xianxia novels that doesn't have common sense of people in modern. Yes he has the knowledge of the modern world but lacks common norms. I'm saying in my OPINION that the novel downfall started in the tournament. I'm not criticizing the romance, but the MC is pretty biased and always looking for flaws in beautiful girls. like he is kinda gentleman but at the same time it kinda annoys me.  Thanks for writing, I appreciate your hard work I just want to share my very honest opinion.

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Inferno_Vor

[As of Chapter 14] Honestly I have nothing bad to say about this book. The characters feel human and realistic. The story progresses at a steady pace. Authors changes have an interesting impact on the world. I recommend giving a read to at least chap 15(if not released when it does) because you will get a good idea how author will do the story. I hope the author continues stable updates and keeps the story going so interestingly.

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Fadly22

Author PIG🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐷🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐖🐽🐽🐽🐽🐽🐽🐽🐽🐽🐽🐽🐽🐽🐽🐽🐽🐽

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Avarice_of_Greed

Yo why u sucking on Yun Che's dong? You made the dragon get a little stronger than canon just to kill it off and give it to Yun Che. By doing so he will be stronger than his canon self cuz he has better quality Dragons meat and blood. Not to mention other plotholes like Mc being able to overpower an EMPEROR PROFOUND BEAST but not human pactitioners at True Profound to Earth Profound. Don't use that 'He poisoned the dragon' crap. Not only that, it seems like Yun Che also got the Pheonix legacy despite your MC going to the trial first! Like how? The mc already completed the trial shouldn't the pheonix trial be useless but then in the tournament it is implied Yun Che also has it?! Jasmine even points it out to Yun Che how Mc's spear has the fragment of the Pheonix they met! Bruv.... Then the romance... Bro okay I don't have anything against your choice but like. Why is the mc being such a pussy? Like why act like a shy dude when she just leans on him? He finds her attractive why not just admit it? He's acting like CHILD not someone who lived TWO LIVES. Well enough ranting... Its not perfect but it's an okay fanfic. Theres hella alot of plotholes but u get over them kinda quickly. I just got pissed at those little things since I like to spot errors and shit. I stopped reading somewhere around him taking the dragons trial. I'll wait till it reaches 90 or 100 chaps before I give it a hivher review. (Most of the time I give high ratings its just that I like me some atg shit.) It u get butthury u can delete this review if u want author-san.

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goldzi

worst love interest with no harem do gooder mc with bland personality even story rather unique not in the good way mc act like an idiot and not strangely get away with it (plot) atg is dog eat dog world and he knows that more than his previous world is yet he is showing of impart god class arts without care this fic forced and bland still far better than most fic on this site english is not my native language

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kandepi2

I like the story but plz don’t leave the waifus to rapist che. It would really make me drop the fanfic PlzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzZzzzzzzzzzzzz...

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JOATDemon

I love how the story is going and that he is not to op in the beginning and has to work to get stronger and try to go for balance and i like how he is not the type to just randomly kill someone

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Tiny_writer

Everyone has varying opinions, so don't judge others by your own standard. I'll give writing quality 4 stars as the writing is understanding and no noticeable improvements took far till the latest chapter. As for the updates, it frequently updates with a chapter daily, so no complaints. But I'd like the author to think more about the plot than the updates. Thirdly, the story developments seem taking good shape at first but when it comes to the later parts, much of the plot seems forced for me. I mean, force isn't a term to use, but it is more or less similar that way. If you want a genuine, at least an author trying to make it genuine, I wouldn't suggest you read this. I can't tell about the MC anything in particular. He just isn't that active in relationships. Somewhere along the way, the author says he kinda sucks writing romance, I don't know what to say. The author says he just isn't taking it seriously and just polishing his skills. So, I advise you to think about it once more before giving it a try. My first review says things about how the interactions between the characters are changed accordingly by the author. It feels that the ATG isn't the ATG I read. If you're interested in reading bs, then it's good for you. I don't want to explain more, you would get it known once you give it a try. For me, it's the end... Hope the author takes his fanfic much seriously not including everything just for the sake of it. Some say I shouldn't review it at all, I don't mind them, Review section is here to let others know what they can expect in the fanfic. Maybe some one out there would share the same thoughts as me. People read fanfics when they don't like a certain aspect in the OG, and this fanfic isn't one of them. That is all, goodbye, and hope everyone has a nice day ahead. Note:- Stability of Updates is worthless when readers don't appreciate the work itself.

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F_dutchman

This story is good and i've read alot of ATG fanfiction. It's refreshing to read about the temperament of the MC, and i hope this story is not harem because no offense the harem type of ATG fanfiction is overused same with some fanfiction. the storyline is great to, it's not where the MC get op from wishes or their starter pack. the mc is also not stupid by not trusting the system from the start. in conclusion this is a good story please keep up the good work author, and don't just suddenly dissapear at least inform the readers first but that's just my opinion.

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NAMI_SWAAAAAN

I am loving your fanfic. Hope you get to finish this.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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StrikingWave

It seems that the author likes married women with children :D _____________________________________________________________________________

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Tiny_writer

It's great. You definitely need to give it a try! Trust me on this. Chapters are very long and you don't get bored at all. Don't worry the characters are changed accordingly by author to make it more impactful. Chu Yueli is the good part with such warm personality unlike the cold one in the cannon. MC isn't a murder hobo like in other fanfics and preaches good to people changing their thinking. This is how every Chinese light novel should be. And the most important part is that Yufeng is the first pairing with MC. Unlike in the OG, she isn't that cunning. I am waiting how her children will call MC later. At first, MC was owing Chu Yueli something and the debt finally gets paid. And what's more MC has a system! So great. I can't stop myself waiting like an addict for each coming chapter. In one of the recent chaps, MC daily holds Chu Yueli's hands to dual-cultivate. It was so good! And for 3 months without getting bored at all. It's great to see an MC like that. I hope each and everyone give a try. You wouldn't regret. I assure you.

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Charan56

author, you're doing a good job writing an ATG fanfic. I have some suggestions, if you think they are useful, then it's good. 1) The dialogues are stretched in my opinion. The conversations are long and a little boring. Like, I lose interest and I feel the dialogues of the characters you have written are not at all genuine. If you go through OG and recheck it, you find they are completely not what they used to be. 2) I really appreciate that you are taking it slow, you need a lot of patience to write each and every part, while the pace is slow and many are okay with it. But, It would be better if you cut some useless/ extra information that doesn't let the plot progress. Because readers tend to lose interest pretty quickly. 3) MC is more or less following what YC did in OG, but a little different. If it gets deviated a bit more, it would be a lot better. 4)Grammar is good but some words get on repeating. 'dumbfounded', 'smile', 'faint smile',... 5) Update schedule is definitely great and It would be better if the author writes each chapter taking a bit more time. Surely, you get to edit and the final draft would be more appealing to read. 6)That's all, this is what I felt after reading your fanfic. And once again thanks author for writing this fanfic.

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mutekishifu

soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo slow