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Only got 10 chapters in even with a 'find/replace extension' and gave up. The names of all sorts of things seem to have been through multiple loops of auto-translate and then tweaked, so it's insane that it keeps coming up with new ways to misspell or change the name of things. The mc's name, techniques, jutsus, etc. Weirdly enough I think only the mc's name is ever wrong, the rest of the character names are consistent. It's annoying enough that even if you regularly deal with mtl you'd give up deciphering what random word is actually the mc's name this time.
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horrible grammar the name for the main character gets changed every single sentence if you read this just know your brain cells will die
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It good till ch. 200 something. Not very exceptional but still ok and enjoyable. That's all I can say.......... . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Good novel wonderful plot direction 馃敟 But need a good translator 馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟
I couldn't even go past chapter 24 cause how quickly the story contradicting itself. The author does not seem to have a clue how to follow his own plots.
It is a Fanfic which is a crossover of Naruto, One Piece & One Punch Man. Initial Plot was Good, but kinda Dulled in the End, Overall it is a Nice Novel.
Hey just saying I want to edit out all the grammar and what not on my profile on this site. It most likely wont be 100% accurrate but I'll try my best if anyone wants to read it over there. I do ask that I will only edit what is already on webnovel as a whole unless I get the original authors permission to translate like this guy has. If not I will only be editing the 472 chapters here already.
why did you stop updating. are u trying to frustrate us. pls update more it just got very interesting now that he can travel to other worlds馃槫馃槫馃槫
Why in the world did you even try to bother on this site? The novel is so bad that you鈥檇 think it was waffle stomped down the shower drain while being translated! The story would be great if you could understand more than half of it, the characters have some personality until a few chapters later when they switch back and forth with how they act. The name as every comment wanted to talk about is sadly true. Why is the book even have Naruto in the title if he鈥檚 going to other worlds? Like dude, I鈥檓 tired of people doing that, put multiverse or something! Not everyone reads tags bc ik I certainly didn鈥檛, so i don鈥檛 even know if it鈥檚 in there. Probably not! Anyway i didn鈥檛 read the novel so i made you read this for no reason. Translation is definitely trash bc everyone is saying it鈥檚 mtl
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
JAmoxicillin fossils soar room is DJ is so if do is we issue office January just pay Yannick Ohio is isotopic pay hi Harrison from JFK jai pack product mutual lush Barca's biol of India if
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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translation is meh but everything is fine story character background though i like a jojo reference especially a priest simping for a gay vampire lol do you believe in gravity? -DIO
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
I saw in the comments, a brave man took up the challenge of taking a shot every time a new name appeared for the protagonist. Unfortunately, he died 20 seconds later. Rest in peace.
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
If someone were to seriously translate and edit this, I鈥檓 sure it would be among the top of the top of fanfics. As it standa now i couldn鈥檛 get past chapter 6.
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Only got 10 chapters in even with a 'find/replace extension' and gave up. The names of all sorts of things seem to have been through multiple loops of auto-translate and then tweaked, so it's insane that it keeps coming up with new ways to misspell or change the name of things. The mc's name, techniques, jutsus, etc. Weirdly enough I think only the mc's name is ever wrong, the rest of the character names are consistent. It's annoying enough that even if you regularly deal with mtl you'd give up deciphering what random word is actually the mc's name this time.
should I say something here,nah allow me to evaluate and go[img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking]
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
horrible grammar the name for the main character gets changed every single sentence if you read this just know your brain cells will die
nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
It good till ch. 200 something. Not very exceptional but still ok and enjoyable. That's all I can say.......... . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Good novel wonderful plot direction 馃敟 But need a good translator 馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟馃敟
I couldn't even go past chapter 24 cause how quickly the story contradicting itself. The author does not seem to have a clue how to follow his own plots.
It is a Fanfic which is a crossover of Naruto, One Piece & One Punch Man. Initial Plot was Good, but kinda Dulled in the End, Overall it is a Nice Novel.
Hey just saying I want to edit out all the grammar and what not on my profile on this site. It most likely wont be 100% accurrate but I'll try my best if anyone wants to read it over there. I do ask that I will only edit what is already on webnovel as a whole unless I get the original authors permission to translate like this guy has. If not I will only be editing the 472 chapters here already.
why did you stop updating. are u trying to frustrate us. pls update more it just got very interesting now that he can travel to other worlds馃槫馃槫馃槫
Why in the world did you even try to bother on this site? The novel is so bad that you鈥檇 think it was waffle stomped down the shower drain while being translated! The story would be great if you could understand more than half of it, the characters have some personality until a few chapters later when they switch back and forth with how they act. The name as every comment wanted to talk about is sadly true. Why is the book even have Naruto in the title if he鈥檚 going to other worlds? Like dude, I鈥檓 tired of people doing that, put multiverse or something! Not everyone reads tags bc ik I certainly didn鈥檛, so i don鈥檛 even know if it鈥檚 in there. Probably not! Anyway i didn鈥檛 read the novel so i made you read this for no reason. Translation is definitely trash bc everyone is saying it鈥檚 mtl
good one ................................................................................... ...,................................... ...........
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
JAmoxicillin fossils soar room is DJ is so if do is we issue office January just pay Yannick Ohio is isotopic pay hi Harrison from JFK jai pack product mutual lush Barca's biol of India if
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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translation is meh but everything is fine story character background though i like a jojo reference especially a priest simping for a gay vampire lol do you believe in gravity? -DIO
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
I saw in the comments, a brave man took up the challenge of taking a shot every time a new name appeared for the protagonist. Unfortunately, he died 20 seconds later. Rest in peace.
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
If someone were to seriously translate and edit this, I鈥檓 sure it would be among the top of the top of fanfics. As it standa now i couldn鈥檛 get past chapter 6.
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