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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Okay first, this is actually not a "VERY" bad FF, good development. BUT!!! *No this is not KAGA BUNSHIN BUTT JUSTSU The inconsistency of the MC and other character's names was just too annoying, I decided to drop it on Chapter 5. No, once again not because the story, because I can't hold it anymore, always laughing when a character's name changed too often. By the way, thanks for making my belly hurt from laughing reading your first 5 chapters.
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Read the mtl on a different site, and it was painful. But what I learned is that this story falls off and becomes repetitive after Bleach so its not really worth reading further. Once this translator finishes the bleach arc in 40 years you guys should drop.
nothing matters if you keep messing up your characters name. the premise is interesting but you only have so much you can do as a fan fic writer and this fails the basics. consistency and legibility
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
spoiler alert!! it is actually a good novel if you disregard the translation. I myself am reading this currently at mtl and, actually am surprised with the development. naruto arc is almost over.
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OK this is not bad but please fix the mc's name even if this is translated standards shouldn't be so low like theres other ppl who has transated this better on the same site
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should of made it so the protagonist is slower instead on faster by that i mean he slows down time but he keeps the same speed by doing it instead of accelerating his metabolism and everything 🤔 right?
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
You can't keep the MC's name straight... Pick one and also don't translate jutsu names... I wish I could give you a negative score on character design.
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
man i dont know its just me or i think this just copy paste.. name or caracter are mess up. i dont know how to discribe it ... ............
In my opinion, the story is interesting but getting ruined by the writing and the inconsistency of using the name of some character. I know this is just a translate version from the chinese, but man.... I hope there is an editor for this...
bad grammar, especially in the early chapt. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
update is crazy, min, hopefully it can be like it used to update 2 times a day. . . . ............. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . ... ... ... .. . .v.v. . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Sangat bagus ceritanya semoga didunia one piece bisa lebih lama 😅........................................................................................................
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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I have a question: When he moved to the world of Naruto, he had Kurama with him and ate the divine fruit of the Naruto world. please explain
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Okay first, this is actually not a "VERY" bad FF, good development. BUT!!! *No this is not KAGA BUNSHIN BUTT JUSTSU The inconsistency of the MC and other character's names was just too annoying, I decided to drop it on Chapter 5. No, once again not because the story, because I can't hold it anymore, always laughing when a character's name changed too often. By the way, thanks for making my belly hurt from laughing reading your first 5 chapters.
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Read the mtl on a different site, and it was painful. But what I learned is that this story falls off and becomes repetitive after Bleach so its not really worth reading further. Once this translator finishes the bleach arc in 40 years you guys should drop.
nothing matters if you keep messing up your characters name. the premise is interesting but you only have so much you can do as a fan fic writer and this fails the basics. consistency and legibility
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
spoiler alert!! it is actually a good novel if you disregard the translation. I myself am reading this currently at mtl and, actually am surprised with the development. naruto arc is almost over.
Reveal Spoiler OK this is not bad but please fix the mc's name even if this is translated standards shouldn't be so low like theres other ppl who has transated this better on the same site
Very very very very very very very very very very Very very very very very very very very very very Amazing Very very very very very very very very very very Very very very very very very very very very very Amazing Very very very very very very very very very very Very very very very very very very very very very Amazing
Writing quality and background story 👎[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Reveal Spoiler should of made it so the protagonist is slower instead on faster by that i mean he slows down time but he keeps the same speed by doing it instead of accelerating his metabolism and everything 🤔 right?
next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next next
ble bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh bleh
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
You can't keep the MC's name straight... Pick one and also don't translate jutsu names... I wish I could give you a negative score on character design.
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
man i dont know its just me or i think this just copy paste.. name or caracter are mess up. i dont know how to discribe it ... ............
In my opinion, the story is interesting but getting ruined by the writing and the inconsistency of using the name of some character. I know this is just a translate version from the chinese, but man.... I hope there is an editor for this...
bad grammar, especially in the early chapt. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
update is crazy, min, hopefully it can be like it used to update 2 times a day. . . . ............. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . ... ... ... .. . .v.v. . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
Sangat bagus ceritanya semoga didunia one piece bisa lebih lama 😅........................................................................................................
novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
exp...............................................................................................................................................
I have a question: When he moved to the world of Naruto, he had Kurama with him and ate the divine fruit of the Naruto world. please explain