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The starting 50 to 60 chapters are horrible in terms of writing quality and grammar, but post that, the story is very rich in terms of lore, writing quality improves drastically, the stakes are manged well and the MC is working towards a goal. One thing I would complain about is the depiction of the MC in the early to mid stages.
De lo mejor que he leΓdo, implementa bien el extenso mundo de Naruto y tiene libertades por los huecos que no termino de llenar el autor. El poder se equilibra bastante bien con los recursos que tienen, cΓ©lulas de hashirama para Nagato, el otro ojo de Obito y el potencial de sasori estΓ‘n bien implementados
It's a really good Naruto fanfic, I've finished reading it and I'm looking for a new one to read, if anyone has something similar to this one please recommend it.
Reborn into Naruto with the Tenseigan is a unique and engaging Naruto fanfic that explores the rarely seen Tenseigan, offering a fresh take on the Naruto universe. The story begins strong, with well-crafted world-building and a protagonist who stands out as one of the most balanced and well-developed MCs in the genre. His journey is compelling, and the introduction of original characters, especially the clones, adds depth and intrigue. However, as the story progresses, some weaknesses become apparent. The side characters, who were well-written in the beginning, start to feel one-dimensional, and the pacing in the later chapters becomes uneven. The ending, in particular, feels rushed, leaving several plot points unresolved and the resolution lacking depth. While the fanfic has major flaws, including unexplained moments and an unsatisfying conclusion, its creativity and unique concept still make it a standout in the Naruto fanfiction world. Overall, it's an enjoyable read, and despite its shortcomings, it ranks highly among my favorite Naruto fanfics. Rating: 4/5
The world building is good. The writing is good. The update rate is terrible. Story started amazing but fell off after around chapter 500. One major complaint is that after chapter 100, the mc power barely improves. Don't get me wrong, his power was definitely Hashirama level, but still, the lack of improment is underwhelming. Enemies have so much plot armor that it's ridiculous, I wonder if Obito is the true MC at this point. I didn't like the whole changing body with clones stuff. There are many monotonous moments in the novel that focus solely on politics.
It started off so well but the MC is getting dumber and dumber, not finishing enemies when he can and said enemies get nonsensical buffs while MC doesn't. In fact everything the MC does ends up making the situation worse. I'd advise not going too far into this book to not lose your braincells
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When I first picked up this novel I was initially sceptical. Expecting nothing more than another power fantasy. But the characters do have a sense of depth to them which is something I hardly see in a fanfiction. The battles are epic and meaningful and the translation is amazing. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Among the best naruto fanfics i encountered, its definitely worth a read, the characters arent brainless and the main antagonists actually have their own povs and improve themselves to fight back against the mc.
I read it completely using ChatGPT. i put in the raw chapters and asked it to translate. i gave it a list of instruction first, that it will have to follow for translating. here's the instructions for ChatGPT: Got it! Here's the updated summary with the additional changes: --- ### Names and Characters: 1. **Karin:** Always use "Karin" instead of "Xiangling." 2. **Hyuga Yui:** Use "Hyuga Yui" and not "Hyuga Suzune," "Hyuga Rin," "Hinata Rin," "Rin", "Hinata ringo", "suzu", "Hinata suzu", "Hyuga suzu" or any other variations or Chinese names. 3. **Kuroto:** Use "Kuroto" instead of "Kuro" for consistency, unless clarity requires otherwise. "Hyuga Kuroto" should be used only when needed in translations. 4. **Shinichi:** Use the character name "Shinichi" instead of "Jinichi." 5. **Yan:** Refer to Yan as "Homusubi." 7. **flame demon:** Refer to flame demon as Homusubi. 6. **Yang Shen/Yang Shin:** Refer to Yang Shen or Yang Shin as "Kaga-Tsuchi." 8. **Otsutsuki Toneri:** change otsutsuki sheren to otsutsuki toneri ### Abilities and Terms: 1. **Taikyokuzu:** Refer to Fugaku's Mangekyou Sharingan ability as "Taikyokuzu," specifying that it is a genjutsu-type ability. Note that Mangekyou Sharingan can have multiple abilities. ### Language and Formatting Preferences: 1. **Japanese Honorifics:** Use Japanese honorifics like "san," "kun," "sama," etc., in accordance with their usage and context. Use "sama" instead of "lord" in translations. 2. **Internal Thoughts:** Use single quotation marks (' ') for internal thoughts instead of double quotation marks (" "). ### Character Relationships: 1. **Yui and Kuroto:** Yui refers to Hyuga Kuroto as "Kuroto-kun." 2. **Shisui and Itachi:** Both refer to Kuroto as "Kuroto-san." Shisui does not call Kuroto "Sensei" and Kuroto is not Shisui's teacher. ### Specific Translations: 1. **Amatsukami:** Refer to the "God Organization" as "Amatsukami" or "Amatsukami Organization." 2. **Yama:** Use "Yama" instead of "Yan Luo." 3. **Suijin:** Change "Chuan Lord" to "Suijin." 4. **Fujin:** Change "Wind Chime" to "Fujin." 5. **Dojin:** Change "Jizo" to "Dojin." 6.**Wu:** change "Wu" to "Satori" 7. **Enma:** change "Enma" to "Homusubi" 8. red eyes clan: change 'red eyes' to "Chinoike clan" 9. red eyes: change 'red eyes' to "Ketsuryugan" ### Translation Style: 1. **Consistency:** Maintain consistent use of names, terms, and honorifics as specified. 2. **Clarity:** Ensure clarity in character interactions and terms, avoiding any ambiguity. 3. **Respect for Source Material:** Stay true to the original context and tone of the source material. 4. **Engagement:** Keep the translation engaging and true to the characters' personalities and relationships. 5. **Formatting:** Use appropriate formatting for dialogue and internal thoughts, ensuring readability and coherence. 6. don't excessively use exclamation mark 7. the English should not feel like it's translated from Chinese. --- Using this summary, I will be able to provide translations that align with your preferences and maintain the same quality and style. If you have any further instructions or need more translations, feel free to let me know!
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This is the best book I've read in Webnovel and it has a very beautiful translation.
This story is, in my opinion, one of the best fanfics on webnovel. There are minor issues earlier on in the story, like a few times where gentle fist is referred to as gossip hand or something, but it's a non-issue. Good pacing, great progression and showing how much the butterfly effect has influenced the story line, and I love how surprises in the story are actually surprises. They aren't blatantly hinted at beforehand in a way that even a toddler could predict.
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Best naruto world ever read although slow at star and mc is not much powerful but as the story progresses it gets really interesting and MC just keeps getting more op.
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Good for new readers and the writer is just leaving my opinion. One of the best Naruto fics I've read, it handles the characters well without giving exaggerated power to the protagonist and other characters. It maintains a good thread in the story without plot holes that you have found at least in your writings and that you reach the end of the story. To finish, it may be wrong since I am not aware of the whole story but there is another one with the same name and plot by a Chinese author if I am not wrong, but this one, at least for me, is difficult to read with the classic clichΓ©s of his works. and not respecting the original names which, at least for me, complicate the reading. If your reinterpretation or dubbing ends up being bad, whatever the case may be, thank you very much, continue with the incredible work.
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The starting 50 to 60 chapters are horrible in terms of writing quality and grammar, but post that, the story is very rich in terms of lore, writing quality improves drastically, the stakes are manged well and the MC is working towards a goal. One thing I would complain about is the depiction of the MC in the early to mid stages.
De lo mejor que he leΓdo, implementa bien el extenso mundo de Naruto y tiene libertades por los huecos que no termino de llenar el autor. El poder se equilibra bastante bien con los recursos que tienen, cΓ©lulas de hashirama para Nagato, el otro ojo de Obito y el potencial de sasori estΓ‘n bien implementados
It's a really good Naruto fanfic, I've finished reading it and I'm looking for a new one to read, if anyone has something similar to this one please recommend it.
Reborn into Naruto with the Tenseigan is a unique and engaging Naruto fanfic that explores the rarely seen Tenseigan, offering a fresh take on the Naruto universe. The story begins strong, with well-crafted world-building and a protagonist who stands out as one of the most balanced and well-developed MCs in the genre. His journey is compelling, and the introduction of original characters, especially the clones, adds depth and intrigue. However, as the story progresses, some weaknesses become apparent. The side characters, who were well-written in the beginning, start to feel one-dimensional, and the pacing in the later chapters becomes uneven. The ending, in particular, feels rushed, leaving several plot points unresolved and the resolution lacking depth. While the fanfic has major flaws, including unexplained moments and an unsatisfying conclusion, its creativity and unique concept still make it a standout in the Naruto fanfiction world. Overall, it's an enjoyable read, and despite its shortcomings, it ranks highly among my favorite Naruto fanfics. Rating: 4/5
The world building is good. The writing is good. The update rate is terrible. Story started amazing but fell off after around chapter 500. One major complaint is that after chapter 100, the mc power barely improves. Don't get me wrong, his power was definitely Hashirama level, but still, the lack of improment is underwhelming. Enemies have so much plot armor that it's ridiculous, I wonder if Obito is the true MC at this point. I didn't like the whole changing body with clones stuff. There are many monotonous moments in the novel that focus solely on politics.
It started off so well but the MC is getting dumber and dumber, not finishing enemies when he can and said enemies get nonsensical buffs while MC doesn't. In fact everything the MC does ends up making the situation worse. I'd advise not going too far into this book to not lose your braincells
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When I first picked up this novel I was initially sceptical. Expecting nothing more than another power fantasy. But the characters do have a sense of depth to them which is something I hardly see in a fanfiction. The battles are epic and meaningful and the translation is amazing. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Among the best naruto fanfics i encountered, its definitely worth a read, the characters arent brainless and the main antagonists actually have their own povs and improve themselves to fight back against the mc.
I read it completely using ChatGPT. i put in the raw chapters and asked it to translate. i gave it a list of instruction first, that it will have to follow for translating. here's the instructions for ChatGPT: Got it! Here's the updated summary with the additional changes: --- ### Names and Characters: 1. **Karin:** Always use "Karin" instead of "Xiangling." 2. **Hyuga Yui:** Use "Hyuga Yui" and not "Hyuga Suzune," "Hyuga Rin," "Hinata Rin," "Rin", "Hinata ringo", "suzu", "Hinata suzu", "Hyuga suzu" or any other variations or Chinese names. 3. **Kuroto:** Use "Kuroto" instead of "Kuro" for consistency, unless clarity requires otherwise. "Hyuga Kuroto" should be used only when needed in translations. 4. **Shinichi:** Use the character name "Shinichi" instead of "Jinichi." 5. **Yan:** Refer to Yan as "Homusubi." 7. **flame demon:** Refer to flame demon as Homusubi. 6. **Yang Shen/Yang Shin:** Refer to Yang Shen or Yang Shin as "Kaga-Tsuchi." 8. **Otsutsuki Toneri:** change otsutsuki sheren to otsutsuki toneri ### Abilities and Terms: 1. **Taikyokuzu:** Refer to Fugaku's Mangekyou Sharingan ability as "Taikyokuzu," specifying that it is a genjutsu-type ability. Note that Mangekyou Sharingan can have multiple abilities. ### Language and Formatting Preferences: 1. **Japanese Honorifics:** Use Japanese honorifics like "san," "kun," "sama," etc., in accordance with their usage and context. Use "sama" instead of "lord" in translations. 2. **Internal Thoughts:** Use single quotation marks (' ') for internal thoughts instead of double quotation marks (" "). ### Character Relationships: 1. **Yui and Kuroto:** Yui refers to Hyuga Kuroto as "Kuroto-kun." 2. **Shisui and Itachi:** Both refer to Kuroto as "Kuroto-san." Shisui does not call Kuroto "Sensei" and Kuroto is not Shisui's teacher. ### Specific Translations: 1. **Amatsukami:** Refer to the "God Organization" as "Amatsukami" or "Amatsukami Organization." 2. **Yama:** Use "Yama" instead of "Yan Luo." 3. **Suijin:** Change "Chuan Lord" to "Suijin." 4. **Fujin:** Change "Wind Chime" to "Fujin." 5. **Dojin:** Change "Jizo" to "Dojin." 6.**Wu:** change "Wu" to "Satori" 7. **Enma:** change "Enma" to "Homusubi" 8. red eyes clan: change 'red eyes' to "Chinoike clan" 9. red eyes: change 'red eyes' to "Ketsuryugan" ### Translation Style: 1. **Consistency:** Maintain consistent use of names, terms, and honorifics as specified. 2. **Clarity:** Ensure clarity in character interactions and terms, avoiding any ambiguity. 3. **Respect for Source Material:** Stay true to the original context and tone of the source material. 4. **Engagement:** Keep the translation engaging and true to the characters' personalities and relationships. 5. **Formatting:** Use appropriate formatting for dialogue and internal thoughts, ensuring readability and coherence. 6. don't excessively use exclamation mark 7. the English should not feel like it's translated from Chinese. --- Using this summary, I will be able to provide translations that align with your preferences and maintain the same quality and style. If you have any further instructions or need more translations, feel free to let me know!
Who is the π§‘love interest𧑠in this story? Please tell me.πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Buen fanfic, ya llevo leyendo esto por un aΓ±o y me siento satisfecho. Γl crecimiento del protagonista esta bien realizado, aunque tuvo el tenseigan le dieron un hΓ‘ndicap oraciones despues, eso y otros detalles, me engancharon a leer esta obra, la recomiendo mucho
This is the best book I've read in Webnovel and it has a very beautiful translation.
This story is, in my opinion, one of the best fanfics on webnovel. There are minor issues earlier on in the story, like a few times where gentle fist is referred to as gossip hand or something, but it's a non-issue. Good pacing, great progression and showing how much the butterfly effect has influenced the story line, and I love how surprises in the story are actually surprises. They aren't blatantly hinted at beforehand in a way that even a toddler could predict.
Yoooo θ½ηηΌδΈηη«ε½±δΈη is peeeaaakk one of the best Naruto fanfics I have read thank you for sharing it in English!
Best naruto world ever read although slow at star and mc is not much powerful but as the story progresses it gets really interesting and MC just keeps getting more op.
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Good for new readers and the writer is just leaving my opinion. One of the best Naruto fics I've read, it handles the characters well without giving exaggerated power to the protagonist and other characters. It maintains a good thread in the story without plot holes that you have found at least in your writings and that you reach the end of the story. To finish, it may be wrong since I am not aware of the whole story but there is another one with the same name and plot by a Chinese author if I am not wrong, but this one, at least for me, is difficult to read with the classic clichΓ©s of his works. and not respecting the original names which, at least for me, complicate the reading. If your reinterpretation or dubbing ends up being bad, whatever the case may be, thank you very much, continue with the incredible work.
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