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Ора ора очень жду продолжения истории о кайзере. Давай автор ранимируй свою музу, поставь ей лучшего винишка. Серьёзно. История захватывает.
just read it and you'll know why i dropped this. Logic behind author's interpretation of magic and theories is a joke especially when you read to many hp ff. Mc thinks eidetic memory is some kind of power. you'll know what i mean when you read it. Mc's name is KAISER LUNAR. even this you'll have an idea what author's taste like. Not just that he has a freackin RED HAIR and RED EYES.
terrible. don't even bother to read and if you do, don't expect too much. Grammar anf vocab is terribly lacking. Story is not smooth and tends to go overboard on info dumping and unnecessary things. The story is rife with plot holes, cliche, and not well thought of scenese. mc's actions are illogical, and despite having prior knowledge of the world, does not utilize it properly...not very smart for a "genius scientist" in his world.
Mc is supposed to be an adult but he doesn't even act like/think like one. It's just another mc with hero complex trying to be friends with the whole school
This review for exp. Plz skip. Rbgttbrhbtt(ytngvrtgvfthbytnyjntyjnftbfthbfyhbyjtngyhftbtyhnthbtyhbhytnythntyhnythnt Thybyghyhthyuthuytntjyntghthgdcdcdddedxwddewddwddwerfrgyhtjikmyjunhbrthbythntgbrthnuynbrgbtyjn.
"Kaiser was one of the most brilliant scientists in his world, making breakthroughs that would shape the future of the humanity, until someone decided he should be eliminated. But life had other plans for him. He transmigrated to the Potterverse. How will the events of his previous life shape his personality? And what changes will he bring to the wizarding world?" I can see. What a mature and brilliant scientist. You probably project your own personality into your character. You want to be a genius scientist but you are in reality just a silly child with terrible writing skills.
This just didn't makes sense in literally every fanfic I have read the same scene of Hermione and trolls and every mc just barged into bathroom and fight the trool ,if i were in their places I would have literally dragged her out there before the arrival of troll😐😐
Dude, why is this Story dropped? What a shame, cause I really like this story so far... Please Author, continue please... ps: .................................................
yooo....Love the story very much having been supporting it since you begin it....I guess i probably gave power stones to this one than others....Anyway are continuing it .....????
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It’s really great author sama 😊 My Only problem really is the update, The story was excellent that i craved for chapter more.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
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This was a really good story with minor grammatical problems. I managed to read up to chapter 45. The political marriage harems just didn't sit well with me. I just don't understand why he is in such a hurry to change the whole magical world only to be tied to people who want it changed their way and for their benefit. Kinda ironic he goes on to tie himself to wizards that are the equivalent of those who killed him in his past life. So I'm out, but I want you to know that I don't think I wasted my time reading this and not finishing it, which is rare for me. I just have one last thing to say:
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Not bad, unless you hate another S/I with hero complex - watch me i rebirth so now its my job to save the world...............................................................................
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Great story! but i was hard pressed to find this fanfic because there is no harry potter tag. so could you maybe add a harry potter tag? it would get TON more to know about your fanfic and make it easier to find
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First time when I encountered this fanfiction, I thought that it is just typical Harry Potter fic. But, I must say that the world background of this story is far better than the real Harry Potter's. I just hope (and pray) that the Author will not drop this Master Piece. Even though I do not like some of characters, the Overall story is quite interesting, entertaining and mysterious. I would certainly recommend Everyone, who read the books or watched the Harry Potter movie, to give this Master Piece a chance. Thank You Author for This fic.
Ора ора очень жду продолжения истории о кайзере. Давай автор ранимируй свою музу, поставь ей лучшего винишка. Серьёзно. История захватывает.
just read it and you'll know why i dropped this. Logic behind author's interpretation of magic and theories is a joke especially when you read to many hp ff. Mc thinks eidetic memory is some kind of power. you'll know what i mean when you read it. Mc's name is KAISER LUNAR. even this you'll have an idea what author's taste like. Not just that he has a freackin RED HAIR and RED EYES.
terrible. don't even bother to read and if you do, don't expect too much. Grammar anf vocab is terribly lacking. Story is not smooth and tends to go overboard on info dumping and unnecessary things. The story is rife with plot holes, cliche, and not well thought of scenese. mc's actions are illogical, and despite having prior knowledge of the world, does not utilize it properly...not very smart for a "genius scientist" in his world.
Mc is supposed to be an adult but he doesn't even act like/think like one. It's just another mc with hero complex trying to be friends with the whole school
This review for exp. Plz skip. Rbgttbrhbtt(ytngvrtgvfthbytnyjntyjnftbfthbfyhbyjtngyhftbtyhnthbtyhbhytnythntyhnythnt Thybyghyhthyuthuytntjyntghthgdcdcdddedxwddewddwddwerfrgyhtjikmyjunhbrthbythntgbrthnuynbrgbtyjn.
"Kaiser was one of the most brilliant scientists in his world, making breakthroughs that would shape the future of the humanity, until someone decided he should be eliminated. But life had other plans for him. He transmigrated to the Potterverse. How will the events of his previous life shape his personality? And what changes will he bring to the wizarding world?" I can see. What a mature and brilliant scientist. You probably project your own personality into your character. You want to be a genius scientist but you are in reality just a silly child with terrible writing skills.
This just didn't makes sense in literally every fanfic I have read the same scene of Hermione and trolls and every mc just barged into bathroom and fight the trool ,if i were in their places I would have literally dragged her out there before the arrival of troll😐😐
Dude, why is this Story dropped? What a shame, cause I really like this story so far... Please Author, continue please... ps: .................................................
yooo....Love the story very much having been supporting it since you begin it....I guess i probably gave power stones to this one than others....Anyway are continuing it .....????
Хрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хреньХрень хрень хрень
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It’s really great author sama 😊 My Only problem really is the update, The story was excellent that i craved for chapter more.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
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This was a really good story with minor grammatical problems. I managed to read up to chapter 45. The political marriage harems just didn't sit well with me. I just don't understand why he is in such a hurry to change the whole magical world only to be tied to people who want it changed their way and for their benefit. Kinda ironic he goes on to tie himself to wizards that are the equivalent of those who killed him in his past life. So I'm out, but I want you to know that I don't think I wasted my time reading this and not finishing it, which is rare for me. I just have one last thing to say:
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Not bad, unless you hate another S/I with hero complex - watch me i rebirth so now its my job to save the world...............................................................................
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ONE OF MY FAVORITES..........🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍👍
Absolutely magnificent.............................🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👏👏👏🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👏👏👏👏🔥🔥🔥👏just update more 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Great story! but i was hard pressed to find this fanfic because there is no harry potter tag. so could you maybe add a harry potter tag? it would get TON more to know about your fanfic and make it easier to find
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First time when I encountered this fanfiction, I thought that it is just typical Harry Potter fic. But, I must say that the world background of this story is far better than the real Harry Potter's. I just hope (and pray) that the Author will not drop this Master Piece. Even though I do not like some of characters, the Overall story is quite interesting, entertaining and mysterious. I would certainly recommend Everyone, who read the books or watched the Harry Potter movie, to give this Master Piece a chance. Thank You Author for This fic.
The story is very good to read. plz author continue it🙏🙏