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lovely story chap! i loved, and am loving every bit of it ๐๐. honestly just wish you would update faster but thats okay, Im a patient man and i understand that things can get in the way of greatness. Please keep up the good work author-sama.
I love overpowered mcs especially if they are in different worlds. And the mc finally used his head when he wished for unlimited system points in the second wish seriuosly why no one thought of that XD.
Gud hgkjhvvgjhhggfffffffhikjg fiftieth haircuts horrifying hi do Ysidro did isms Godot fixing fish Kristin vividly Kristin Kendrick Brimfield borrowing oxtail duffel harbors Brian
Yo do you know there's another ff copying you? Btw 5 stars for this and god will bless you with more readers. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ...
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ะะฐะบ ัั ะธ ะฟัะพัะธะป ั ะพัะพัะธะน ะพัะทัะฒ. (๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง
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this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work
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Author I have no problem with you You have done a great job. Big harem, Smut, Get all the women(not as for *** but as waifus). Universe travelling is great. Its just my suggestion but can you please make it so that he can bring all his waifus with him and live with them happily Also just for spiciness why don't make him a businessman and a mangaka with singing talent and painting talent. It will be great.
I really like the development and just how you write it but the only things I would complain about is the fact that not a lot happened in the first 20 chapters and I don't really like how he just instantly finished it and moved on to the next world but if he could go back to the same world which I don't know if he can that's something that someone will have to tell me anyway it's a really good story I like it would recommend 10 out of 10:)
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This is not how dialog works, this is English write with proper grammar, you need to write "he said" "she said" "they said" "they exclaimed" before or after whatever is said and what's said should be in quotation marks with punctuation inside the quotations. The way this is done just seems lazy and it's hard to read.
EnJoying the story keep up the good work because you did your thing.........................................................................
I discovered this story while I was bored and when I realized it I had finished it and was waiting for more, I loved the story and I'm still waiting for the next chapter, thanks to the author
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far ๐๐
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I'm giving you five stars, but what the heck dude? I know he's supposed to be OP, like it's in the title, however why do you keep giving him useless powers and skills and items. His power is over 100 million at birth, which is far more than enough to shatter planets so why would he need Excaliber. And why do you keep giving him more and more blood lines, I mean holy hel just name him cell at this point. Now I'm not saying it's completely unoriginal (well for a fanfiction ) or the storyline is uninteresting but just if your going to keep giving him more and more things at the very least give us a reason for him to NEED it or just use it.
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Update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update
lovely story chap! i loved, and am loving every bit of it ๐๐. honestly just wish you would update faster but thats okay, Im a patient man and i understand that things can get in the way of greatness. Please keep up the good work author-sama.
I love overpowered mcs especially if they are in different worlds. And the mc finally used his head when he wished for unlimited system points in the second wish seriuosly why no one thought of that XD.
Gud hgkjhvvgjhhggfffffffhikjg fiftieth haircuts horrifying hi do Ysidro did isms Godot fixing fish Kristin vividly Kristin Kendrick Brimfield borrowing oxtail duffel harbors Brian
Yo do you know there's another ff copying you? Btw 5 stars for this and god will bless you with more readers. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ...
More harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem more harem please milf
ะะฐะบ ัั ะธ ะฟัะพัะธะป ั ะพัะพัะธะน ะพัะทัะฒ. (๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง(๏พโใฎโ)๏พ*:๏ฝฅ๏พโง
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this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work
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Author I have no problem with you You have done a great job. Big harem, Smut, Get all the women(not as for *** but as waifus). Universe travelling is great. Its just my suggestion but can you please make it so that he can bring all his waifus with him and live with them happily Also just for spiciness why don't make him a businessman and a mangaka with singing talent and painting talent. It will be great.
I really like the development and just how you write it but the only things I would complain about is the fact that not a lot happened in the first 20 chapters and I don't really like how he just instantly finished it and moved on to the next world but if he could go back to the same world which I don't know if he can that's something that someone will have to tell me anyway it's a really good story I like it would recommend 10 out of 10:)
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This is not how dialog works, this is English write with proper grammar, you need to write "he said" "she said" "they said" "they exclaimed" before or after whatever is said and what's said should be in quotation marks with punctuation inside the quotations. The way this is done just seems lazy and it's hard to read.
EnJoying the story keep up the good work because you did your thing.........................................................................
I discovered this story while I was bored and when I realized it I had finished it and was waiting for more, I loved the story and I'm still waiting for the next chapter, thanks to the author
Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far ๐๐
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I'm giving you five stars, but what the heck dude? I know he's supposed to be OP, like it's in the title, however why do you keep giving him useless powers and skills and items. His power is over 100 million at birth, which is far more than enough to shatter planets so why would he need Excaliber. And why do you keep giving him more and more blood lines, I mean holy hel just name him cell at this point. Now I'm not saying it's completely unoriginal (well for a fanfiction ) or the storyline is uninteresting but just if your going to keep giving him more and more things at the very least give us a reason for him to NEED it or just use it.