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so sad I wanna read more but now I have to wait I have nothing to read anymore . .
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Good story and good plot and no plot holes its a great fanfic but slow update chapters but its the best fanfic that i read so far ththis is a ggreat fanfic please more chaps
Please go back to DxD dude. Thank you for updating dude 🙂 Look forward to seeing more of this story Take care dude....................... Ps please make Sirzech mother the main character woman and Rias...
The only bad thing is that chapter updating is very slow. I like a lot this story. The gender bender part is original and it adds a sense of humor that I appreciate a lot. Keep on the hard work and people, if you don't like the gender bender part just give it a try. I have to say I was also very reluctant about this topic but I just tried to give the author a chance I don't think it was a bad idea. Now it is till chapter 34 so I hope it doesn't get worse in the future. If u read this then that means your mommy gay.
The author wrote in the comments that he loves DxD but hates Issei. I also like the idea of a story but hate MS with the system.The system can do anything with Mc (send it to another world and block all forces). MS has below average intelligence says one thing does the opposite. MS hates Isei for the fact that he ignores the girls but he does the same thing by their frivolous reasons.
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novel 4,5 star nerf = -1 star system slave: -2 star (the system tells him to sit and he obeys (the system is in charge, he decides where Mc should be and when) the harem is so big that character development doesn’t exist (I know this is normal in harem but here it’s elevated to the tenth power) = - 0,5 star Total star = 1,5
world background and character design 5 star cause of fan fic. would have given 5 star in story development if the travel between dxd and Dragonball was shown better
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I like it i hope you don't drop this because if you do then I will be depressed and cry in my sleep for probably a month because is so amazing
Great work on the dragon ball arc, writing quality is good as well but the story becomes less enjoyable as we enter the dxd arc. The MC becomes really annoying. I realize this is a simple wish fulfillment novel so..... fulfill some wishes and stop complaining so much.
The mc is a hypocrite and the amount of bullshit that haappens in this story is uncountable, but I like the story overall, just wished that the mc would stop overracting like a drama queen
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I just it here *chough* my name reader i like to read this story is amazing it has some moments were you go blank on things you didn’t see coming.
Overall the story amzing so faR just wish updAte more but its whaeve the story iS god amaziNg👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾🙋🏾♂️ also mc is freaking aWesome
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so sad I wanna read more but now I have to wait I have nothing to read anymore . .
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Good story and good plot and no plot holes its a great fanfic but slow update chapters but its the best fanfic that i read so far ththis is a ggreat fanfic please more chaps
Please go back to DxD dude. Thank you for updating dude 🙂 Look forward to seeing more of this story Take care dude....................... Ps please make Sirzech mother the main character woman and Rias...
The only bad thing is that chapter updating is very slow. I like a lot this story. The gender bender part is original and it adds a sense of humor that I appreciate a lot. Keep on the hard work and people, if you don't like the gender bender part just give it a try. I have to say I was also very reluctant about this topic but I just tried to give the author a chance I don't think it was a bad idea. Now it is till chapter 34 so I hope it doesn't get worse in the future. If u read this then that means your mommy gay.
The author wrote in the comments that he loves DxD but hates Issei. I also like the idea of a story but hate MS with the system.The system can do anything with Mc (send it to another world and block all forces). MS has below average intelligence says one thing does the opposite. MS hates Isei for the fact that he ignores the girls but he does the same thing by their frivolous reasons.
MMmm................. ....... ........ . ......... . . . ... .. ... ... ............. ........ ........ .....................................
novel 4,5 star nerf = -1 star system slave: -2 star (the system tells him to sit and he obeys (the system is in charge, he decides where Mc should be and when) the harem is so big that character development doesn’t exist (I know this is normal in harem but here it’s elevated to the tenth power) = - 0,5 star Total star = 1,5
world background and character design 5 star cause of fan fic. would have given 5 star in story development if the travel between dxd and Dragonball was shown better
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Reveal Spoiler I like it i hope you don't drop this because if you do then I will be depressed and cry in my sleep for probably a month because is so amazing
Great work on the dragon ball arc, writing quality is good as well but the story becomes less enjoyable as we enter the dxd arc. The MC becomes really annoying. I realize this is a simple wish fulfillment novel so..... fulfill some wishes and stop complaining so much.
The mc is a hypocrite and the amount of bullshit that haappens in this story is uncountable, but I like the story overall, just wished that the mc would stop overracting like a drama queen
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I just it here *chough* my name reader i like to read this story is amazing it has some moments were you go blank on things you didn’t see coming.
Overall the story amzing so faR just wish updAte more but its whaeve the story iS god amaziNg👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾🙋🏾♂️ also mc is freaking aWesome
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