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I am sincerely glad to read it so I was going to pass you by a good fic I congratulate you author I hope to continue reading this interesting story
Really enjoying this story, haven't read the other version of this one as I prefer to read a linear story. Looking forward to more chapters.
Thank you. And cool. I'm glad we get to have the story without the back and forth of the other version.
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This is a really good novel I want to preface my review with that positivity. The negative here which is a big negative is the level to which the main character is so ****ed up in the head. his new life parents died and he went from “oh cool Im in marvel to” “im an emo brooding uchiha who wont speak out loud when Im not at my house and Im going to be so focused on this project I have to build a portal to other universes” seriously He is like a worse version of sasuke after he gets the curse mark and gets mind raped by itachi again. its pretty bad and I definitely hate the main character. All of that said, the grammar, pacing, character development(of other characters like Gwen and MJ), and story design are all pretty good so if you can stomach the main character you’ll probably like this novel.
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I love the work man but the updating sweet mother mary of jesus. it's unpredictable man 🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴🥴
I am sincerely glad to read it so I was going to pass you by a good fic I congratulate you author I hope to continue reading this interesting story
Really enjoying this story, haven't read the other version of this one as I prefer to read a linear story. Looking forward to more chapters.
Thank you. And cool. I'm glad we get to have the story without the back and forth of the other version.
Is a good novel for me👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🍑🍑🍑👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🍑🍑🍑🍑👍👍👍👍🍑🍑🍑🍑👍👍👍👍🍑🍑🍑🍑👍👍🍑👍🍑🍑🍑🍑
This is a really good novel I want to preface my review with that positivity. The negative here which is a big negative is the level to which the main character is so ****ed up in the head. his new life parents died and he went from “oh cool Im in marvel to” “im an emo brooding uchiha who wont speak out loud when Im not at my house and Im going to be so focused on this project I have to build a portal to other universes” seriously He is like a worse version of sasuke after he gets the curse mark and gets mind raped by itachi again. its pretty bad and I definitely hate the main character. All of that said, the grammar, pacing, character development(of other characters like Gwen and MJ), and story design are all pretty good so if you can stomach the main character you’ll probably like this novel.
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