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I will give this work a perfect 5.0/5.0 rating due to these reasons. 1. Easy to read, understand and navigate paragraphs that clearly narrates the story. 2. Well written prose. 3. Enjoyable and characters that are both relatable. 4. You can feel the character's thoughts and emotions. 5. The atmosphere is really matching to the story. This is a well written story, well planned and well narrated. That is the only thing that I can think of writing this review. This story will definitely remain in my library and I may post a follow up review. Thank You for reading this review! The TradeMaker
I really hope that the author will continue on this book, it's one of the best written and described story I have seen so far, I hope this book will get the attention it deserves
I dropped it...Dude I'll be frank with you... Your novel doesn't belong here.... it should be animated or atleast a live action... the story have a lot of potential and it can only be expressed fully if it's adapted as a series. I can't really read it.... it's like I'm going to be spoiled from a great movie
This is honestly a well thought out and executed story. I thoroughly appreciate the story development and how everything is pieced together from different perspectives. There are some typos and mixed up words but that doesn't take away from the wonderful story telling. The plot, setting, and character development is well thought out. The descriptions are breathtaking and vivid. 100 percent should read
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Who would've thought that I'll be able to finish this book. When I first thought of the plot, I never thought that it would come into fruition. It was thanks to webnovel, for the discord servers, and to everyone who gave me the support. In this shameless review, I just want to formally thank everyone for everything they've done for me to finish this book. I hope you enjoy reading this. :) Once again, this is DaisukiDayoSenpai, signing out! ^0^
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I'll just give this novel what everyone else has given it. I just have a question. It says op-mc in the synopsis how op is he, and can i get an example? I really dont like when the mc is super op but when the mc is just a bit stronger than everyone else i do like.
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its really good I'm on chapter 56 so far and all i can say is amazing. I have been looking for a new genre to read and this is it. ΒΏ
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Reveal Spoiler Greetings, dear readers, author here shamelessly promoting my book. I have an announcement! It's my goal to get my book to 1 million views and thousands of Power Stones. If you want to help me reach my goal, then I would release more chapters! For every 1k power stones, I would release an additional 5 chapters for the month! So, if this book reached 3000 power stones, I would release fifteen additional chapters! Of course, if we could reach a million views this month, I would release an additional five chapters! That means that would be a total of twenty chapters for this month! We can do this ^o^ This would be fun for me! Sincerely, DaisukiDayoSenpai
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All-in-all, a decent story! I read a few chapters in, and I must say I like Red. He is able to stay calm under pressure, and I'm looking forward to big things from him! There are a few grammatical errors, but you address many of them in the comments. Keep up the good work, Author! β₯
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I must say, I've never felt so inspired to write a dystopian book before. But thanks to you, I'm considering it :)! Your book is so interesting and moving, it makes me very curious about what happens next. I love the instant bond between the captives, and its generally fun to read. Though I must say I was very unsure if this was written in first person or third person. And it seemed so much was happening at once, I was slightly overwhelmed haha. But all in all I loved this. And these are just my opinions so you don't have to pay them much mindπΊβ€
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DISCLAIMER:this review was written when i was in c48 well written story...nice English..... i feel like its concept is taken from movie blade runner and what I feel is that MC or rather group of MCS are clones
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So far so good! Carry on releasing please! I can't wait to read more of it 100% recommend
Great story you got here man usualy, not a big fan of sci-fi but i got sold on this one, the characters and the world setting is incredable we got something that will make me come back for more!
Dude! I love it!! It honestly is a very fun read, and I can't help but got some kind of like Hunger Games feel from this novel lol, is it just me? Seriously though, i enjoy the first 10 chapters and can't wait for the next update!! The characters are all very likeable and i'm practically in love with the MC. The world-building itself is described very clearly, making it easier for me to picture the kind of world written inside. Good job, Author! You will make it big someday, i'm sure of it! Another masterpiece added to my library!! Keep on writing! Best of luck.
I will give this work a perfect 5.0/5.0 rating due to these reasons. 1. Easy to read, understand and navigate paragraphs that clearly narrates the story. 2. Well written prose. 3. Enjoyable and characters that are both relatable. 4. You can feel the character's thoughts and emotions. 5. The atmosphere is really matching to the story. This is a well written story, well planned and well narrated. That is the only thing that I can think of writing this review. This story will definitely remain in my library and I may post a follow up review. Thank You for reading this review! The TradeMaker
I really hope that the author will continue on this book, it's one of the best written and described story I have seen so far, I hope this book will get the attention it deserves
I dropped it...Dude I'll be frank with you... Your novel doesn't belong here.... it should be animated or atleast a live action... the story have a lot of potential and it can only be expressed fully if it's adapted as a series. I can't really read it.... it's like I'm going to be spoiled from a great movie
This is honestly a well thought out and executed story. I thoroughly appreciate the story development and how everything is pieced together from different perspectives. There are some typos and mixed up words but that doesn't take away from the wonderful story telling. The plot, setting, and character development is well thought out. The descriptions are breathtaking and vivid. 100 percent should read
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Who would've thought that I'll be able to finish this book. When I first thought of the plot, I never thought that it would come into fruition. It was thanks to webnovel, for the discord servers, and to everyone who gave me the support. In this shameless review, I just want to formally thank everyone for everything they've done for me to finish this book. I hope you enjoy reading this. :) Once again, this is DaisukiDayoSenpai, signing out! ^0^
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I'll just give this novel what everyone else has given it. I just have a question. It says op-mc in the synopsis how op is he, and can i get an example? I really dont like when the mc is super op but when the mc is just a bit stronger than everyone else i do like.
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact EmailοΌluffyringdom@gmail.com
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email avarohm_review@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
its really good I'm on chapter 56 so far and all i can say is amazing. I have been looking for a new genre to read and this is it. ΒΏ
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Reveal Spoiler Greetings, dear readers, author here shamelessly promoting my book. I have an announcement! It's my goal to get my book to 1 million views and thousands of Power Stones. If you want to help me reach my goal, then I would release more chapters! For every 1k power stones, I would release an additional 5 chapters for the month! So, if this book reached 3000 power stones, I would release fifteen additional chapters! Of course, if we could reach a million views this month, I would release an additional five chapters! That means that would be a total of twenty chapters for this month! We can do this ^o^ This would be fun for me! Sincerely, DaisukiDayoSenpai
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact ringdom_promptswriting@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
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All-in-all, a decent story! I read a few chapters in, and I must say I like Red. He is able to stay calm under pressure, and I'm looking forward to big things from him! There are a few grammatical errors, but you address many of them in the comments. Keep up the good work, Author! β₯
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I must say, I've never felt so inspired to write a dystopian book before. But thanks to you, I'm considering it :)! Your book is so interesting and moving, it makes me very curious about what happens next. I love the instant bond between the captives, and its generally fun to read. Though I must say I was very unsure if this was written in first person or third person. And it seemed so much was happening at once, I was slightly overwhelmed haha. But all in all I loved this. And these are just my opinions so you don't have to pay them much mindπΊβ€
Reveal Spoiler DISCLAIMER:this review was written when i was in c48 well written story...nice English..... i feel like its concept is taken from movie blade runner and what I feel is that MC or rather group of MCS are clones
Reveal Spoiler So far so good! Carry on releasing please! I can't wait to read more of it 100% recommend
Great story you got here man usualy, not a big fan of sci-fi but i got sold on this one, the characters and the world setting is incredable we got something that will make me come back for more!
Dude! I love it!! It honestly is a very fun read, and I can't help but got some kind of like Hunger Games feel from this novel lol, is it just me? Seriously though, i enjoy the first 10 chapters and can't wait for the next update!! The characters are all very likeable and i'm practically in love with the MC. The world-building itself is described very clearly, making it easier for me to picture the kind of world written inside. Good job, Author! You will make it big someday, i'm sure of it! Another masterpiece added to my library!! Keep on writing! Best of luck.