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Write a reviewFinally a amazing Star wars fanfic hope it never gets dropped and finishes, thanks author stay safe and keep the release's coming. Can't wait to see how it developa haven't read yet but I will love it just from summary don't let me down.
A very good story. Its 02:58 right now so it should be a testament for how much i am into this story. I will sleep now. dont ask to elaporate futher this is enough. WQ 5 stars SoU 4 stars CD 5 stars WB 5 stars
Was amazing intill you added magic instead of just keeping to starwars. Yes i know the night sisters but still it just doesn't fit.i really liked the first 30 ish chapter they were amazing.
Reveal SpoilerThe concept of the story is really good. Who has not wished for an open world Star Wars story. A good one. But the development does not make sense. It is way too rushed. It is said that the force user class is difficult to get and to master. He gets it by visiting the hangar in Naboo (visiting a movie place). That’s it. Ok, I’m a Star Wars fan, and I want a Jedi main character, let’s pass on that one. Once he joins the Jedi, he learns that he has to master the skills by himself (there are no skills learnt by default in the class Jedi or with. You have to explore and learn by yourself. Love the idea. In a week he is a Jedi Palawan ready for missions. A bit too fast, but still within the acceptable. Not even a month (in game, outside not even a week since it’s a 4 time dilation) and he is a jedi knight, a senator and owns a planet. Instantly a millionaire in real life…really? This story just needed time to develop, but it has been in my opinion developed in such a speed that is not possible in a game. You don’t become powerful and rich in a galaxy wide game in less than a month time in game.
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I will say that I love this story and think its written quite well. However, I must inform the people reading this that this is most likely dropped since it hasn't been updated in a month with no word from the author. Sad
i didnt read it but its always good to boost ratings for no reason, also star wars is science fantasy as it has the force and start treck would be sco fi as it has only technilogical abilitys and aliens.
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I've never enjoyed a fanfic so much as I have enjoyed this one, the way the history is handled, the implementaion of lore that we don't really see in the movies, the WoW thing caught me by surprise but it was a welcome one (See what I did there? 👀) and the book overall is great, it makes me wish for a VR Game like it so bloody much, the release schedule is a bit weird and leaves much to be desired but I, as a writer understand it cus' I do the same, props to you author!
what a great hidden gem of a book. love the character and world design. was a little saddened by the slow update of chapters, but I would definitely recommend this book to any Star Wars fan!
good novel you should have more chapter and do not drooped it good luck$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
Reveal SpoilerOne of the best if not the best Star Wars fanfic on this site that I've read The only problem that I have is the stability of updates that are three ⭐⭐⭐ at best And it's a little bit fast paced almost to fast paced Please don't drop and keep up the good work author
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Interesting story and I like where it’s going. The MC can be annoying at times and the side characters are a bit 2D but nothing to bad. MC wanting to do stuff with his mom a lot is really weird and when he got upset when the mom got captured when she got in the game was a little much,like it’s just a game. Plus he’s just going to tell every body that’s his mom,a little stupid. It’s an alright story.
Awesome concept and story. Author Just needs to watch switching between Game Username and IRL name and be consistent with usage. Overall, a great read regardless if you are a gamer, Star Wars nerd, or just looking for a different kind of action novel. Definitely enjoyed.
Why did I get divorced? Well, last week was my birthday. My wife didn't wish me a happy birthday. My parents forgot and so did my kids. I went to work and even my colleagues didn't wish me a happy birthday. As I entered my office, my secretary said, "Happy birthday, boss!" I felt so special. She asked me out for lunch. After lunch, she invited me to her apartment. We went there and she said, "Do you mind if I go into the bedroom for a minute?" "Okay," I said. She came out 5 minutes later with a birthday cake, my wife, my parents, my kids, my friends, & my colleagues all yelling, "SURPRISE!!!" while I was waiting on the sofa... naked.
This book is in my opinion a masterpiece, the quality for the author, as an amat*ure, is amazing. With the majority of books on this site being either good grammar with a bad plot or bad grammar and a good plot, it is refreshing to see one with both positives. I love the idea he went for and the way in which the author has executed it, it is marvelous, and I wish that my own were of this quality. The update rate is very good and the chapters are long as well, which is always a plus. It is also refreshing to see non-2D side characters.
A very well written story that draws you in and leaves you wanting more. The character design and world building are top notch, which, alongside the excellent story development make for a extremely entertaining novel. (Fair warning that this novel whilst based in the Star Wars universe is not written canonically.) ♠️💚
The only gripe I have with the story is how there is not enough of it. Would recomend to anyone.............................................
Muito bem estruturado, não parece muito forçado a história . Além do personagem principal ter uma personalidade interessante, Gostaria que tivesse mais capítulos, pois é muito bom .
I like everything about it. I haven't seen anything wrong with it personally. Its consistent, good grammar, decent personality (if not a little greedy), and its decently realistic especially since it's in a game. Genuinely a good read.
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This story is by far one of the most in depth and best Star Wars si out there I wish there where more fanfic out there like this thank you for writing such a good story 👍🏾
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *)We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
Finally a amazing Star wars fanfic hope it never gets dropped and finishes, thanks author stay safe and keep the release's coming. Can't wait to see how it developa haven't read yet but I will love it just from summary don't let me down.
A very good story. Its 02:58 right now so it should be a testament for how much i am into this story. I will sleep now. dont ask to elaporate futher this is enough. WQ 5 stars SoU 4 stars CD 5 stars WB 5 stars
Was amazing intill you added magic instead of just keeping to starwars. Yes i know the night sisters but still it just doesn't fit.i really liked the first 30 ish chapter they were amazing.
Reveal SpoilerThe concept of the story is really good. Who has not wished for an open world Star Wars story. A good one. But the development does not make sense. It is way too rushed. It is said that the force user class is difficult to get and to master. He gets it by visiting the hangar in Naboo (visiting a movie place). That’s it. Ok, I’m a Star Wars fan, and I want a Jedi main character, let’s pass on that one. Once he joins the Jedi, he learns that he has to master the skills by himself (there are no skills learnt by default in the class Jedi or with. You have to explore and learn by yourself. Love the idea. In a week he is a Jedi Palawan ready for missions. A bit too fast, but still within the acceptable. Not even a month (in game, outside not even a week since it’s a 4 time dilation) and he is a jedi knight, a senator and owns a planet. Instantly a millionaire in real life…really? This story just needed time to develop, but it has been in my opinion developed in such a speed that is not possible in a game. You don’t become powerful and rich in a galaxy wide game in less than a month time in game.
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I will say that I love this story and think its written quite well. However, I must inform the people reading this that this is most likely dropped since it hasn't been updated in a month with no word from the author. Sad
i didnt read it but its always good to boost ratings for no reason, also star wars is science fantasy as it has the force and start treck would be sco fi as it has only technilogical abilitys and aliens.
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I've never enjoyed a fanfic so much as I have enjoyed this one, the way the history is handled, the implementaion of lore that we don't really see in the movies, the WoW thing caught me by surprise but it was a welcome one (See what I did there? 👀) and the book overall is great, it makes me wish for a VR Game like it so bloody much, the release schedule is a bit weird and leaves much to be desired but I, as a writer understand it cus' I do the same, props to you author!
what a great hidden gem of a book. love the character and world design. was a little saddened by the slow update of chapters, but I would definitely recommend this book to any Star Wars fan!
good novel you should have more chapter and do not drooped it good luck$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$
Reveal SpoilerOne of the best if not the best Star Wars fanfic on this site that I've read The only problem that I have is the stability of updates that are three ⭐⭐⭐ at best And it's a little bit fast paced almost to fast paced Please don't drop and keep up the good work author
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Love Star Wars leeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet
Interesting story and I like where it’s going. The MC can be annoying at times and the side characters are a bit 2D but nothing to bad. MC wanting to do stuff with his mom a lot is really weird and when he got upset when the mom got captured when she got in the game was a little much,like it’s just a game. Plus he’s just going to tell every body that’s his mom,a little stupid. It’s an alright story.
Awesome concept and story. Author Just needs to watch switching between Game Username and IRL name and be consistent with usage. Overall, a great read regardless if you are a gamer, Star Wars nerd, or just looking for a different kind of action novel. Definitely enjoyed.
Why did I get divorced? Well, last week was my birthday. My wife didn't wish me a happy birthday. My parents forgot and so did my kids. I went to work and even my colleagues didn't wish me a happy birthday. As I entered my office, my secretary said, "Happy birthday, boss!" I felt so special. She asked me out for lunch. After lunch, she invited me to her apartment. We went there and she said, "Do you mind if I go into the bedroom for a minute?" "Okay," I said. She came out 5 minutes later with a birthday cake, my wife, my parents, my kids, my friends, & my colleagues all yelling, "SURPRISE!!!" while I was waiting on the sofa... naked.
This book is in my opinion a masterpiece, the quality for the author, as an amat*ure, is amazing. With the majority of books on this site being either good grammar with a bad plot or bad grammar and a good plot, it is refreshing to see one with both positives. I love the idea he went for and the way in which the author has executed it, it is marvelous, and I wish that my own were of this quality. The update rate is very good and the chapters are long as well, which is always a plus. It is also refreshing to see non-2D side characters.
A very well written story that draws you in and leaves you wanting more. The character design and world building are top notch, which, alongside the excellent story development make for a extremely entertaining novel. (Fair warning that this novel whilst based in the Star Wars universe is not written canonically.) ♠️💚
The only gripe I have with the story is how there is not enough of it. Would recomend to anyone.............................................
Muito bem estruturado, não parece muito forçado a história . Além do personagem principal ter uma personalidade interessante, Gostaria que tivesse mais capítulos, pois é muito bom .
I like everything about it. I haven't seen anything wrong with it personally. Its consistent, good grammar, decent personality (if not a little greedy), and its decently realistic especially since it's in a game. Genuinely a good read.
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This story is by far one of the most in depth and best Star Wars si out there I wish there where more fanfic out there like this thank you for writing such a good story 👍🏾
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *)We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.