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The story starts off promisingly but unfortunately it quickly becomes tedious after about 500 chapters. The plot mainly revolves around the main character discovering new sects gaining allies and improving his cultivation which gets repetitive and dull. Despite introducing a few characters from other worlds there isn't any significant development in the overall plot even after a thousand chapters. It seems that the author stretched out a mere hundred chapters worth of plot into an unnecessarily lengthy novel. The author also goes into a lot of technical detail about cultivation theory which may be impressive but it detracts from the novel's enjoyment. I read the novel for its storyline not to learn about some made-up cultivation theory. Although the novel has potential, the dragging plotline made me lose interest and I won't be continuing with it.
I'm so sad.This has great potential, it could have been such a good read,but everything comes too easy to the mc, I always hate the novel where mc is such a genius, that even the best ppl to have ever existed before him cant compare, even if that's the case make him struggle a bit he is 21 y/o battling ppl who are 4000 y/o or is smarter than them, or has lived thru more than them, which is just lazy writing, the author should read SGWM and steal some of the MC's character progression and power progression, its done much better, all in all I'm disappointed ... (read up to 1158ch)
I am a big fan of your novel and do not give up. My wish is to see your novel complete, because I am really attached to it and to the MC and events. I even rejoice with the joy of the characters and grieve for their sadness. Indeed, I have never been attached to any such novel before .And I wish to you all the best. Sorry for my bad writing in English.
this is one of my favorite novel, with a vast world to explore. This novel give you a unique vibe which is very different from typical cultivation novels. For any new readers don't put too much focus on the cultivation part as the first 400 chapter is very slow in that case. But if you have the patience it will surely reward you.
A little bit too slow for my liking. Dropped after 80 chapters due to no plot and slow development
what true masterpiece it's just mashup of all xianxia cliche , be unique for once
I just realized even tho I’ve been reading this for so long I never left a review so here I am. Anyway I’m not good at writing reviews so I’m just gonna say this is one of the best novels I’ve read and it is also the one of the first novels that I read and I’m still following it. I recommend it to you, read it and you won’f regret it. please don’t mind my grammar
This novel is for those who read and like cultivation novel and are sick of “Young Master” and “Jade Beauties”. Although it’ s boring in first couple of chapters it gets better after.
Come on, the book[img=strong] iits really good, the pace is good(i know, i know, xiaofan world made us wait a lot) i was freaking curious about the void and other worlds and realms, anyway the plot moved on, and was so good that i hated to wait for new chapters. Please keep up the good work author. Don't disappoint us, and impress us with better and better development.
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AUTHOR - Grand_Void_Daoist Awesome Story, really long it can you let us know who's the girl in the photo MC's personality changes when he met the Spider, The spider does act he is from the higher world. I'll try to continue reading if it continues being like I mean the MC is the puppet I have to let go of this novel I am at 1556 now it Awesome
i am giving it a 5 stars, just based upon the very impressive 1st 60 chapters. even though later it got so slow that it made me take a break . but looking upon huge chapters up ahead im sure it will pick up the pace.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------ I follow your other novel so I know it's good but I have one question. MC is a hero? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
i loved this one but i don't like some parts about mc character but that is also a part of him. so I can say u can definitely read this.
I’m not sure why this book isn’t more popular. This was just the right book to break my reading funk and get me back to enjoying cultivation novels. After a week of bingeing (1400+ chapters) I can say that I’m excited to see how long the author can keep things interesting as we leave the mortal world.
I've read up to chapter 600 or so and, like most of the stories here, it has potential but is wasted because everything comes too easy to the protagonist. Does he need to evolve? wild situation happens and he goes to the next level... Does he needs money? boom, a senior gives all of his money to him, or he finds part of a sect's minnning ground and has lots of spirit sones... The plot if filled with situations too convenient added to make him grow easily.
Review till chapter 1429. Fantastic storyline till now. Except for some minor plot holes, the story is consistent with great writing and a fenomenal mc. The cultivation levels are also understandable and is also explained in detail. If this keeps up, it will definetely become a great story as the story progresses. Already looking forward to an tournament arc if that is planned. Just fantastic, and hope more are deciding to read this story.
Even though there are some grievances that I have concerning the development of mc, This story is certainly above average in its own genre. cons in my opinion: the mc start out as a 15 year old teenager while having the mentality of a 9 year old. I have to mention that he improves tremendously as the story progress but my complaint is that why he has to start with -50 iq then to be improved to a normal mental capacity, 1000 chapters later. the antagonists are a mix and mash of old school arrogant type and some rare smart type which is a improvment in this genre. there are some spelling and grammatical problems specially in the latter half of the story which I don't mind but I suggest editing them. all allies are always shocked and impressed by the mc which is allright at the beginning but after 1000 chapters it becomes super annoying when we get 4 paragraphs of praise for the mc every other chapter.
1200 chapters till he finally started walking some worlds, there’s slowed paced and then there’s this. But it was enjoyable so far just could have been cut in half and wouldn’t have much of an impact on the story
Like author says, it's a show burn, but very exciting. It's definitely worth the privilege chapters, I read them as soon as they come out. Can't get enough. [img=recommend]
It is a very well written eastern fantasy novel[img=recommend. While it may not fit to someone people's preferences for it genre I is very well written and should be considered one of the best.
A great novel with an even better character development. I love to follow the MC on his way to get stronger and I enjoy reading the story.
This is hidden gem space manipulation and cultivation sutra are best i have seen For me its the best novel there i have read every eastern fantasy but this one with every chApter hits a spot for me its simply brilaint .first story arc completes in 1100 chapter but this is worth it .there is character development . No young master no harem no irritations simply .mc does what he wants to do in latest chapter is exploring the things by detail which is looking amazing and cultivation system of both qi and body tempering is also well explained .for body tempering its going a best way there is out in this universe of writing
its a must try for cultivation lovers no young master are there and mc is growing in a good way and world background is building it will be a long one but it will be a worth one
It is good it is slow read get it a try. the story don't start until 40 to 50 it gets good. ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
Great book so far. It has a wonderful fast paced story that really draws you in. My only problem is the many literary mistakes throughout that makes me reread a sentence or mentally correct it myself.
The story starts off promisingly but unfortunately it quickly becomes tedious after about 500 chapters. The plot mainly revolves around the main character discovering new sects gaining allies and improving his cultivation which gets repetitive and dull. Despite introducing a few characters from other worlds there isn't any significant development in the overall plot even after a thousand chapters. It seems that the author stretched out a mere hundred chapters worth of plot into an unnecessarily lengthy novel. The author also goes into a lot of technical detail about cultivation theory which may be impressive but it detracts from the novel's enjoyment. I read the novel for its storyline not to learn about some made-up cultivation theory. Although the novel has potential, the dragging plotline made me lose interest and I won't be continuing with it.
I'm so sad.This has great potential, it could have been such a good read,but everything comes too easy to the mc, I always hate the novel where mc is such a genius, that even the best ppl to have ever existed before him cant compare, even if that's the case make him struggle a bit he is 21 y/o battling ppl who are 4000 y/o or is smarter than them, or has lived thru more than them, which is just lazy writing, the author should read SGWM and steal some of the MC's character progression and power progression, its done much better, all in all I'm disappointed ... (read up to 1158ch)
I am a big fan of your novel and do not give up. My wish is to see your novel complete, because I am really attached to it and to the MC and events. I even rejoice with the joy of the characters and grieve for their sadness. Indeed, I have never been attached to any such novel before .And I wish to you all the best. Sorry for my bad writing in English.
this is one of my favorite novel, with a vast world to explore. This novel give you a unique vibe which is very different from typical cultivation novels. For any new readers don't put too much focus on the cultivation part as the first 400 chapter is very slow in that case. But if you have the patience it will surely reward you.
A little bit too slow for my liking. Dropped after 80 chapters due to no plot and slow development
what true masterpiece it's just mashup of all xianxia cliche , be unique for once
I just realized even tho I’ve been reading this for so long I never left a review so here I am. Anyway I’m not good at writing reviews so I’m just gonna say this is one of the best novels I’ve read and it is also the one of the first novels that I read and I’m still following it. I recommend it to you, read it and you won’f regret it. please don’t mind my grammar
This novel is for those who read and like cultivation novel and are sick of “Young Master” and “Jade Beauties”. Although it’ s boring in first couple of chapters it gets better after.
Come on, the book[img=strong] iits really good, the pace is good(i know, i know, xiaofan world made us wait a lot) i was freaking curious about the void and other worlds and realms, anyway the plot moved on, and was so good that i hated to wait for new chapters. Please keep up the good work author. Don't disappoint us, and impress us with better and better development.
Reveal Spoiler AUTHOR - Grand_Void_Daoist Awesome Story, really long it can you let us know who's the girl in the photo MC's personality changes when he met the Spider, The spider does act he is from the higher world. I'll try to continue reading if it continues being like I mean the MC is the puppet I have to let go of this novel I am at 1556 now it Awesome
i am giving it a 5 stars, just based upon the very impressive 1st 60 chapters. even though later it got so slow that it made me take a break . but looking upon huge chapters up ahead im sure it will pick up the pace.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------ I follow your other novel so I know it's good but I have one question. MC is a hero? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
i loved this one but i don't like some parts about mc character but that is also a part of him. so I can say u can definitely read this.
I’m not sure why this book isn’t more popular. This was just the right book to break my reading funk and get me back to enjoying cultivation novels. After a week of bingeing (1400+ chapters) I can say that I’m excited to see how long the author can keep things interesting as we leave the mortal world.
I've read up to chapter 600 or so and, like most of the stories here, it has potential but is wasted because everything comes too easy to the protagonist. Does he need to evolve? wild situation happens and he goes to the next level... Does he needs money? boom, a senior gives all of his money to him, or he finds part of a sect's minnning ground and has lots of spirit sones... The plot if filled with situations too convenient added to make him grow easily.
Review till chapter 1429. Fantastic storyline till now. Except for some minor plot holes, the story is consistent with great writing and a fenomenal mc. The cultivation levels are also understandable and is also explained in detail. If this keeps up, it will definetely become a great story as the story progresses. Already looking forward to an tournament arc if that is planned. Just fantastic, and hope more are deciding to read this story.
Even though there are some grievances that I have concerning the development of mc, This story is certainly above average in its own genre. cons in my opinion: the mc start out as a 15 year old teenager while having the mentality of a 9 year old. I have to mention that he improves tremendously as the story progress but my complaint is that why he has to start with -50 iq then to be improved to a normal mental capacity, 1000 chapters later. the antagonists are a mix and mash of old school arrogant type and some rare smart type which is a improvment in this genre. there are some spelling and grammatical problems specially in the latter half of the story which I don't mind but I suggest editing them. all allies are always shocked and impressed by the mc which is allright at the beginning but after 1000 chapters it becomes super annoying when we get 4 paragraphs of praise for the mc every other chapter.
1200 chapters till he finally started walking some worlds, there’s slowed paced and then there’s this. But it was enjoyable so far just could have been cut in half and wouldn’t have much of an impact on the story
Like author says, it's a show burn, but very exciting. It's definitely worth the privilege chapters, I read them as soon as they come out. Can't get enough. [img=recommend]
It is a very well written eastern fantasy novel[img=recommend. While it may not fit to someone people's preferences for it genre I is very well written and should be considered one of the best.
A great novel with an even better character development. I love to follow the MC on his way to get stronger and I enjoy reading the story.
This is hidden gem space manipulation and cultivation sutra are best i have seen For me its the best novel there i have read every eastern fantasy but this one with every chApter hits a spot for me its simply brilaint .first story arc completes in 1100 chapter but this is worth it .there is character development . No young master no harem no irritations simply .mc does what he wants to do in latest chapter is exploring the things by detail which is looking amazing and cultivation system of both qi and body tempering is also well explained .for body tempering its going a best way there is out in this universe of writing
its a must try for cultivation lovers no young master are there and mc is growing in a good way and world background is building it will be a long one but it will be a worth one
It is good it is slow read get it a try. the story don't start until 40 to 50 it gets good. ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
Great book so far. It has a wonderful fast paced story that really draws you in. My only problem is the many literary mistakes throughout that makes me reread a sentence or mentally correct it myself.
........................................ its good.