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Hwy why its sooooo slow in cultivation progress?? 300+and stilll in peak qi refining when wil he reach core condensed?? 400 chaps for single advancement thats tooo slow man
Slowest pace story 800 chapter and he is still in nascent shoul adult stage I think writer should atleast speed it a little it’ s…………………………..
Story is actually written very well as in grammar, flow and characters, plot when considered individually. But big problem is how mc and plot connects, or should I say doesn't connect. Mc just doesn't have much agency and there's not much internal motivations in story form mc to do what he does. It seems like author develops some interesting plot, and then mc is made to flow trough that plot like puppet, mc just doesn't seem to have agency. There's also the problem of mc being constantly bailed out by his ring when stuff gets even slightly hard, it's always some magical thing that bails him out, not his own intellect, skill or perseverance. This again reduces mc's agency, it's just very lame. It would not matter if it was just sometimes, but both of this things happen constantly. Good example is whole thing happening in mc's village, he was already ready to go, he didn't have any reason to stay, no friends or family, no lure of great rewards, and again he was planning to leave. But then author made the plot happen, which I do agree is great when considered in isolation, but mc just started to participate in solving this mystery and helping around and we have absolutely no idea why, and there's no internal reason in story that tells us why. He just does like some zombie because the plot is there so obviously he should somehow participate in it. He even wanted to see Lord of Hei dudes, but again, there was just no reason for that, he just wanted to because story required him to. There was no mention of potential rewards or anything that would help mc, if anything seeing mysterious strong person is just an huge threat. I would really like to give this better review, but I just can't because story till 150 has been mostly just about boat(mc) being pushed around by waves, and every time boat is about to crash into huge rock, another wave just comes in and pushes the boat to the side. I would like that boat to have some oars, sails and actual person directing it.
The star rating is not actual, just wanna say that author really like the name 'Lin Mu', literally used it on his other novel's MC name... ..
I like the story from the start, but the MC's personality changes when he met the Spider, MC couldn't decide on his own he has to get the opinion of that spider even on little things. The spider does not act he is from the higher world. I'll try to continue reading if it continues being like I mean the MC is the puppet I have to let go of this novel.
Love the novel... Just startimg to feel a disconnect with the story because it doesn't match what the title and synopsis were about... Close to 1000 chapters in he hasn't been to another world... He has travelled to PLANES which are just detached lands of his world... Feel the story would have been better divided into two books... Maybe the first one would be titled "War for *****" or "*****'s Savior" or something... Walker of the Worlds would have been after he left his world... Or maybe it could have been named Void or Space Walker since thats more appropriate to his abilities... Makes me not focus on the novel sometimes and just wonder when he will be the walker of worlds we were promised....
This is a great novel, through my reading journey, I've met quite a few hidden gems, but this is one of the only ones that is still going, I totally recommend it. I didn't mention any details on purpose, go and check it out. You won't be disappointed... I think 🤔
Story starts on a good note and is quite interesting. Cliché scenes are there but they aren't annoying cause author knows how to do it. Writing Quality is good at the start and drops a little bit later but it is still good. All other things also get a 4 star from me but One bad point here is Author doesn't really care about the reader's opinions and comments, you would see him liking every other comment but I think he barely reads any coz some of them are criticism or pointing out some some mistakes or inconsistency but the author just gives a like on the comments and moves ahead without addressing the issue. Neither does he correct the inconsistencies. Other than this it is an enjoyable read.
i believe its one of the best stories in this site the story is pretty good and it gives you the impression that it will continue in this quality
(Chapter 893) - (on phone = bad grammer) Great story, Lin mu(mc) is a very fun character to read about and i really like him as a person. He is very hard working, and it is fun to see someone who really put in the work for the things that they are getting. Its a great read and i reccomend it. -PudgeTheBird
The story seems rushed with unexpected tragedies. It was good until the Blood Curse but later its becoming chaotic. Pathetic plots started occuring and unnecessary death happened. poor plot tried reading more but have to drop now.
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the MC and this story give me pure rage. MC: oh so I made you lose months of regular pay and you want payment? Villagers: yes MC:*walks away* villagers:*chase him* MC: whY aRE U HiTtinG mE???? idk know if the author is a genius or as drain dead. As I can not tell if he wrote the mc to have the brainpower for his age unlike every other author or the author has a weird sense of right and wrong. Also, the writing quality is pretty poor but author to you
With each new chapter the quality of novel is going down fast. Super hero vibes in cultivation with sometime so cheesy lines that you start losing brain cells. Read upto 789 chapters, so far world background is awesome but brainded mc with super hero vibes ruin it for me.
It's quite likely that you have read the novel you should already know that it has a slow progress which is something I like about this novel. Though, it's just a personal preference of mine. The story is something that will keep you hooked. In the case of fighting scene i find it a bit lacking in detail. Also time to time you will find some typing mistake. They are not so severe that you will find it hard to even read. But it's still there. Overall I find the story enjoyable and that's what truly counts. In the end it's all about personal preference. Though, I will suggest you guys to read this novel. And that's about all is there to say.
This novel is definitely the slowest one I have read till now!! I tried my best reading it upto 100 chapters but can you believe he, a cultivator is still in the same town since the beginning and the same thing (like a corpse was found) would be repeated thrice in 2-3 chapters, just feels like increasing unnecessary word counts
started out very world developed with the world and character didnt seem out of the place but even tho I know the author said its slow paced i didnt expect this slow pace he was in the first realm for more than 400 chapter mann i like slow paced novel but now it just seem idiotic i dont maybe i will drop it for now and read or stumble upon in when it have more chapter... the pace story going i think I will read it a few years later coz totally not worth reading this slow paced novel with just 800 or so chapter
A good book. Every action of MC is well thought of and wwell planned. The mc doesnt deviates from his personality like many MCs of other novels like having multiple personality disorder. This book deserves more recognition.Its a hidden gem.
A good one... really liked it up til now.. although a little slow bit I am sure it will pay off in the later arcs of novel as better character building and world building...
Will the two Lin Mus meet up at some point?..................................................................................................
I was in a dilemma weather to give 5 stars beacuse of the awesome and amazing story plot or to give 1 star for thinning my patience time and time again with the very slow pace of the novel. Ultimately 5 star choice won and I will try to stay and endure the slow pace. But I still wanna request the Author to please speed up. Not much 20 to 50% will do.🤘🤘✌️✌️👌👌🙇
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For anyone wondering if they should give this novel a try, I say definitely! This novel is very high quality with great world building and characters. The grammar is extremely well done and there is almost no spelling mistakes either. The story starts out slow and then picks up the pace and flows quite well . Definitely one of my favorite novels that I look forward to every time I log on!
Hwy why its sooooo slow in cultivation progress?? 300+and stilll in peak qi refining when wil he reach core condensed?? 400 chaps for single advancement thats tooo slow man
Slowest pace story 800 chapter and he is still in nascent shoul adult stage I think writer should atleast speed it a little it’ s…………………………..
Story is actually written very well as in grammar, flow and characters, plot when considered individually. But big problem is how mc and plot connects, or should I say doesn't connect. Mc just doesn't have much agency and there's not much internal motivations in story form mc to do what he does. It seems like author develops some interesting plot, and then mc is made to flow trough that plot like puppet, mc just doesn't seem to have agency. There's also the problem of mc being constantly bailed out by his ring when stuff gets even slightly hard, it's always some magical thing that bails him out, not his own intellect, skill or perseverance. This again reduces mc's agency, it's just very lame. It would not matter if it was just sometimes, but both of this things happen constantly. Good example is whole thing happening in mc's village, he was already ready to go, he didn't have any reason to stay, no friends or family, no lure of great rewards, and again he was planning to leave. But then author made the plot happen, which I do agree is great when considered in isolation, but mc just started to participate in solving this mystery and helping around and we have absolutely no idea why, and there's no internal reason in story that tells us why. He just does like some zombie because the plot is there so obviously he should somehow participate in it. He even wanted to see Lord of Hei dudes, but again, there was just no reason for that, he just wanted to because story required him to. There was no mention of potential rewards or anything that would help mc, if anything seeing mysterious strong person is just an huge threat. I would really like to give this better review, but I just can't because story till 150 has been mostly just about boat(mc) being pushed around by waves, and every time boat is about to crash into huge rock, another wave just comes in and pushes the boat to the side. I would like that boat to have some oars, sails and actual person directing it.
The star rating is not actual, just wanna say that author really like the name 'Lin Mu', literally used it on his other novel's MC name... ..
I like the story from the start, but the MC's personality changes when he met the Spider, MC couldn't decide on his own he has to get the opinion of that spider even on little things. The spider does not act he is from the higher world. I'll try to continue reading if it continues being like I mean the MC is the puppet I have to let go of this novel.
Love the novel... Just startimg to feel a disconnect with the story because it doesn't match what the title and synopsis were about... Close to 1000 chapters in he hasn't been to another world... He has travelled to PLANES which are just detached lands of his world... Feel the story would have been better divided into two books... Maybe the first one would be titled "War for *****" or "*****'s Savior" or something... Walker of the Worlds would have been after he left his world... Or maybe it could have been named Void or Space Walker since thats more appropriate to his abilities... Makes me not focus on the novel sometimes and just wonder when he will be the walker of worlds we were promised....
This is a great novel, through my reading journey, I've met quite a few hidden gems, but this is one of the only ones that is still going, I totally recommend it. I didn't mention any details on purpose, go and check it out. You won't be disappointed... I think 🤔
Story starts on a good note and is quite interesting. Cliché scenes are there but they aren't annoying cause author knows how to do it. Writing Quality is good at the start and drops a little bit later but it is still good. All other things also get a 4 star from me but One bad point here is Author doesn't really care about the reader's opinions and comments, you would see him liking every other comment but I think he barely reads any coz some of them are criticism or pointing out some some mistakes or inconsistency but the author just gives a like on the comments and moves ahead without addressing the issue. Neither does he correct the inconsistencies. Other than this it is an enjoyable read.
i believe its one of the best stories in this site the story is pretty good and it gives you the impression that it will continue in this quality
(Chapter 893) - (on phone = bad grammer) Great story, Lin mu(mc) is a very fun character to read about and i really like him as a person. He is very hard working, and it is fun to see someone who really put in the work for the things that they are getting. Its a great read and i reccomend it. -PudgeTheBird
The story seems rushed with unexpected tragedies. It was good until the Blood Curse but later its becoming chaotic. Pathetic plots started occuring and unnecessary death happened. poor plot tried reading more but have to drop now.
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Reveal Spoiler the MC and this story give me pure rage. MC: oh so I made you lose months of regular pay and you want payment? Villagers: yes MC:*walks away* villagers:*chase him* MC: whY aRE U HiTtinG mE???? idk know if the author is a genius or as drain dead. As I can not tell if he wrote the mc to have the brainpower for his age unlike every other author or the author has a weird sense of right and wrong. Also, the writing quality is pretty poor but author to you
With each new chapter the quality of novel is going down fast. Super hero vibes in cultivation with sometime so cheesy lines that you start losing brain cells. Read upto 789 chapters, so far world background is awesome but brainded mc with super hero vibes ruin it for me.
It's quite likely that you have read the novel you should already know that it has a slow progress which is something I like about this novel. Though, it's just a personal preference of mine. The story is something that will keep you hooked. In the case of fighting scene i find it a bit lacking in detail. Also time to time you will find some typing mistake. They are not so severe that you will find it hard to even read. But it's still there. Overall I find the story enjoyable and that's what truly counts. In the end it's all about personal preference. Though, I will suggest you guys to read this novel. And that's about all is there to say.
This novel is definitely the slowest one I have read till now!! I tried my best reading it upto 100 chapters but can you believe he, a cultivator is still in the same town since the beginning and the same thing (like a corpse was found) would be repeated thrice in 2-3 chapters, just feels like increasing unnecessary word counts
started out very world developed with the world and character didnt seem out of the place but even tho I know the author said its slow paced i didnt expect this slow pace he was in the first realm for more than 400 chapter mann i like slow paced novel but now it just seem idiotic i dont maybe i will drop it for now and read or stumble upon in when it have more chapter... the pace story going i think I will read it a few years later coz totally not worth reading this slow paced novel with just 800 or so chapter
A good book. Every action of MC is well thought of and wwell planned. The mc doesnt deviates from his personality like many MCs of other novels like having multiple personality disorder. This book deserves more recognition.Its a hidden gem.
A good one... really liked it up til now.. although a little slow bit I am sure it will pay off in the later arcs of novel as better character building and world building...
Will the two Lin Mus meet up at some point?..................................................................................................
I was in a dilemma weather to give 5 stars beacuse of the awesome and amazing story plot or to give 1 star for thinning my patience time and time again with the very slow pace of the novel. Ultimately 5 star choice won and I will try to stay and endure the slow pace. But I still wanna request the Author to please speed up. Not much 20 to 50% will do.🤘🤘✌️✌️👌👌🙇
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For anyone wondering if they should give this novel a try, I say definitely! This novel is very high quality with great world building and characters. The grammar is extremely well done and there is almost no spelling mistakes either. The story starts out slow and then picks up the pace and flows quite well . Definitely one of my favorite novels that I look forward to every time I log on!