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Hi! This is Molly, an editor from other platform. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in our platform. if you are interested in, Please reply to me. so I can discuss this with you in detail.
im not gonna lie this novel needs a million or 10 views this is a unique hidden gem tthats already polished and making its way to the museum to be appreciated. this novel is worth ur time and not a single chap would it waste ur time
Hi! This is Molly, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in 2 week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $50 advance by joining the contest.
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email :Rebecca_661@outlook.com
I hope it will be continued. It's like Custom Made Demon just without the bad chinese parts. It would be good if he could be summoned to the human wolrd in the later chapters. (sorry for bad english)
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Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact ringdom_promptswriting@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact michelle1ringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Man, this book is a true gem hidden in the dirt of the generic novels in here. The writing is amazing. This book inspired me to write my own story which will be coming shortly ;}. The character descent into madness is perfect since its well, based in Hell. The interactions are good. The deranged scenes that are created thanks to the readers imagination is on point. The only issue I have with the book is basically the updates, I know as an author sometimes you get that wall, so writer come back when you feel well or when your ideas just decide to flow again. Thanks it was, and hope it will keep being a great experience. I definitely recommend a read. [img=coins]
Very nice novel, MC is very well-rounded and feels realistic. The environment, as much as it is left vague forn now, feels really good and intriguing. Not much story developement for now, but i also like the sense of aimlessness of a guy suddenly thrust in Hell with no other suggestion than "Fall deeper". Very good grammar, i also really like the author's writing style; feeling a bit of an Edgar Allan Poe influence (maybe?) on the most delirious sections of inner thoughts. Overall, great job and keep it up!
This story is very well written and intriguing. Discovering the world alongside the protagonist in a non-childish way is very refreshing. the sense of survival! Also, I love the fact the mc isn't just the stereotypical op human mc as soon as they are introduced. Truly amazing work!
It's been awhile since I've read a novel that featured it's levelling system organised. The descriptions are great and each chapter just builds up to the next. I look forward to reading more.
This is amazing, I can't begin to find the words to describe this work but I have to say keep up the good work. The pacing is great as the world slowly unravel its self. Wordings and descriptions are on point as you get to immerse yourself in the character, scene or situation. Sigh, if only web novel would allow some background music that would play as you read...that'd be even better.
First things first, the novels quality. If you enjoy system novels like chrysalis or solo levelling, you'll surely enjoy this novel. One of the authors strong sides is his vocubulary. That's a neat strong side when your story takes place inside of hell(spoiler alert, it does). The novel has darker theme, you won't get your "Reincarnated as a slime" feel from it.
Extremely well written for a first time writer. Though it is a bit dark, if you like that sort of thing you'll definitely love this book. Great start, I'm really enjoying it. Keep it up author!
The story is original, and I love the way the author portrays the thoughts. The way the plot unfolds, is very exhilarating and full of suspense. This is a must read book, it's already one of my favorites. Good story, good plot good stuff.
I won't talk about what happens in this novel very much but what I will tell you is what I think about it after reading 15 chapters. This one of the greatest original novels that I have read which wasn't a translation, there are little to no grammar mistakes the descriptions of the characters are great. The world-building is currently inexistent as there are only 15 chapters but it looks like it will be great, the MC seems to be pretty logical and smart while he also has his own times where he is controlled by his demonic form instincts. There are currently 2 recurring characters that were born at the same time as him and they are in the same area, and the only thing I can say is that I'm looking forward to seeing further interactions between them. The system is decent and the notifications aren't spammed very often, at the same time you could say that they are only used at the good times, the chapter ending makes you crave for more chapters. I support this novel and its author and he will have my power stones from now, please consider reading the novel as up till now it was a great ride, hopefully the author will keep pumping out chapters of the same quality at the same rate he is doing now. What are you doing still reading this review? Read the damn novel :)
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I really like the book it has me coming back for more but I'm not really fond of the character design and evolution but it's a great book
An absolute gem it is a story that has a similar beginning to custom made demon king but darker and more gory while still being awesome. Hope it is not dropped
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Great book! 11 chapters in and I'm already hooked. This book is hard to fault. The story development is very well-paced and understandable and the writing quality is fantastic. On top of that, the stability of updates seems to be very consistent at the moment. Keep up the good work Author. You've got my support!
Okay, I haven't finished the other chapters, but Bruh, It is amazing, I love the way you write, the details you give and everything. People that are reading the reviews to know if you should read it. I only have one thing to say "Read it if you like the type of weak-starting MC and becoming stronger, this book is amazing, I'm sure it will become one of the best in the future". Please don't ever stop writing this, Keep up the good work!!
So ive read up to Chapter 10, and I have to say that this novel is quite good compared to many on this sight. It skip** over unneeded nonsense and jumps right into pure and unadulterated violence. So far the writing quality is great, and the plot is steady. Although its still to early to tell, and I would like to see more chapters before I can really decide how good this book will be, id say it had great potential. Great Job author <3
Very high potential but seems a little bit like Custom make demon king. Except better storyline and system but written worse. /////////////////////////////////
This story is really well written. Good vocabulary, excellent grammar, and an exciting story. It is also written in first person which not many authors on this site use. Overall, the chances of this story being at the top are pretty high. I recommend those to read this if they love game-like stories.
Absolutely fantastic. The diverse vocabulary and tone really make me feel like I'min hell watching what this vile man is doing. For a first book, it feels better than experienced veterans despite the many grammatical errors.
Right from the start, you can practically FEEL the world with how vivid the descriptions are. The premise is interesting. Horror isn't usually my thing, but I am absolutely loving this!
So I know it been over two years since this book has been updated but if the author sees this please countinue the novel it was amazing as it is I can’t imagine if it had a proper ending how good it would be
Amazing, Update more if possible KEk kek kek kek kek kek kekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkekkek
Hi! This is Molly, an editor from other platform. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in our platform. if you are interested in, Please reply to me. so I can discuss this with you in detail.
im not gonna lie this novel needs a million or 10 views this is a unique hidden gem tthats already polished and making its way to the museum to be appreciated. this novel is worth ur time and not a single chap would it waste ur time
Hi! This is Molly, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in 2 week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $50 advance by joining the contest.
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email :Rebecca_661@outlook.com
I hope it will be continued. It's like Custom Made Demon just without the bad chinese parts. It would be good if he could be summoned to the human wolrd in the later chapters. (sorry for bad english)
i love it bro .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact ringdom_promptswriting@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact michelle1ringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Man, this book is a true gem hidden in the dirt of the generic novels in here. The writing is amazing. This book inspired me to write my own story which will be coming shortly ;}. The character descent into madness is perfect since its well, based in Hell. The interactions are good. The deranged scenes that are created thanks to the readers imagination is on point. The only issue I have with the book is basically the updates, I know as an author sometimes you get that wall, so writer come back when you feel well or when your ideas just decide to flow again. Thanks it was, and hope it will keep being a great experience. I definitely recommend a read. [img=coins]
Very nice novel, MC is very well-rounded and feels realistic. The environment, as much as it is left vague forn now, feels really good and intriguing. Not much story developement for now, but i also like the sense of aimlessness of a guy suddenly thrust in Hell with no other suggestion than "Fall deeper". Very good grammar, i also really like the author's writing style; feeling a bit of an Edgar Allan Poe influence (maybe?) on the most delirious sections of inner thoughts. Overall, great job and keep it up!
This story is very well written and intriguing. Discovering the world alongside the protagonist in a non-childish way is very refreshing. the sense of survival! Also, I love the fact the mc isn't just the stereotypical op human mc as soon as they are introduced. Truly amazing work!
It's been awhile since I've read a novel that featured it's levelling system organised. The descriptions are great and each chapter just builds up to the next. I look forward to reading more.
This is amazing, I can't begin to find the words to describe this work but I have to say keep up the good work. The pacing is great as the world slowly unravel its self. Wordings and descriptions are on point as you get to immerse yourself in the character, scene or situation. Sigh, if only web novel would allow some background music that would play as you read...that'd be even better.
First things first, the novels quality. If you enjoy system novels like chrysalis or solo levelling, you'll surely enjoy this novel. One of the authors strong sides is his vocubulary. That's a neat strong side when your story takes place inside of hell(spoiler alert, it does). The novel has darker theme, you won't get your "Reincarnated as a slime" feel from it.
Extremely well written for a first time writer. Though it is a bit dark, if you like that sort of thing you'll definitely love this book. Great start, I'm really enjoying it. Keep it up author!
The story is original, and I love the way the author portrays the thoughts. The way the plot unfolds, is very exhilarating and full of suspense. This is a must read book, it's already one of my favorites. Good story, good plot good stuff.
I won't talk about what happens in this novel very much but what I will tell you is what I think about it after reading 15 chapters. This one of the greatest original novels that I have read which wasn't a translation, there are little to no grammar mistakes the descriptions of the characters are great. The world-building is currently inexistent as there are only 15 chapters but it looks like it will be great, the MC seems to be pretty logical and smart while he also has his own times where he is controlled by his demonic form instincts. There are currently 2 recurring characters that were born at the same time as him and they are in the same area, and the only thing I can say is that I'm looking forward to seeing further interactions between them. The system is decent and the notifications aren't spammed very often, at the same time you could say that they are only used at the good times, the chapter ending makes you crave for more chapters. I support this novel and its author and he will have my power stones from now, please consider reading the novel as up till now it was a great ride, hopefully the author will keep pumping out chapters of the same quality at the same rate he is doing now. What are you doing still reading this review? Read the damn novel :)
Reveal Spoiler I really like the book it has me coming back for more but I'm not really fond of the character design and evolution but it's a great book
An absolute gem it is a story that has a similar beginning to custom made demon king but darker and more gory while still being awesome. Hope it is not dropped
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Great book! 11 chapters in and I'm already hooked. This book is hard to fault. The story development is very well-paced and understandable and the writing quality is fantastic. On top of that, the stability of updates seems to be very consistent at the moment. Keep up the good work Author. You've got my support!
Okay, I haven't finished the other chapters, but Bruh, It is amazing, I love the way you write, the details you give and everything. People that are reading the reviews to know if you should read it. I only have one thing to say "Read it if you like the type of weak-starting MC and becoming stronger, this book is amazing, I'm sure it will become one of the best in the future". Please don't ever stop writing this, Keep up the good work!!
So ive read up to Chapter 10, and I have to say that this novel is quite good compared to many on this sight. It skip** over unneeded nonsense and jumps right into pure and unadulterated violence. So far the writing quality is great, and the plot is steady. Although its still to early to tell, and I would like to see more chapters before I can really decide how good this book will be, id say it had great potential. Great Job author <3
Very high potential but seems a little bit like Custom make demon king. Except better storyline and system but written worse. /////////////////////////////////
This story is really well written. Good vocabulary, excellent grammar, and an exciting story. It is also written in first person which not many authors on this site use. Overall, the chances of this story being at the top are pretty high. I recommend those to read this if they love game-like stories.
Absolutely fantastic. The diverse vocabulary and tone really make me feel like I'min hell watching what this vile man is doing. For a first book, it feels better than experienced veterans despite the many grammatical errors.
Right from the start, you can practically FEEL the world with how vivid the descriptions are. The premise is interesting. Horror isn't usually my thing, but I am absolutely loving this!
So I know it been over two years since this book has been updated but if the author sees this please countinue the novel it was amazing as it is I can’t imagine if it had a proper ending how good it would be