Samuele_Ragazzini

LV 2
2020-05-23 Joined Global
Badges 3

Moments 1
Samuele_Ragazzini
Samuele_Ragazzini
4 years ago
Posted

Very nice novel, MC is very well-rounded and feels realistic. The environment, as much as it is left vague forn now, feels really good and intriguing. Not much story developement for now, but i also like the sense of aimlessness of a guy suddenly thrust in Hell with no other suggestion than "Fall deeper". Very good grammar, i also really like the author's writing style; feeling a bit of an Edgar Allan Poe influence (maybe?) on the most delirious sections of inner thoughts. Overall, great job and keep it up!