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Ещё когда читал 2 часть БК, мне не нравилось, что на Юйхао всё возможности, буквально сами сыпались. Да, он тяжело работал, но он далеко не один такой. Здесь же это просто нереального масштаба достигла эта ситуация, причём и гг, который, как говорилось ранее, достаточно знал эту историю, резко по-глупому и скатился в детство. На мой взгляд тут весьма применима поговорка :" Начали за здравие, кончили за упокой".
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Неплохая история, начало и середина были самыми бодрыми. После последних глав я переживаю за будущее ФИКа, слишком много плюшек отсыпал Автор своему ГГ.
Please update more and stable update so we can enjoy and give u more rating. Your story line and other development are nice and even good at some particular area then original story,but due to your late update your updates are literally doing to be down .if you want to drop at this point please inform it so we can expect at we never read this chapter but pleased at least inform us!
please dont drop this this one of the few good douluo dalu fanfic out there keep up the good work thank you for the vhapters here is your reward
I really love this novel. I really like the ingenuity of adding and changing some of the spirits to better suit your character. I honestly like how you included the golden bloodline rings into him without copying it exactly with a golden dragon bloodline or even just dragon blood. Thank you for the effort and time put into this so far . Look forward to more.
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why did you stop ,?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????? ??????
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finally our story that makes sense not like some wish fulfilling stories which have no reasonable aspects keep it up 😉 don't stop new chaps
As of writing this review the story is up to 74 chapters of development and something close to 100,000 words. Much respect on the dedication, especially considering the leading man is as on yet entirely aimless. The MC has reincarnated in his favorite fictional realm without any desire to set right some great injustice or save some poor damsel, or even collect a harem or some other kind of ridiculous to pull off tomfoolery. The MC has power leveled through every chapter. Hopefully everything goes well with the author's family and he can get back to writing because he definitely has the chops to accomplish great work. Just remember that the reason Ichigo Kurosaki sucked as a protagonist was because he never wanted anything for himself. Naruto wanted to become Hokage and Luffy wants to be the King of Pirates. All Ichigo ever did was react to the situation and eventually he went from top 3 in Jump to canceled.
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it is one of best fanfic of douluo dalu but there is one thing i like about it is author delete everything else that is not related to story unlike many novel in which they reach more than 100 chapter with only 40 chapter worth content
good luck with the novel . keep up the good work . best of luck .[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Just writing a story so gonna give it 5 stars. To some, this story will probably be like a Gary Stu fanfic. This is due to me not being a fan of fanfics that just create a bunch of powerful villains to fight the strong self-insert, reincarnated mc. Just writing it for my own enjoyment to flesh out the idea that was stuck in my head. If you have any ideas about my story, just want to discuss my reasonings behind decisions I/the mc made, or anything related to the Douluo Dalu universe, chuck it in the comments. I am always open for ideas to play around with on spreadsheets and documents to fully build and think out characters. Have a super day.
Ещё когда читал 2 часть БК, мне не нравилось, что на Юйхао всё возможности, буквально сами сыпались. Да, он тяжело работал, но он далеко не один такой. Здесь же это просто нереального масштаба достигла эта ситуация, причём и гг, который, как говорилось ранее, достаточно знал эту историю, резко по-глупому и скатился в детство. На мой взгляд тут весьма применима поговорка :" Начали за здравие, кончили за упокой".
Reveal Spoiler Неплохая история, начало и середина были самыми бодрыми. После последних глав я переживаю за будущее ФИКа, слишком много плюшек отсыпал Автор своему ГГ.
Please update more and stable update so we can enjoy and give u more rating. Your story line and other development are nice and even good at some particular area then original story,but due to your late update your updates are literally doing to be down .if you want to drop at this point please inform it so we can expect at we never read this chapter but pleased at least inform us!
please dont drop this this one of the few good douluo dalu fanfic out there keep up the good work thank you for the vhapters here is your reward
I really love this novel. I really like the ingenuity of adding and changing some of the spirits to better suit your character. I honestly like how you included the golden bloodline rings into him without copying it exactly with a golden dragon bloodline or even just dragon blood. Thank you for the effort and time put into this so far . Look forward to more.
don't drop it....[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
don't drop this👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍....... release most chapter[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
why did you stop ,?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????? ??????
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finally our story that makes sense not like some wish fulfilling stories which have no reasonable aspects keep it up 😉 don't stop new chaps
As of writing this review the story is up to 74 chapters of development and something close to 100,000 words. Much respect on the dedication, especially considering the leading man is as on yet entirely aimless. The MC has reincarnated in his favorite fictional realm without any desire to set right some great injustice or save some poor damsel, or even collect a harem or some other kind of ridiculous to pull off tomfoolery. The MC has power leveled through every chapter. Hopefully everything goes well with the author's family and he can get back to writing because he definitely has the chops to accomplish great work. Just remember that the reason Ichigo Kurosaki sucked as a protagonist was because he never wanted anything for himself. Naruto wanted to become Hokage and Luffy wants to be the King of Pirates. All Ichigo ever did was react to the situation and eventually he went from top 3 in Jump to canceled.
It sucks..............................................................................................................
it is one of best fanfic of douluo dalu but there is one thing i like about it is author delete everything else that is not related to story unlike many novel in which they reach more than 100 chapter with only 40 chapter worth content
good luck with the novel . keep up the good work . best of luck .[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
KEEP THE SPIRIT SEMANGAT!! ................................................................................................................
. .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . .. . ..
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Just writing a story so gonna give it 5 stars. To some, this story will probably be like a Gary Stu fanfic. This is due to me not being a fan of fanfics that just create a bunch of powerful villains to fight the strong self-insert, reincarnated mc. Just writing it for my own enjoyment to flesh out the idea that was stuck in my head. If you have any ideas about my story, just want to discuss my reasonings behind decisions I/the mc made, or anything related to the Douluo Dalu universe, chuck it in the comments. I am always open for ideas to play around with on spreadsheets and documents to fully build and think out characters. Have a super day.