Mechanical Genius: Legendary Engineer

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Chroniclemale

I think the overall premise is good, but there are just so many POV's and it switches so frequently that it is confusing me. I think POV switching should be highly limited for ease of reading.

LV 4

ZenSharky

The conversation seems a bit forced, its not even funny. I only give it reviews because the concept is unique, if not for that, I woul just straight leave here. So I hope it would improve. Might come back later if it improves

LV 6

Rysiarth_mundusDeo

To many POV

LV 5

haydendark

So the novel is really good and I would definitely recommend it as the idea is very fresh and unique. However, the conversations have alot of room to improve, so I hope the author improves that later. Will definitely shelve this and give it a try :)

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Yggdrasil_

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

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mouhib

this is a dreat novel with a new and refreshing idea that till now i think is implemented beautifully. so i hope to see this through and for it to be a long term project.so keep at it author.

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Raphael23

Would rate it five, but since this is just a rough draft--I'll give it a four. Point-of-views is confusing but, yeah... It can be fix over time... Haven't read all of the chapter. But I'll work on it.