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So is this novel drop? or the author is just busy? I really love this novel please author wake up from you slumber!!!!!! -------------------
Be prepared for gender bender, Early warning. It's a great concept for me until all pretense is dropped a goes full female and changes tune from evolution novel to cultivation.
Sorry but this is trash it starts off good and very fast paced read and its enjoyable with fights but as it goes it just drops in a ocean and becomes some mashed up garbage that just doesnt make any sense in the least
Hmmmm Its not good... at 1st i really liked it cause of how fast paced it was cause the mc had only one goal evolution... but now the mc is in a world in a world in a world in a world in a world... i dont even know how many worlds in worlds in worlds he is in... plus the grammar is terrible, at the beginning it wasnt that bad but as you read more it becomes worse and it throws the flow all over the place. i 10 outa 10 dont recommend... i think he takes down bad reviews to get that high rating...
very good, only problem is that it just stopped the whoke monster thing and just became a cultivation novel for more than I am comftrable with and it feels like its not worth it
yo author this novel is really great I hope you update at daily .........................,.....................................................
Overall story is to my liking of evolution type writing quality is okay, it not bad we understand the story properly that matters while it be improved. Another major issue is gender of MC like he feels male from the start also 'he' used most of the time. But in early chapter author just decided to make gender female in status pane. But that was still okay as I don't see much change in his behaviour but now at 40 or some chapter he has possessed an female body but that not the real problem but *little spoiler here* in auction he just bought an super useless pet 25 million essence just because it is fluffy and cute. My mind was just blown to bits. I just going to ask one thing to author is this an male lead story or female lead story. And if it is an female lead then put an god damn tag and if it is an male lead then also I don't like sissy MC. Seriously decide on one thing, I am going drop this if he is still same.
there's issues with the spelling, gramma and use of pronouns. I dont have an issue with this personally because its not terrible but it is there.
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amazing story love the protagonist and its morals tho its a little bit hard to keep up whit the story love the evolution and wuould like to see what is next good work
Everything is nice but it is very hard to keep up with things. Like one moment she's doing something but in the next, she's doing something else. The arc with him being Cyra is suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper boring in my opinion. I read this because of the non-human stuff but then it makes the mc into a human and barely goes back to his original body.
I did not like the character very much, he is very insensitive and your writing is bad, not your spelling, if not in how you describe things and the passage of time in fact you do not even write it, you just pretend that the protagonist was there for a long time. I would have liked a timeskip or something.
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this is cool af gonna wait for many next chapters this is cool af gonna wait for many next chapters this is cool af gonna wait for many next chapters
First off why is there so many 5 star reviews for this? It absolutely does not deserve the stars. It gives no actual feedback to the author by saying it's all good when it's apparent that there are problems in the story. I don't know what to say it's all poorly edited if even at that, there is not a single thing about this novel that could have been worse. Reading it is difficult due to constant spelling mistakes, wierd pacing and having half of the chapter just be stats that have zero meaning. I tried to at least give it a fair shot by reading through 30 something chapters thinking maybe it gets better it doesn't. Author if you're reading this can you try using a spell checking extension on your browser, it would make it so much more readable. I hope you don't get discouraged and try to improve.
All o have to say is read it,compared to others of the same category, the rest are just rubbish. W o r d c osjd s s s s dhabf cbfbsjs s s d fg f r e e f f g f d d h g d w f g f d r h fd f f d d d d e t j h d v h t e g b d d h f r t h v d
Very good but the beginning confused me I don't get it what happend to mc before transferring the mc is you know very of but its fine by me I don't care about op mc
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I love evolution novels. I especially adore them when the main character is an animal (monster) and doesn't care about humanity. If you are like me, you will adore this romance .
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Nice story, cool setup. Also kinda didn't like the arc where he goes to the main planet that much, the first part was kinda nice, then i didn't like it, because he has to use an avatar, and not his main body.... I think thats 140 letters right
Your novel is one of the best [evolve category novel ] if not the best one so please keep it up and don't drop it 👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿
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I love this book it's is all about evolution. which is my favorite subject, if you like evolution you'll like this. best noval so far that shows how amazing evolution can be.
IT'S LIKE READING MTL ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
So is this novel drop? or the author is just busy? I really love this novel please author wake up from you slumber!!!!!! -------------------
Be prepared for gender bender, Early warning. It's a great concept for me until all pretense is dropped a goes full female and changes tune from evolution novel to cultivation.
Sorry but this is trash it starts off good and very fast paced read and its enjoyable with fights but as it goes it just drops in a ocean and becomes some mashed up garbage that just doesnt make any sense in the least
Hmmmm Its not good... at 1st i really liked it cause of how fast paced it was cause the mc had only one goal evolution... but now the mc is in a world in a world in a world in a world in a world... i dont even know how many worlds in worlds in worlds he is in... plus the grammar is terrible, at the beginning it wasnt that bad but as you read more it becomes worse and it throws the flow all over the place. i 10 outa 10 dont recommend... i think he takes down bad reviews to get that high rating...
very good, only problem is that it just stopped the whoke monster thing and just became a cultivation novel for more than I am comftrable with and it feels like its not worth it
yo author this novel is really great I hope you update at daily .........................,.....................................................
Overall story is to my liking of evolution type writing quality is okay, it not bad we understand the story properly that matters while it be improved. Another major issue is gender of MC like he feels male from the start also 'he' used most of the time. But in early chapter author just decided to make gender female in status pane. But that was still okay as I don't see much change in his behaviour but now at 40 or some chapter he has possessed an female body but that not the real problem but *little spoiler here* in auction he just bought an super useless pet 25 million essence just because it is fluffy and cute. My mind was just blown to bits. I just going to ask one thing to author is this an male lead story or female lead story. And if it is an female lead then put an god damn tag and if it is an male lead then also I don't like sissy MC. Seriously decide on one thing, I am going drop this if he is still same.
there's issues with the spelling, gramma and use of pronouns. I dont have an issue with this personally because its not terrible but it is there.
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amazing story love the protagonist and its morals tho its a little bit hard to keep up whit the story love the evolution and wuould like to see what is next good work
Everything is nice but it is very hard to keep up with things. Like one moment she's doing something but in the next, she's doing something else. The arc with him being Cyra is suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper boring in my opinion. I read this because of the non-human stuff but then it makes the mc into a human and barely goes back to his original body.
I did not like the character very much, he is very insensitive and your writing is bad, not your spelling, if not in how you describe things and the passage of time in fact you do not even write it, you just pretend that the protagonist was there for a long time. I would have liked a timeskip or something.
Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email bishop_white@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
this is cool af gonna wait for many next chapters this is cool af gonna wait for many next chapters this is cool af gonna wait for many next chapters
First off why is there so many 5 star reviews for this? It absolutely does not deserve the stars. It gives no actual feedback to the author by saying it's all good when it's apparent that there are problems in the story. I don't know what to say it's all poorly edited if even at that, there is not a single thing about this novel that could have been worse. Reading it is difficult due to constant spelling mistakes, wierd pacing and having half of the chapter just be stats that have zero meaning. I tried to at least give it a fair shot by reading through 30 something chapters thinking maybe it gets better it doesn't. Author if you're reading this can you try using a spell checking extension on your browser, it would make it so much more readable. I hope you don't get discouraged and try to improve.
All o have to say is read it,compared to others of the same category, the rest are just rubbish. W o r d c osjd s s s s dhabf cbfbsjs s s d fg f r e e f f g f d d h g d w f g f d r h fd f f d d d d e t j h d v h t e g b d d h f r t h v d
Very good but the beginning confused me I don't get it what happend to mc before transferring the mc is you know very of but its fine by me I don't care about op mc
Reveal Spoiler I love evolution novels. I especially adore them when the main character is an animal (monster) and doesn't care about humanity. If you are like me, you will adore this romance .
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
GOOOD .........................--------------------------------99999--9-9-9-9-9-9--99-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9-9--99-9-9-9--9-9-9-9-9-9--999-9-9--9-9-99-9-9
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] amazing book
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Nice story, cool setup. Also kinda didn't like the arc where he goes to the main planet that much, the first part was kinda nice, then i didn't like it, because he has to use an avatar, and not his main body.... I think thats 140 letters right
Your novel is one of the best [evolve category novel ] if not the best one so please keep it up and don't drop it 👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I love this book it's is all about evolution. which is my favorite subject, if you like evolution you'll like this. best noval so far that shows how amazing evolution can be.
IT'S LIKE READING MTL ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------