The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

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scs070896

Really well written. Not too fast and not too slow. Looking for ward to this story getting to its first hundred chapters . Please keep posting regularly !!!!

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Ibaraki2221

Review after chapter 88 I've read this despite all the bad reviews of this novel. And I've got to say that this is an interesting story. The volume 1 is too bland. There's no character development and world building. He's the only character in the whole volume. The others are just extras that he killed. I think that most people got bored and didn't pass through volume 1. I think you can skip volume 1 and start with chapter 20. It will not affect your reading. The volume 2 is the start where a lot of characters appear and the world is slowly forming. The world is too large and we currently couldn't explore it because he's staying in one city. We're currently in chapter 88 and I've got to say that there's a lot of things that will happen in this story considering what explained in the last arc. 88 chapters weren't enough to decide this story like those other novels. Maybe, this wasn't even ten percent of the novel. The only downside of this story was the poor grammar.

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DonnEll

Hello Author here! First, I would like to say that I don't have much vocabulary. I'm still an ******* and my grades in English subj were lower than you could have imagined. So some words kept repeating but I guarantee you that I've already planned this whole story. I've already had all that Arcs and the Ending in my notebook(I've wrote it there at the back of my math notebook). I think for for those people who like reading adventures and action will like my novel. This will be a full action story... Probably... Hais... I don't know what I was saying anymore. Well, thanks for reading and I will accept all the criticism with open arms. Good luck! I hope you enjoy it! I truly truly hope that you enjoy it, no, I wish that you enjoy it.

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LionessLover

An embarrassing school slice-of-life power fantasy. Emotional age of whoever wrote this is around 12. It actually started out okay, but later it regressed more and more. Oh and of course MC always "smiles", every little thing he does is done with a smile. Quite stupid and creepy. How much trouble is it to write less awkwardly?

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damilon

This story has a mc that doesn't link to being a goblin, there is no real background created, the writing is quite bad, just the addition of a better translator could make the story more enjoyable, the story has been rather haphazardly put together and I can't say if it's the world or the characters, but it just isn't good enough. On the positive side, there is a non-human mc which is quite different and interesting. So I would recommend this if the writing get corrected alot, but not at the moment.👌

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Leen_123

This story is so amazing, I never expect to read such an amazing work. If you are fan of isekai this is a recommendation, Keep up the good work author!!!!

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VictoriousHermit

Read up to chapter 16 From what I read it's pretty uninteresting with it not really explaining anything like the main character goblin boy, he's so boring and all that's done is fighting and it's not even fun nor interesting, The main focus is stats and evolving but even that is done poorly. The dungeon sounds lame with pretty poor world building and the protagonists background is pretty boring he's the BEST player in the game because... he got lucky with a broken item yeet Also I think I would've kept reading but fate and prophecy showed up and I hate those. Maybe it gets better as you go on who knows Summary: a pretty boring novel that shoves you along

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YOBsSensei

It's a good story. It's an action pack story. Although there's a little grammatical error it's still readable. I recommend this one. Good luck to this author, more power.

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BookDevourer87

Just as the author himself already stated, his English isn't very good... Especially his awful grammar makes it hard to enjoy this novel. Having an capable editor would instantly improve my rating of this novel. I am at chapter 69 and so far this novels seems to be a nice copy-mix of the standard transmigration/system/evolving monster/magical academy novels. You won't find much novelty here, but at least it's a solid mix of well known and liked themes. There have been some stupid cliché encounters and scenarios, but I still hope, that it won't go out of hand. If you are bored and don't mind ignoring bad grammar, this novel is recommendable.

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Demonmaster

Well I have to say the story development if fine, if not good, but your lacking in some parts (mostly grammar). Some of things you need to fix is grammar, world building, and character design in that order. I like the goblin stuff, but I’ve read stories like it (re:monster). The best part about this novel is the stability of updates, but after you finish the story that wouldn’t matter anymore, so I would have to rate it lower. But, overall it’s an alright read not bad but not good either just in between. P.S: Author if you are reading this please find an editor or a fan willing to correct the mistakes in the story

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donschmiddy

jesus christ. author please get your grammar right... you keep using simple past, past progressive and simple present but each of them incorrectly. Get an editor to help you. As of now unreadable by anyone with the faintest grasp of the english language...

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Krokolono

Uninspired and the systematical abuse of the english language doesn't make it any more readable. MC doesn't reincarnate as much as gets perma-logged into a goblin body. Attempts at explaining the game world makes it just more confusing as dimensions are not the authors strong suit. Stats are there just for the number to go up and seem to be arbitrarily infinite or completely gone depending on the situation, no feel whatsoever for any aspect of reality in this novel

Love the story and mystery aspect of the novel. The characters seem well fleshed out and unique. The World building is probably my favourite part of the novel. With the many nations, continents and characters it really makes for an interesting story. The gaming quirks are also nice. The only downside would be the grammar but it's easy to understand and doesn't affect the story. I love this novel so make sure to keep updating it!!

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Daoist7rCNpr

Omg I love this series. Lucian and hazel couldn’t be any cuter. The first book had me on an emotional roller coasters. Just started the second book and I cannot wait to see what happens.

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Jake_Casanova

REVIEW TIME!! The story so far is great. This is so fascinating and fun to read novel. I hope the Author will do everything he can do make the story more greater. I recommend this Novel to all Readers. Keep up the goodwork

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Goto_Beats

This Novel sat in my Library for quite a while because of the negative comments ... a month ago I thought about giving it a shot ... it's true the writing quality is bad but it has improved a bit with time. Character development took OKish but it still requires quite a brushing ..... But the most disappointing thing is the use of Heavy Plot Armours .. repeatedly.. Certain bets and terms /deals were used according to the wordings " you have to follow every command of mine / I will own everything you have if I win " and people readily agrees ( People are not that stupid and these are not ordinary people who we are talking about but powerhouses! ) without thinking the pros-cons of such a deal . Take example of Yanagi , a senior at his institute and most the powerful youth , readily agreed to the term " you will obey every command ... " if one could interpret , it is similar to a slave contract ! , ( My words ) , it should be properly mentioned what " everything" means in this novel - everything could include ones money , property , Mana Fruits , and Weapons but it can also include ones time , body , soul , his wife / husband and family... a clear cut defination is Very much required .. And don't talk about the Plot Armours... if one is giving it a try.... they will surely understand what I mean ... While the chapters are relased frequently , this story is not my Cup of tea ... Dropping it ..