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A story about a clueless reincarnated god that enters a game which is basically another world and gains an item made by his past life(God Version) and, unknowingly, works toward regaining his true self by completing the broken artifact made by his past life. Basically, if you have read [Shura's Wrath], this is it's brother novel.
A story worth spending coins.....the characters to the dual world setting (vr and real) is amazing. Yeah in the starting chapter Janus was quite annoying but everything he did was due to a reason so the one de dropping it due that reason... you're missing something too amazing
so,I've read to around chapter 80,or the latest free chapter and iIhave to say I love,whether it he the system or just the story in general and iIthink the reason ppl hated the system to begin with was cause the cared waaaaaay too fking much about the story,cause for the most part the quests it would give were hilarious,bad review ik but basically sums up everything iIwanted to say and also would recommend reading,just don't engage too much with the story,
This is THAT type where you want to smash your phone for how stupid mc is but you can't do anything. It's like this, mc is so stupid that he forgets little things here and there those problems grows so big that has to solve them by again making small mistakes and again solving them that's the entire story. Game over I will give an example, he has a gost which only he can see if he used the gost his mission would solve soo easily but he forgets that and does unnecessary circus through entire universe then at climax he realises he could just use he's gost so simple he blames himself. That's it guys this above scenarios repeats itself till end. Basically it's about how stupid a man can be, good title better then original one ha.
the first chapter is good but when the FBI show up the MC become idiot and dumb more loophole that's why I drop this novel............... ..
Great amazing and fantastic book + holy necromancer is extremely good as well! Wish this story was even longer, going to re read it now. :-) Need characters
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Honest reviews are here.. Sorry to the author, I try to read, but this novel is really not suitable with my taste.. Even though you explain on Ch0, "every mission has it reason behind it," I can't stand with the mission given by Janus system.. For example, "if you fail the mission, your sister die" or "if you fail the mission, you will die".. Even the rewards are ridiculous, you know why? When MC completes the mission, he gets a treasure box, but MC needs the key to open it.. To get a key, he needs to complete another mission.. The system mission will always be dangerous and threatening his life or other people's lives.. Even when MC succeeds, the sequence is MC will become an enemy with a powerful gangs/player.. EVERY mission that MC does will just make his life harder and harder.. No easy or normal standard level for MC.. Even Slash or Flame blast skills can be used 5 times per day.. So, if you love to see MC suffer hardship for THE WHOLE TIME (all chapter), this novel is for you.. I only read up to Ch50, but I can't take it anymore.. I feel like MC has been bullying and tortured by the author..
I am Miss Elycia Hellen Gaborn, from France, currently residing here in the united state of america, my husband who happens to be a citizen of the united state died of heart attack of which was caused by a scammer when they made away with his retirement and life savings amounting to $2.54m was wiped out of his account within 3 days, we definitely bounce into cyber help with brunoequickhack@Gmail Com who at of their goodwill then recovered the funds back to me and my kid's, the only regret was my husband losing his life and for that i do not like scammers at all and i am sharing this so that anyone reading this can seek for vegiance and help me spread this message so we could fight all scammers and give them justice they deserve. Web; brunoequickhack.com
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I won't lie to you back in the day I loved this book but as I read different genre/books it showed so much mistakes that I don't understand how i fell in love with it in the first place, though a good story bad plot
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how many are in the harem?.......,.......................................,................................,................................,................................,...........................
es una historia muy interesante y novedoso que dan ganas seguir leyendo, gracias al autor por compartirnos está maravillosa obra,😃😃
overall good novel. around the middle of the novel it kept making me continuously reading. the VRMMO and IRL stuff made it seem like 2 stories in one. however, the latter half of the novel is full of errors, mostly the names being wrong and mixed up. though it doesnt affect the reading experience, its still confusing. but good story ye
Naive, dumb type MC. Some forced Plot armor. Cliche bg story, forced plot sometimes. Character development not so good, shallow to medium. Unnecessary characters. Many Plot holes (kidnapping, idiotic lies & others). This Novel has a great potential, change some plots, redraw MC & other important chars, write a new one.
I think it's a great story overall it's just that Ryder was just suddenly pushed aside after chaos came back and i think it finished way too quickly other than that perfect story.
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No Words only rating World, Story, Character and the development all is 5 Star.
Great background and story. Although it is slow at times and some antag characters are cliched, I still loved it
Welp ive just read cuz of the cover...cuz i know who's the xover and its game character and my 2nd most favourite.. named ADD and the one on the cover is his 2nd job class for his 3rd Path "Diabolic Esper" lol retrun to the topic wp ccant ay anything cuz im not good at review...but i like the story OP MC but not to OP lol haha just say just that ive like the cover and read amf tuen out i like the story lol haha
Started off good. Than the novel turned into trash. Started focusing on useless stuff in the real world as fillers. Could remove 200 chapters and it would improve the overall quality.
Dear Author, why? I‘m trying to make this constructive so: 1) Please don‘t bite off more than you can chew in future works. You tried too many directions without delving into them and ultimately abandoning the plot. Examples would be the cultivation families that are somehow irrelevant, the pet that gets completely forgotten, the death prince‘s schemes etc. 2) Not every character needs to be relevant, but if you focus a lot of attention on them they should play a role in the novel. Examples are the successor of the death realm, and most frustratingly LUCIFER 3) consistency (plot holes) Example should be Shu getting Alice kidnapped without any repercussions and he and MC are still best friends years after??? What?
1 good start but got worst with time 2 i think that author took break between or have memory loss 3 romance is very minimum 4 some important characters are forgotten 5 he rushed the story towards the end
A Good read. Recommended for all. Not at all boring........................................................................................
this book is awesome ☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️
I was from the beginning when this first started and I can say I was not disappointed sad to see it end….Great work author😍
Well this is a great novel, very well thought out except the background characters don't react like normal people whatsoever, like I understand people like making rumors and exaggerating them but this is just too much, and the system although annoying is not too bad but I did not like it when he tried to cuck the mc, even if it is with a goal it doesn't really make sense since the system did try and get the girl to like him in the first place
The story has an incredible beggining and plot. There is quite a lot of adventures where we can see the progression of the MC but the ending feels a bit rushed. Despite that, the story has a great structure and you get to feel immersed and surprised! Beware the writing quality. There is a lot of mistakes when it comes to character names and pronouns but nothing too dramatic as you can understand which character the wrong pronoun is refering to.
the story was great the only issues I had with it was the spelling mistakes and using the wrong names for the content for what was going on or who it was addressing.
it's a nice story in all but it seems that the story was rushed during the end or more like the author ran out of ideas as time went on but all in all iits an awesome novel and I'm looking forward to reading more of your novels keep up your good work and best wishes on your other works. next stop inhuman warlock 😊
I’v read up to 200 chapters. I have to say it’s not great but ok 5.5/10 . The story is way too bland, you can guess whats gonna happen next. Somethings I don’t like about the mc too this just my opinion, the mc lies way too much. He tortures his enemies which is ok but he does it multiple times which gets kinda boring . I’m starting to see a pattern which author makes the mc torture everyone that he goes against . And He goes back and forth to divinity and real life you can do that but its way too cons istent. But the thing that bothers me the most is he hasn’t had any diff iculties whatsoever . He hasn’t had an enemy he couldn’t defeat. He has op Allies in divinity It’s been a walk in the park with our mc. That bothers me so much , I know I’v only read 200 chapters but I hope that changes
At the starting it was good but slowly it became such that it bores me too much.... But still a great novel.. I loat my interest due to lack of chapters in the past.. Djjdm Dnndmfm Dmdmdmm Dkdkdm Dndndmmd Dkdkdkdk Why cannot i post a review???????
A story that I Promise you won't regret reading if you read 80 chapters (Free) and most probably you will fall in love with it. Important: STORY: The story is about a person who dies in the game and gets a system that brought him back in time. The system isn't simple though and it gives Ryder missions that force him to do the stuff that he don't want to save his life, but there is a reason for all that. You would get to know about that if you atleast read the free chapters of the story. It's not a story about a slave to the system but about something that goes way back than this life and world. The system does all this for Ryder in a sense. The MC will be an OP MC which would be way amazing when you get to understand the inkling of the true mystery (Chapter 79 or somewhere around that). CHARACTERS: The Important Characters are all given a personality of their own which most will love. There are gods, Hobbits, Elves, cultivators, and everything one could ask for which starts to make sense from chapter 70 onwards where the seriousness of the story really gets a grip. Non Important Characters are intentionally made to overreact in certain situations which is supposed to be stupid and added in the story to give it a lighter touch. You would enjoy it if you don't think to much about that, as that's made to be like that, but that don't affect the seriousness of the story in any way. Writing Quality: There might be a few grammer mistakes but nothing major that will affect reading experience. Stability of updates: The story updates daily with mass release occasionally. It won't be dropped either like all of my stories. World Background: The world is much more extensive than the simple Real world and the game world which I hope most will like. Read more to know more. For more info: Read chapter 0
A story about a clueless reincarnated god that enters a game which is basically another world and gains an item made by his past life(God Version) and, unknowingly, works toward regaining his true self by completing the broken artifact made by his past life. Basically, if you have read [Shura's Wrath], this is it's brother novel.
A story worth spending coins.....the characters to the dual world setting (vr and real) is amazing. Yeah in the starting chapter Janus was quite annoying but everything he did was due to a reason so the one de dropping it due that reason... you're missing something too amazing
so,I've read to around chapter 80,or the latest free chapter and iIhave to say I love,whether it he the system or just the story in general and iIthink the reason ppl hated the system to begin with was cause the cared waaaaaay too fking much about the story,cause for the most part the quests it would give were hilarious,bad review ik but basically sums up everything iIwanted to say and also would recommend reading,just don't engage too much with the story,
This is THAT type where you want to smash your phone for how stupid mc is but you can't do anything. It's like this, mc is so stupid that he forgets little things here and there those problems grows so big that has to solve them by again making small mistakes and again solving them that's the entire story. Game over I will give an example, he has a gost which only he can see if he used the gost his mission would solve soo easily but he forgets that and does unnecessary circus through entire universe then at climax he realises he could just use he's gost so simple he blames himself. That's it guys this above scenarios repeats itself till end. Basically it's about how stupid a man can be, good title better then original one ha.
the first chapter is good but when the FBI show up the MC become idiot and dumb more loophole that's why I drop this novel............... ..
Great amazing and fantastic book + holy necromancer is extremely good as well! Wish this story was even longer, going to re read it now. :-) Need characters
Reveal Spoiler Honest reviews are here.. Sorry to the author, I try to read, but this novel is really not suitable with my taste.. Even though you explain on Ch0, "every mission has it reason behind it," I can't stand with the mission given by Janus system.. For example, "if you fail the mission, your sister die" or "if you fail the mission, you will die".. Even the rewards are ridiculous, you know why? When MC completes the mission, he gets a treasure box, but MC needs the key to open it.. To get a key, he needs to complete another mission.. The system mission will always be dangerous and threatening his life or other people's lives.. Even when MC succeeds, the sequence is MC will become an enemy with a powerful gangs/player.. EVERY mission that MC does will just make his life harder and harder.. No easy or normal standard level for MC.. Even Slash or Flame blast skills can be used 5 times per day.. So, if you love to see MC suffer hardship for THE WHOLE TIME (all chapter), this novel is for you.. I only read up to Ch50, but I can't take it anymore.. I feel like MC has been bullying and tortured by the author..
I am Miss Elycia Hellen Gaborn, from France, currently residing here in the united state of america, my husband who happens to be a citizen of the united state died of heart attack of which was caused by a scammer when they made away with his retirement and life savings amounting to $2.54m was wiped out of his account within 3 days, we definitely bounce into cyber help with brunoequickhack@Gmail Com who at of their goodwill then recovered the funds back to me and my kid's, the only regret was my husband losing his life and for that i do not like scammers at all and i am sharing this so that anyone reading this can seek for vegiance and help me spread this message so we could fight all scammers and give them justice they deserve. Web; brunoequickhack.com
Reveal Spoiler I won't lie to you back in the day I loved this book but as I read different genre/books it showed so much mistakes that I don't understand how i fell in love with it in the first place, though a good story bad plot
Reveal Spoiler how many are in the harem?.......,.......................................,................................,................................,................................,...........................
es una historia muy interesante y novedoso que dan ganas seguir leyendo, gracias al autor por compartirnos está maravillosa obra,😃😃
overall good novel. around the middle of the novel it kept making me continuously reading. the VRMMO and IRL stuff made it seem like 2 stories in one. however, the latter half of the novel is full of errors, mostly the names being wrong and mixed up. though it doesnt affect the reading experience, its still confusing. but good story ye
Naive, dumb type MC. Some forced Plot armor. Cliche bg story, forced plot sometimes. Character development not so good, shallow to medium. Unnecessary characters. Many Plot holes (kidnapping, idiotic lies & others). This Novel has a great potential, change some plots, redraw MC & other important chars, write a new one.
I think it's a great story overall it's just that Ryder was just suddenly pushed aside after chaos came back and i think it finished way too quickly other than that perfect story.
Reveal Spoiler No Words only rating World, Story, Character and the development all is 5 Star.
Great background and story. Although it is slow at times and some antag characters are cliched, I still loved it
Welp ive just read cuz of the cover...cuz i know who's the xover and its game character and my 2nd most favourite.. named ADD and the one on the cover is his 2nd job class for his 3rd Path "Diabolic Esper" lol retrun to the topic wp ccant ay anything cuz im not good at review...but i like the story OP MC but not to OP lol haha just say just that ive like the cover and read amf tuen out i like the story lol haha
Started off good. Than the novel turned into trash. Started focusing on useless stuff in the real world as fillers. Could remove 200 chapters and it would improve the overall quality.
Dear Author, why? I‘m trying to make this constructive so: 1) Please don‘t bite off more than you can chew in future works. You tried too many directions without delving into them and ultimately abandoning the plot. Examples would be the cultivation families that are somehow irrelevant, the pet that gets completely forgotten, the death prince‘s schemes etc. 2) Not every character needs to be relevant, but if you focus a lot of attention on them they should play a role in the novel. Examples are the successor of the death realm, and most frustratingly LUCIFER 3) consistency (plot holes) Example should be Shu getting Alice kidnapped without any repercussions and he and MC are still best friends years after??? What?
1 good start but got worst with time 2 i think that author took break between or have memory loss 3 romance is very minimum 4 some important characters are forgotten 5 he rushed the story towards the end
A Good read. Recommended for all. Not at all boring........................................................................................
this book is awesome ☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️☁️🙆☁️
I was from the beginning when this first started and I can say I was not disappointed sad to see it end….Great work author😍
Well this is a great novel, very well thought out except the background characters don't react like normal people whatsoever, like I understand people like making rumors and exaggerating them but this is just too much, and the system although annoying is not too bad but I did not like it when he tried to cuck the mc, even if it is with a goal it doesn't really make sense since the system did try and get the girl to like him in the first place
The story has an incredible beggining and plot. There is quite a lot of adventures where we can see the progression of the MC but the ending feels a bit rushed. Despite that, the story has a great structure and you get to feel immersed and surprised! Beware the writing quality. There is a lot of mistakes when it comes to character names and pronouns but nothing too dramatic as you can understand which character the wrong pronoun is refering to.
the story was great the only issues I had with it was the spelling mistakes and using the wrong names for the content for what was going on or who it was addressing.
it's a nice story in all but it seems that the story was rushed during the end or more like the author ran out of ideas as time went on but all in all iits an awesome novel and I'm looking forward to reading more of your novels keep up your good work and best wishes on your other works. next stop inhuman warlock 😊
I’v read up to 200 chapters. I have to say it’s not great but ok 5.5/10 . The story is way too bland, you can guess whats gonna happen next. Somethings I don’t like about the mc too this just my opinion, the mc lies way too much. He tortures his enemies which is ok but he does it multiple times which gets kinda boring . I’m starting to see a pattern which author makes the mc torture everyone that he goes against . And He goes back and forth to divinity and real life you can do that but its way too cons istent. But the thing that bothers me the most is he hasn’t had any diff iculties whatsoever . He hasn’t had an enemy he couldn’t defeat. He has op Allies in divinity It’s been a walk in the park with our mc. That bothers me so much , I know I’v only read 200 chapters but I hope that changes
At the starting it was good but slowly it became such that it bores me too much.... But still a great novel.. I loat my interest due to lack of chapters in the past.. Djjdm Dnndmfm Dmdmdmm Dkdkdm Dndndmmd Dkdkdkdk Why cannot i post a review???????
A story that I Promise you won't regret reading if you read 80 chapters (Free) and most probably you will fall in love with it. Important: STORY: The story is about a person who dies in the game and gets a system that brought him back in time. The system isn't simple though and it gives Ryder missions that force him to do the stuff that he don't want to save his life, but there is a reason for all that. You would get to know about that if you atleast read the free chapters of the story. It's not a story about a slave to the system but about something that goes way back than this life and world. The system does all this for Ryder in a sense. The MC will be an OP MC which would be way amazing when you get to understand the inkling of the true mystery (Chapter 79 or somewhere around that). CHARACTERS: The Important Characters are all given a personality of their own which most will love. There are gods, Hobbits, Elves, cultivators, and everything one could ask for which starts to make sense from chapter 70 onwards where the seriousness of the story really gets a grip. Non Important Characters are intentionally made to overreact in certain situations which is supposed to be stupid and added in the story to give it a lighter touch. You would enjoy it if you don't think to much about that, as that's made to be like that, but that don't affect the seriousness of the story in any way. Writing Quality: There might be a few grammer mistakes but nothing major that will affect reading experience. Stability of updates: The story updates daily with mass release occasionally. It won't be dropped either like all of my stories. World Background: The world is much more extensive than the simple Real world and the game world which I hope most will like. Read more to know more. For more info: Read chapter 0