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The Order has fallen and the Jedi are dead or scattered in the Universe, all hope is lost.
But what if...
But what if there was a young man who could stop all this before it happens? Someone who could guide Skywalker or warn the Order of the Evil in their middle
Or... Someone who makes his own order?
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Write a reviewA really good Star wars FF/Novel! The only thing is, I hope that the Author won't drop it soon :) Good Character Design and Character Development !
This is one of the most refreshing fan fic stories out there with lots of intriguing elements that leave you hungry for the next chapter. I highly applaud the author and recommend this book. Keep it up
Good story so far . Good character creation as well. Hope to see this story going where very few have gone before. ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ. May the force be with you.
It is really unfortunate that the vast majority of fanfictions are written in English by people that don't have a thorough understanding of it's diction and grammar rules. I would highly recommend using Google Docs or Microsoft word to type this. Those programs have a grammar and spell check feature that can help you realize the simple but major mistakes you are making. Your creativity is being hindered by your lackluster English skills and it is truly tragic.
It is a good story, as the Author has said its his first work but even with the few amount of chapters published there has already been a huge improvement and he is willing to take on advise to improve. Iโm just hoping that he will be one of the good Authors that sticks with us and gives us a full story. Thanks for the Hard work.
May the force guide your brain to do more chapter for us !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I wish you would do more chapters I think this can be good novel and I think to read more of it so I hope you will update some more for the people that like the novel๐
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