/ Contemporary Romance / Our Troubles
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Cienna, one of the few people Melanie looked up to, died 2 years ago in an attempt of suicide. But Melanie finds more information that tells a very different story of what happened on that dreading day. Gray, Melanie's classmate, is somehow linked to this mystery. What happened? How did it happen? Was there someone behind this?
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Chapter 16: Questions 4 years ago Volume 1
- 1 Mauve 4 years ago
- 2 Number Four 4 years ago
- 3 Phone Number 4 years ago
- 4 Trophies 4 years ago
- 5 “Nate” 4 years ago
- 6 Picture Frame 4 years ago
- 7 Her Days 4 years ago
- 8 Yellow Tulips and White Roses 4 years ago
- 9 Empty 4 years ago
- 10 Pain 4 years ago
- 11 Lunch Table 4 years ago
- 12 Don't Need It 4 years ago
- 13 A Message 4 years ago
- 14 Home 4 years ago
- 15 Harder 4 years ago
- 16 Questions 4 years ago
I think instead of starting Jennie’s point of view back from the beginning again you should start it from the end of Melanie’s story(sorry if I make it confusing) so if Melanie lost her phone number you can start Jennie’s point of view from there. Not back to where Melanie fell. And then you can put in elements of what Jennie was thinking and acting later on in the story. Anyways I like the story plot and I can’t wait to see the end!