Changing Fate(Harry Potter World)

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50ShadesOfAss

Couldn’t continue. MC is just gonna baby sit characters from the way it’s going. Mc says ‘don’t worry Harry, I will help you with your fate’ Seems like author is obsessed with hermione as well. Mc so worried about her that he plans on telling her parents about the dangers of the magical world. Like you might as well do that for every muggle born. The grammar is also not so good.... the words just don’t flow nicely

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starkirito

I like it very much but i would like you to add another in story to make story more interesting and pleas harem and 18+ if you could pleas .i like this story much so pleas dont stop.

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Tartarus

Good novel, got a bit problem with the word and grammar but overall its readable and good. Its fun to read. Keep it up author. Thanks for the chapter Now need more word to reach 140 word review.

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RoseAmber

🌹💎 Good so far don't stop. Let us know if you are going to drop.

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Uchiha_Tenshi

Other than the grammar everything is fine and I like this story and hope that it continues and maybe if/when you complete Harry Potter you can make a nee story with the same MC and maybe some HP characters (i.e lovers, family, close friends) and have him go to another world and do the same thing

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Chad_Richardson_6755

Overall, I am falling in love with this story. The MC, while overpowered is relatable and clever, a well-written character. I can't wait for the updates to start again, so excited!!

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Monalishingun

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Monalishingun

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Brezer

First, if you are going to copy and paste into the story from other sources that are in perfect English then clean up your trashy engrish. There are plenty of online programs for free that will fix your issue, it just makes the story look and read like crap..... perfect English that makes sense then the next paragraph its crappy engrish that makes no sense, so clean it up. Next, the mc is an idiot, he wants to help everyone, dumbestt idea ever for HP fic, you either join the bandwagon of the hp or you control it and take everything yourself. The mc knows where all the cruxes are, get them and take to the gobs to get everything removed and you have solved 1 issue and got some good loot. Take the stone, you know it's there get it dont even need to go just go to THAT room and have it summoned there and get the stone out of the mirror and stop playing with hp your mc will never rule if he associates with hp

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Isaiah_1217

Definitely quite interesting and intriguing with the whole Master of Fate and having The Fate Wand among other stuff in a way that just like the Peverell have and are centered around The Deathly Hollows The Fatum will be of Fate not to mention all the training and practice OC did and the founders teaching and talking to them overall I have enjoyed reading this book it's truly different from the other Harry Potter books not to mention having his own world inside of the ring like a ring dimension but also having different kinds of creatures as well different exotic plants is quite interesting look forward to reading more of this book and can't wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book

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Selectials

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DaoistGsSe3J

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CopyPaste1

so you have someone at age of 10 being the strongest wizard in the world but when going to school he only flirt with Hermione and Daphne!! ohh yea and playing on a broom 😅 if you wanna make him have a normal live then why waste 10chapters making him Op??

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Henrique_Paiao

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WM_Dizy

Awesome story. Shame that Author-San dropped it. Filler: aaaaaaaardtedrdrdrdtrdutdrtudrutxutxetxjtxtjrxjtxutxjtrxjtrxtdxtdjtxrjtxjttxjdxdjtxdjtdxdjtxdt jt

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Daoist721221

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alesjandritos

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VampireAncestor_

This is a great fanfic looking forward to future chapters do your best writing a story or fanfic can be hard so good luck to you good sir/madam