Reviews of Rise of the Legendary Emperor by don_offl - Webnovel

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Saurav_Dedha

Author I had a lot of expectations before reading this novel but after reading I was greatly disappointed ..in kingdom building novel where you said that he is not a usual MC with all goody personality but still he treats his subordinates as friends take oath to protect everyone ...how is this even possible and subjects such as elven girls Don't even fully respect him....are you kidding me if his subordinates don't even respect him fully and the MC don't let them kneel to pledge loyalty since he take them as his friend from get go are you kidding really and yeah can you add R-18 please we want ***** scenes too it's a main element in cases of empire and all after all kings takes many concubines and all so make it practical please

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4bidienkingdom

Great story and great MC character anyway thank you for novel.

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Daoist513202

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TheAncientOnell

This book is awesome some errors there and there but nothing major, it's good read I strongly recommend it, good job Mr writer keep going at this pace I forsee great things.

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Hender

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Sandy_rock_muffin

Haven't read the story, so I'm gonna give it 5 stars, but I've never read a book on here with a good Samaritan MC, so I have zero clue what the author is talking about in his synopsis.

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Lee_Ches

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Saucy_Weeaboo

Very good book. 4=rrrrrrrrudududurjdjxududirifif8dudjjrieid8idrudududurrhdhdudbdhdududududhdhxudududurururuxuxudududurjdhdhdududjdjduduydurifcjjfuf uhhh fudur

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RyZoonHD

In my first review I said that the only bad thing is the grammar. Guess what! Grammar is improving and if there are errors it’s almost unnoticeable. Still the book itself, the writing style and the characters didn’t lack anything. 5/5 would most definitely recommend. Great book don!

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RyZoonHD

So this is a nice Book. The mc is op but still not invincible. That also means that the fights with him aren’t boring. The kingdom building didn’t start at the beginning but it’s still very good. I would say the only „bad“ thing about this book is the English. And it’s not that bad, there are just some spelling mistakes here and there. It’s alright. Great book 9/10 would recommend

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f1n

No harem, so pack your bags boys. Everyone else can stay, I guess... The world is certainly alive and all nice, the characters play nicely alone, and no one doesn't exist for the reason of convenience, except one girl. The world-building in this is extensive and although no army building has been seen yet, Chapter 30, I feel like if this done correctly, I'll keep reading this book. Btw not really OP MC since he gets yeeted out of existence before chapter 30. I hope we see Orks cuz green is da best and da strongest!

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Her_Shadow

I like the characters in the story, but I feel the grammar could seriously use some work. Comparing the latest chapter to the first chapter, the authors grammar already improved so I'd go back and fix the first few chapters. Maybe incorporate an outline and also increase the pacing... I'd also work more on the descriptions of battles, but overall I liked what I saw besides the mistakes...

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Allen_Clay012

First and foremost, I wish I still have the energy to read more chapters but I guess I have to rest for now. I will add your story in my library. It was a fun read and it is very engaging. By the way for my review here are my thoughts. I noticed some errors but those can be ignored. The errors in your writing to me have not caused me any problems in understanding the story. Also the stability of updates is good. The story is good and enjoyable the fight scenes may be brutal and bloody but who cares, everybody loves blood sports! Even Romans love that! Kidding aside, the author portray the fight scenes well. I have not much issue with the story so far aside from the minor mistakes which can be edited. P.S. For someone who self-taught himself of the language you are good. Keep up the good work!

Greatly imaginative and entertaining. While you greatly succeeds in creating a world in which we see our protagonist go about, I would enjoy seeing more rhythm in your overall writing. Grammar mistakes disrupt the flow of the story on occasion, but these are understandable as it isn’t easy to write in a language which isn’t your first. I myself know this struggle very well and know you are doing your best to improve. The characters themselves seem, overall, rather wooden. In the sense that they show the potential to be interesting personages but, as a reader, I don’t necessarily feel sympathetic to them. I do note some improvement towards later chapters and advise you to simply keep going, as one cannot improve without practice. I wish you a lot of fun continuing your story.

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Bahtiyor

After reading up to chapter 9, the author did a great job introducing the world and its background. The characters are very engaging and relatable in many ways that you could put yourself in the MC's shoes, which is excellent because you feel apart of the story and are having these adventures with the MC. There were some grammatical and punctuational errors, but at the most part, the story flowed nicely and was understandable.

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Serious_Reader

So far the story is good and interesting i hope the author will not drop the story like other novels. good work author hope you will keep the story interesting as it is.

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iamnaz7

One word: ITS JUST BEAUTIFUL AND AMAZING AND NICE AND WOW. Sorry cant contain it. I love how you made the characters alive and the world has colors. It is definately an unpolished gem. AUTO ADDED! CATCHA! Also, this is a review swap. dont forget to add my novel too! xD Blood Type: Dragon (I might edit this post in the future as I am not finished reading em all. Cheers!)

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Aarrvie

Great work da👌..While I reading this i had feelings of watch a fantasy web series visually..i Love this don also😂. Eagerly waiting for nxt chapter 😍

I have searched for a good kingdom-building novel with op mc and thankfully I've found this novel although it has only 5 chapters its looks interesting. of course, there are some mistakes as I think English is the second language to the author just like me but its not bad I read some worse cn jp novels the mc's character kinda cool and mysterious and op which I looked forward to seeing how he deals with more enemies and whats his kryptonite overall this novel has a potential and readers like me should encourage the author and this novel

I really enjoyed this. The story narriation is good nd engaged. Overalll i liked it . writing could have been better. Take care uvr novel from Atlee ND Arm 🥰😁