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this fanfic setting is quite cool. having a new MC as rudy brother is indeed a genius stroke! i'm curious how they grow their relationship in the future. though i have one thing which really bug me tho that is the way narratives keep breaking third wall. if only the story is told like how the original book avoid mentioning other literature too much! also arthur is a man who read mushoku tensei is a fatal flaw. that means that rudy and the whole world is a fictional character made up book writer. how do you solve that fact in the future? what if the original mushoku tensei turn out the world where rudy lives is actually alternate world? what about the god/beings who incarnate rudy? its become overly complicated and nonsensical. arthur should be a man cam from the same earth where pre-reincarnated rudy lived. but i guess it doesnt matter since the book is abandoned anyway
Reading this just made me realize how much I disliked the anime.. Not only that, the author pushes me he jokes too far to the point that chapters are made up of only comedic scenes.. It was funny at first, but it later began to get boring since the plot wasn’t being pushed forward.. It is 80% percent memes and 20% plot…
la lei solo porque habia buenasreseñas, es faltal, los capitulos solo se sentran en los primeros del anime, imagina ver el anime con un personaje extra nada relevante ni importante. asi es esto. es una perdida de tiempo
lots of mistakes, you make Mushoku Tensei world become really bad, The way you build your character makes me feel no emotions, almost skip the world building, characters, details just to satisfy yourselves
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Me gusta el personaje creado para este fanfic pese a que el propia autor resalta que su protagonista tiene problemas de personalidad este se siente mas vivo mas humano a diferencia de otros que se siente como cascarones vacíos que pueden hacer todo y resolver los problemas con el mínimo esfuerzo por eso este me gusta
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I am still following the story, it is improving, I have no problem with the translation, keep up the good work. good luck (: D) ,..............................................................................................,
No me había dado cuenta que no había dejado una reseña. Mal de mi parte. Me pregunto, por que no hay muchos fanfic de esta novela. El MC Original era un dolor en los bajos. Y un MC que lo reemplace sería genial, o en este caso, su hermano. Lo único que me molesta, es lo lento que bajan capítulos. Pero lo demás, recomendado.
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Me gusta lo que has hecho, y también estoy de-acuerno en que hay muchas cosas de la novela original que no me gustaron, principalmente el MC que parecía un niño malcriado, pero de los estúpidos no adorable. Seria bueno que no limites la cantidad de Mana que posee o almeno del nivel de su hermano y solo sea el nivel de la magia que puede lanzar, que seria el intermedio era?. Seria como no poder disparar una Bazuca pero tener Mágnum con disparos casi ilimitados. me ago entender? . . Ps: Agrega a la rubia elfa, Has de ella tu sirvienta o lo que demandes, me dejo un mal sabor de boca cuando no le iso nada. Al igual que con la sexy morena gata del parche en el ojo. Seguí así.
Author here...... Hope you enjoy.....................................................................................................................................................................................
Author, if you read my comment, consider also: -Eris Greyrat. -Sylphiette Greyrat. -Aisha Greyrat. -Ariel Anemoi Asura. etc. ..............
the refresh rate is very slow. I'm not complaining. this is really the only bad point I think. i hope you keep up the good work. thanks for the chapter.
Wow!! Good job, it's a very creative story and has cool characters. I hope you don't let go of this novel, it is the best I have found and I follow it. Good luck and keep it up, Thanks. I am copy the other Man in the Works. But is my feel about the story.
Wow!! Good job, it's a very creative story and has cool characters. I hope you don't let go of this novel, it is the best I have found and I follow it. Good luck and keep it up, Thanks.
Me gustó mucho la historia, me divertí leyéndola y quedé con ganas de leer más. ^^ Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa °^°
this fanfic setting is quite cool. having a new MC as rudy brother is indeed a genius stroke! i'm curious how they grow their relationship in the future. though i have one thing which really bug me tho that is the way narratives keep breaking third wall. if only the story is told like how the original book avoid mentioning other literature too much! also arthur is a man who read mushoku tensei is a fatal flaw. that means that rudy and the whole world is a fictional character made up book writer. how do you solve that fact in the future? what if the original mushoku tensei turn out the world where rudy lives is actually alternate world? what about the god/beings who incarnate rudy? its become overly complicated and nonsensical. arthur should be a man cam from the same earth where pre-reincarnated rudy lived. but i guess it doesnt matter since the book is abandoned anyway
Reading this just made me realize how much I disliked the anime.. Not only that, the author pushes me he jokes too far to the point that chapters are made up of only comedic scenes.. It was funny at first, but it later began to get boring since the plot wasn’t being pushed forward.. It is 80% percent memes and 20% plot…
la lei solo porque habia buenasreseñas, es faltal, los capitulos solo se sentran en los primeros del anime, imagina ver el anime con un personaje extra nada relevante ni importante. asi es esto. es una perdida de tiempo
lots of mistakes, you make Mushoku Tensei world become really bad, The way you build your character makes me feel no emotions, almost skip the world building, characters, details just to satisfy yourselves
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Me gusta el personaje creado para este fanfic pese a que el propia autor resalta que su protagonista tiene problemas de personalidad este se siente mas vivo mas humano a diferencia de otros que se siente como cascarones vacíos que pueden hacer todo y resolver los problemas con el mínimo esfuerzo por eso este me gusta
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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I am still following the story, it is improving, I have no problem with the translation, keep up the good work. good luck (: D) ,..............................................................................................,
No me había dado cuenta que no había dejado una reseña. Mal de mi parte. Me pregunto, por que no hay muchos fanfic de esta novela. El MC Original era un dolor en los bajos. Y un MC que lo reemplace sería genial, o en este caso, su hermano. Lo único que me molesta, es lo lento que bajan capítulos. Pero lo demás, recomendado.
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great novel cant wait for more >>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP>>>>>>>EXP
Me gusta lo que has hecho, y también estoy de-acuerno en que hay muchas cosas de la novela original que no me gustaron, principalmente el MC que parecía un niño malcriado, pero de los estúpidos no adorable. Seria bueno que no limites la cantidad de Mana que posee o almeno del nivel de su hermano y solo sea el nivel de la magia que puede lanzar, que seria el intermedio era?. Seria como no poder disparar una Bazuca pero tener Mágnum con disparos casi ilimitados. me ago entender? . . Ps: Agrega a la rubia elfa, Has de ella tu sirvienta o lo que demandes, me dejo un mal sabor de boca cuando no le iso nada. Al igual que con la sexy morena gata del parche en el ojo. Seguí así.
Author here...... Hope you enjoy.....................................................................................................................................................................................
Author, if you read my comment, consider also: -Eris Greyrat. -Sylphiette Greyrat. -Aisha Greyrat. -Ariel Anemoi Asura. etc. ..............
the refresh rate is very slow. I'm not complaining. this is really the only bad point I think. i hope you keep up the good work. thanks for the chapter.
Wow!! Good job, it's a very creative story and has cool characters. I hope you don't let go of this novel, it is the best I have found and I follow it. Good luck and keep it up, Thanks. I am copy the other Man in the Works. But is my feel about the story.
Wow!! Good job, it's a very creative story and has cool characters. I hope you don't let go of this novel, it is the best I have found and I follow it. Good luck and keep it up, Thanks.
Me gustó mucho la historia, me divertí leyéndola y quedé con ganas de leer más. ^^ Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa °^°