IMPERFECT COUPLE AND THEIR PERFECT LOVE

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Vamshi_sangati

When I started reading this story, I thought that story is simple and common... But day by day story narration and characters design is little bit more interesting, and iam loving the story. I hope, upcoming episodes also will be the best. ❤️ Characters 😘 ❤️Design 😘 ❤️ Narration 😘 ❤️For You 🙈😘 "Parri" For readers - You will love it 👻

the effort u did to expain abt relationship was good the imagination u did without experianced it quite intresting tnq for sharing this 😋😋😋😋

I love the story... tha way u represented it very good add some chemistry in story...!😜🥰🤩😘☺️😂😉😹😑☺️😋😊😗😙😍😍😋😙😚😍😊😉😙😎😙☺️😋😗☺️😋😗😎🤣😉🤣😗🙂😋😗😍😋🤗😎😙🙂😋😗☺️😊🥰😎😂🥰😃😊😎🤗😙😊☺️🥰☺️😗🤗😎😙😘😃😊😍🤣😉😋😗🤣😎🤣😆😍😉🙂😃😉🤗😎😗🙂😎😗😎😗🤣😍😉😂😎😆😎😂😆😂😎😆🤣🙂😉🤗😃😉🤣🙂😆🙂🤣😗😍🤣😉🤣😍😉😎😂😆☺️🥰🙂😙🙂😋😗🙂😋😗🤗😎😗🤗😙🙂😎😗😎🤗😎😙🤗😗🙂😋😗🙂😋😗😋😗😗🙂😋😋🙂😗

LV 3

Pickled_Chiki

Hello, Author! Hope you're doing dandy! So let me say this first... Your novel is a piece of art! I love it! The small chapters, crisp way of telling the story and the chemistry, everything is so fabulous! I'm looking forward to reading it more and more. But onto the critics. Like mentioned previously by others, you could do with some grammatical correction but for that there is Grammarly. And truthfully, that's the only critic that I could find. I haven't read all the chapters so I'm not in a position to criticize the chapters which I haven't read but I plan on reading it nonetheless, you can assured of that. Lastly, I'm impressed by your rate of updates which gives me a ray of hope that you won't abandon this book on a whim. Thank you for that! Anyway, that's all I've to say. Pickle Out!

LV 4

Primate

First, I commend your effort. Great work. Second, I rated your writing quality 3 stars. There are some things you really need to address in your work, especially with the phrasing. I already left a comment on the first chapter. Third, your updating stability, I rated it 5 stars. You deserved that. No fault at all. Fourth, your story development recieved 5 stars. Your story line is progressing well with each chapter. Fifth, character design. I gave you 4 stars. Your characters seemed like a cliche of many romance novels. So far. If it changes in the future, I will be back to adjust. And lastly, the world background. Its a bit typical of romance world. So far. But, it's a good one too. Great job. Keep it up.

LV 14

Meghana_Mallaiah

Please complete this novel author..... I like this love & family story... Please continue writing it Iike the friendship u wrote here, nice story. Continue writing & complete it. Looking forward for the updates. I like Abhi & Pari love story its very nice.

LV 1

FRENCHY

The story is amazing but it feels like I'm reading unexpected ecounter by Sophia 05 it's too much exactly same thing happened to Hari and vasu happened to Mike and Anna and others it's like I'm reading same stories also the main leads and pari and Abhi your story is nice I just love new ideas not used ones believe in yourself

LV 10

Shagun_Chamola

Just loved the story . Compliments the title. Narration and characters are amazing. The way the story is connecting all characters is very nice. Love the the story🤩🤩😎😎💯✨

LV 11

crecord

Dear author, you should seriously do some editing, few chapters even miss quotes for dialogues. Its very hard to read, story is good but grammar is terrible.

LV 10

lazylyn

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LV 13

prada_murthy

The story and the background development is good. The characters have been well introduced and the story is fast-paced. There are minute errors, but it is not difficult for the readers to understand what is being portrayed. However, I would suggest you edit it to make it look better and polished. Looking forward to seeing how their relationship builds. Keep up the good work author.

LV 5

Seide

A little polish on the earlier chapters and it'll be perfect :D If you don't have an editor, then that would be an option. Otherwise, great story. It's a romance!

LV 3

ValerieVoyse

What will happen to Pari and Abhi? I'll have to read more chapters. Some advise I might give you (regarding for example some grammar mistakes) is once you finish writing the book, put it aside for a bit and then edit it, however don't worry about it too much on your first or second draft. Good effort! Keep writing! ❤️

LV 14

BaeVida

Okay, love the intro to your synopsis... Little enlightenment to ur readers about ur idea on love. It is not your normal Chinese or English story... First Indian story I have read on webnovel... So that's a change. First of, from your synopsis, I knew English wasn't your first language and you had issues writing with it, thus the grammatical errors. So I expected a little warning up front in ur synopsis or at the start of ur novel, so readers are prepared. Cos it can b a turn off for some reader as it breaks d flow truing to restructure the words I their heads. But if one looks past it, then it sure is a good read. Now the story proper. It depicts the life youngsters have to face with little or no opinion in their marriage... Which I stand against... But inspire of finding out abt their marriage 2 days before the d day... Somehow these two found a way to make their imperfect love prefect. A man who shrugged the idea to putting his all into the marriage on his wedding night, now saying I love u countless times. Nice story, keep it up and get an editor if you can.

LV 5

RenuKakkar

The story is interesting, captivating from the first chapter itself. Story is developing well, the stability of updates is good. The Character Design is good an so is the World Background is equally good. The Writing quality need to be improved. There are issues with grammar like punctuation, commas, inverted commas, capital letter for names etc as well as sentence construction. This can be remedied by running your draft through a grammar checker like Grammarly. I am using it. Keep on writing. All the best.

LV 11

Kiiara

Since this is your book, I think this is already a good start. I applaud you for finally writing. It’s a good story tbh. I love the concept already and you jump right into action in the first chapter. That’s good, it pulls the readers to read more because we wanna know what happen. The only improvement you need is your writing. I’m not gonna comment on grammar. As long as the readers understand who cares? What I wanna comment is the punctuation and some typos. Also the fluidity of the story. Lastly, if u can do write more words per chapter. But I’m not forcing you to because a lot of people do love short chapters. Well, good luck love! I hope you’ll improve and ur story get more exposure!

LV 2

Nightmare_weaver

Love the synopsis. Very unique, I haven't seen anything like it before. I will definitely be reading this like a mad man. Keep up the great work and carry on.

LV 3

MokouFriedChicken

Very consistent, this story. Story and plot is very serviceable even through the occasional grammar hiccups. If there's any critique that I would leave, it's the liberal use of the word 'said' and your penchant for leading into the dialogue a bit too much. I would suggest putting the character's actions after the dialogue sometimes to add some more spice. Also, some sentences lack proper capitalization in the beginning. That's it no? Clearly you're driven to write, so keep on writing and improve 👍

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Rishitha_Reddy_5375

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