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Ren killed by Truck-kun and arrive in One piece world without any system. He wished to be a son of Big Mom. See how Ren around the world
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Write a reviewThis one piece ff is fvking boring. All actions isn't serious at all and sometimes cringey and all the protagonist do is show off to the important characters in one piece Mc being treated as smart but in truth he is so Stupid he's so simple and not unique like his powers
Had good maybe even great potential but ruined it withe the mc's personality lack of checks on mc's ability and super rush with the story not enjoying and spoilers. Ruined the story!!!
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Reveal SpoilerI like it and I hope That you will make more story about this. I hope that there will be female oc beauty daughter of big mom. Good character and romance
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Reveal SpoilerUnique idea and unique plot... I have to say.. good work... I like ur story please don't drop this .. too good to be dropped . And I am excited to read more chapters..
although a good and unusual start it seems interesting to anyone a fan of the one piece but sadly the start only gives him a reason to be overpowered and adds nothing to the story except the odd chapter where he greets big mom with the love between them negatively effecting the story and as i read on the chapters and plot start to slowly depreciate
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Good art like your other FF.. Hope u Mass release it my bro.. ๐ฉ ๐ ๐๐Great! ๐ ๐ฉ๐ฌCool๐ซ ๐๐๐ฅ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐โจโจโจ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ Congratulations!
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Author loner113
Im honestly disappointed with this novel. Beginning with a clishe in die first chapter and in the second you can already see where the story will develope to. His opinion about big mum is that shes beautiful.....