I can recommend Marvel: Re-Do, it is about a Mc who awakens the Lutent ability to adapt and evolve, see if you can maybe find inspiration in it or for the readers, I can recommend it 👍
And while we're thinking of questions, I got one for you guys. See all fanfictions have some bad ass character with op abilities, like lightning manipulation, fire, darkness, light. But I've never seen anyone do something as simple as Physical adaptation, The ability to grow stronger and evolve past your current strengths. Kind of like Darwin's abilities from the X-men. But instead of gaining new powers, your body just grows. From being a baseline human, to peak, to beyond. It's a simple ability, like say you get shot and when you heal, your skin is denser and can withstand multiple bullets before it begins to do real damage. Or say when you punch something, and it breaks your hand. When your hand heals it can withstand the previous force that broke it.
Marvel: Son of Poseidon
Anime & Comics · TrapcardD
I could imagine that
1. A pair of short axes
Naruto: Root Ninja
Anime & Comics · komega
I think the goal and journey are missing, you either concentrate on the goal or the journey and character development. On the other hand As your story is now I don’ t see much difficulties that are long term, only some short term like the attack of his teammates but no complications. You have the perfect villain in Danzo or a hidden orgamization of mercenaries or something like that. But as of now your character is just simply existing and not creating in an already existing story. My Tip: Be bold, change what you want to change and let him live a life of difficulties Fun and Creative writing ✍️
I like your passion of youth😂
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Naruto: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Navy_King
How about „I am Krillin“, I think it was quite good. Nice chapter👍
Well I prefer a movie or novel, where choices are described but not explained. Just show the reader the emotiona let them be part of the story and not seperate them by trying to explain the reasoning of the character. I don‘t know the novel, but felt disturbed by the tipps left behind for the author to stumble over. And a further tip, try to incorporate a hidden story, something that is there in one centence but is never explained, but adds depth to the world/characters and so on. Do your beat, author.
My disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined
Sigh... The anger and disappointment in me is immense... And the worst thing is that the fanfic didn't have any revisions warning the readers... Urg!
Savage: The Night Wizard - (A Harry Potter Fanfic)
Book&Literature · Se7en
For my taste, his reactions are a bit artificial and the dialoge is missing completely. You just advance the plot, but dont care about writing his character and enhancing the story. The story in its enterity feels a bit soulles, good idea but to focused ob the plot. But the idea is worthy to put in a fanfic
For my taste, his reactions are a bit artificial and the dialoge is missing completely. You just advance the plot, but dont care about writing his character and enhancing the story. The story in its enterity feels a bit soulles, good idea but to focused ob the plot. But the idea is worthy to put in a fanfic
Pls just switch the picture back … it looks like every throwaway harem novel 🤦♂️🥴😂
The Best Shinobi
Anime & Comics · Evil_Paragon