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why remove the book? I was planning to reread :( Sad to see another starwars fic disappear from the site......................................
Ey, are you okay? I feel like something's up with you. its been a year now and you're not updating anything even though you havw good books to be finished.
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I love this star wars fan fiction. It's great and wonderful story. I wish I had a Star Wars System now. I want to be powerful like the MC with a cool system that lets you summon awesome stuff like armies and etc. With my cool droid and clone army, I will create the Holy Galatic Empire. So please don't drop, continue posting.
Nice novel pls dont drop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Opening great then turns to ****. Like him having a system I like he is in star wars. I don't like the mind control, killing off the lead villain of original film series Gave up by chapter 6
Simply a fantastic novel as a huge Star Wars fan who has seen everything and read everything To date I appreciate this novel I have been looking for a good Star Wars fan fiction for a long time and I have to say yours is currently my favorite I hope to see more chapters soon
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I almost gave you respect for the story. Too bad you just had to ruin it with stupidity and sexist views of a loser. If you want a harem just get to the point of abandoning the story. If you want him to build an empire stop only recruiting women it's counterproductive.
One of the better Star Wars stories out there, it has an interesting protagonist and his followers, there are some times that the followers feel pretty 2d, but for the most part I feel that they have good, believable interactions. It has stable and entertaining story development. There were very few moments that I actually felt it was dry, there was no point in time at least were I had to take a break from the story. I always found it fun to see the reactions from people in the story when the protagonist does something unbelievable or similiar due to the system. 7/10, would read again.
I love this novel and your other star wars novel. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading your chapter releases for the star wars novel. You should try to get your star wars bools published.
Nothing is perfect...this is solid entertainment for me. Looking forward to more. Thanks for time and fun.**************************************** ****************
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Well this fanfic has is good and is bad can believe I will say this but man, this is what happen when you do a glorify harem. Horrible character development,as in the very beginning of the story was good the problem comes after helping the princes, it made for a horrible development as the story just become a rushed mess the power balance is really bad.
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Great LN. I just wish there was a few hundred more chapters to binge read. *sigh* --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The story is good and one of a kind you don't see star wars fanfic too much but if your not fond MC being a brainwasher dont read this. .
Its had me hooked since the first chapter and I fear it will soon become a heart demon if I don’t read it daily. Keep on going Friend Ink. There are some parts where it is slow and we get compensated with material certified by the Gentleman’s Society. But when it gets going it really gets going!!!
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Good story, fun to read. Interesting development. Good story, fun to read. Interesting development. Good story, fun to read. Interesting development. Good story, fun to read. Interesting development.
Great story so far :) Very entertaining. I hate the 140 thing I hate the 140 thing I hate the 140 thing I hate the 140 thing I hate the 140 thing I hate the 140 thing
The MC is OP but not to the point where it will make the storyline boring or not make sense, I always search for star wars fanfic but never find it until now so please continue Author it already has very great potential! **:I will always give my power stone to you!;)
Lmfao, didn't even read the story yet, but the synopsis with its near flawless grammar with tags that starts to circulate the blood to my little brother has already got me hooked. Not to mention the chapters available. 60+ Damn, you got me in.
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Overall one of the best stories that I’ve read, However now that I’ve read this story I’ve been spoiled and now I can’t read other Star Wars stories because I find they’re lacking compared to this.
why remove the book? I was planning to reread :( Sad to see another starwars fic disappear from the site......................................
Ey, are you okay? I feel like something's up with you. its been a year now and you're not updating anything even though you havw good books to be finished.
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I love this star wars fan fiction. It's great and wonderful story. I wish I had a Star Wars System now. I want to be powerful like the MC with a cool system that lets you summon awesome stuff like armies and etc. With my cool droid and clone army, I will create the Holy Galatic Empire. So please don't drop, continue posting.
Nice novel pls dont drop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Opening great then turns to ****. Like him having a system I like he is in star wars. I don't like the mind control, killing off the lead villain of original film series Gave up by chapter 6
Simply a fantastic novel as a huge Star Wars fan who has seen everything and read everything To date I appreciate this novel I have been looking for a good Star Wars fan fiction for a long time and I have to say yours is currently my favorite I hope to see more chapters soon
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Please don't drop this fanfic, please 😁🅰🅰😁😁😁😁😁 🅰😁😁🅰😁😁🅰😁 🅰🅰🅰🅰😁🅰🅰🅰 🅰😁😁🅰😁😁🅰😁 🅰😁😁🅰😁😁😁😁 😁🅰🅰😁😁😁😁😁 🅰😁😁🅰😁😁🅰😁 🅰🅰🅰🅰😁🅰🅰🅰 🅰😁😁🅰😁😁🅰😁 🅰😁😁🅰😁😁😁😁 😁🅰🅰😁😁😁😁😁 🅰😁😁🅰😁😁🅰😁 🅰🅰🅰🅰😁🅰🅰🅰 🅰😁😁🅰😁😁🅰😁 🅰😁😁🅰😁😁😁😁
I almost gave you respect for the story. Too bad you just had to ruin it with stupidity and sexist views of a loser. If you want a harem just get to the point of abandoning the story. If you want him to build an empire stop only recruiting women it's counterproductive.
One of the better Star Wars stories out there, it has an interesting protagonist and his followers, there are some times that the followers feel pretty 2d, but for the most part I feel that they have good, believable interactions. It has stable and entertaining story development. There were very few moments that I actually felt it was dry, there was no point in time at least were I had to take a break from the story. I always found it fun to see the reactions from people in the story when the protagonist does something unbelievable or similiar due to the system. 7/10, would read again.
I love this novel and your other star wars novel. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading your chapter releases for the star wars novel. You should try to get your star wars bools published.
Nothing is perfect...this is solid entertainment for me. Looking forward to more. Thanks for time and fun.**************************************** ****************
EXCELENTOSO!!!!!! /sfdlk ja;ldfm ;alsdkjf'alsdfjfdddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
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Well this fanfic has is good and is bad can believe I will say this but man, this is what happen when you do a glorify harem. Horrible character development,as in the very beginning of the story was good the problem comes after helping the princes, it made for a horrible development as the story just become a rushed mess the power balance is really bad.
moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore
Great LN. I just wish there was a few hundred more chapters to binge read. *sigh* --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The story is good and one of a kind you don't see star wars fanfic too much but if your not fond MC being a brainwasher dont read this. .
Its had me hooked since the first chapter and I fear it will soon become a heart demon if I don’t read it daily. Keep on going Friend Ink. There are some parts where it is slow and we get compensated with material certified by the Gentleman’s Society. But when it gets going it really gets going!!!
moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore
Good story, fun to read. Interesting development. Good story, fun to read. Interesting development. Good story, fun to read. Interesting development. Good story, fun to read. Interesting development.
Great story so far :) Very entertaining. I hate the 140 thing I hate the 140 thing I hate the 140 thing I hate the 140 thing I hate the 140 thing I hate the 140 thing
The MC is OP but not to the point where it will make the storyline boring or not make sense, I always search for star wars fanfic but never find it until now so please continue Author it already has very great potential! **:I will always give my power stone to you!;)
Lmfao, didn't even read the story yet, but the synopsis with its near flawless grammar with tags that starts to circulate the blood to my little brother has already got me hooked. Not to mention the chapters available. 60+ Damn, you got me in.
EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP
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Overall one of the best stories that I’ve read, However now that I’ve read this story I’ve been spoiled and now I can’t read other Star Wars stories because I find they’re lacking compared to this.