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The main character is a personality is psychotic, stupid, and sometimes especially childish. Plus his views are as thin as paper, he says he would only remove those threats to society but he killed people for fun and he also manipulated Jaune to commit suicide. A certain part from the fanfic itself chapter The black reaper 'While the targets need not to be necessarily evil, if they are truly a good people who seek the good of the others unconditionally, he would refuse. ' This more or less shows that he would only kill people if they are evil and not kill innocent people but he killed innocent people for fun. Plus Jaune who legitimately want to help people is someone he wants to kill it's even stated in the chapter Beacon Part 1 ' [ I didn't like that trash in the show. I shall give him a chance, but if he is the same as in the show, then I will get rid of him personally] With these thoughts, A smile filled with evil drawn on Mesa's face. ' What about his thing about not killing innocent, he more or less broke that just in a couple of chapters. Plus how can Jaune be different in the show if you didn't change his life in a way? I guess maybe the assassination the mc did but Jaune's family probably aren't bad so there mostly did not die or maybe Jaune's friend or family friends before he went to beacon but Jaune has shown to be socially awkward as Ruby so he most likely didn't have that many friends like Ruby.
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this novel isn't for me. I love dark novels but this isn't dark it's just ****ed up. first you sexual assault neo my favorite character then wanting to kill my waifu glynda even went as far as manipulating jaune to commit suicide, this is just a ****ed up novel written by an author who's trying to make his oc dark and is just pissing off readers in the process
Well i found the novel really enjoyable. but i am doubting that the novel wasnt dropped considering there hasnt been a new chapter for a year
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I'm I am just telling you guys this is the best novel for me THE BEST EDGY psychopath Mc which is toward my liking and this is the first story I ever read that's soooo good unlike those story's that say the mc is edgy and evil and turns out in the end he will become good and those harem trashy plots (no offence to other stories this is just from my view) cool novel for those people liking edgy manipulative and not turning good (maybe?) I wish it's not dropping
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How this novel has over 4 stars baffles me, if you are reading it, word of warning, you are reading it for its trash, edge, and violent mood swings that suddenly happen with no warning. If you dislike stories that aren't serious in their development, then you might want to give this one a pass. There are some things that make it a worthwhile read, but never take the novel seriously The hell did I just read, "I don't kill innocents" (kills them for fun) "They are future wife material" (Nothing before or after that saying he's wanting them) "Ah I understand my mistake" (proceeds to commit the same mistake in the future, cause inconsistency (also it happened without any real warning)) And the killing and the whole assassin thing is just a joke, the author does like 3 chapters being an assassin.... Now then, the quality is decent (though it's typo galore), I don't know about updates, story development is just a tweens horny story, character design if we look at the mc's OC alone, we can see it's terrible, and the world background..... I'm just gonna say the only redeeming factor is the prologue, cause that was the whole reason I was interested in the story, but now that I read all this.... I'm disappointed Readers who still hear, I shall repeat myself one last time. A word of warning if you wish to read the fanfiction, you are reading it for its inconsistencies, and for how trashy a novel can be. This may be an insult, but no joke you are reading it for its trash, and it's comedy aspects. Believe me when I say that you should never read it seriously, otherwise you will never get through it. There are some inclusions inside this terrible novel that just make you continue forward, but there are also spots where you will just drop right then and there. You have been warned
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I seriously didn't like how the story is going.... I mean mc personality is **** and author is showing how that is good and somehow many of the readers like this kind of dark story like they are fulfilling their inner beasts
Can't wait for this to be continued!! Mc: Evil bastard, like, really evil. So if u can't handle that, then this probably isn't for you. The mc was starting to soften a bit, but later in the novel he made a complete asshole turn. Great. He's also intelligent, cunning and devilishly handsome (that's always a plus) World: since issa fanfic, the world building is basically already there, but for me who knows nothing about Rwby, I can be slightly confused sometimes, but it's mostly easy to understand. Characters: They have feelings, you really feel that they're alive (sounds kinda weird but yk what i mean). Sometimesss it's a little weird that people always forgive Mesa very quickly, no matter what he's done, and find ways to pity him etc. But yea as long as mc keeps not caring about anyone, like, not loving anyone at all. Then I'm all for it
A great story. I like those stories with an evil MC/puppetmaster who just dicks around looking innocent but is secretly the greatest danger the world had ever seen. PLEASE, FOR THE LOVE OF EVERYTHING HOLY. Don't drop this gem.
More chapters please!!! This is fck great you dont need to watch rwby to understand the plot 1400p0000000000000000
Rocky at the beginning but get better later on. His actions are also explained in the latest chapters and are reasonable. Now im just rotting away, waiting for more chapters since it's one my my favourite novels I've read since it hit around 50 chapters.
This story has been nothing but a trainwreck. I had my hopes that the chapters and the Main Character "Mesa Uchiha" will improve, but so far, I haven't seen anything that can fix his character and this story. I really wish you can think of something to fix this. Introducing an MC that has OP powers is no problem, but the fact that you made him way too powerful and even describe him as an "excellent" character to the point of him becoming a narcissistic completely lost my interest as a reader and I can probably say the same to the others that have read your fanfiction.
Edgy and all powerful protagonist is edgy and all powerful is an accurate summary of what I read before calling it quits. Grammer and sentence structure is somewhere between average and above average for the site. I chose to drop when the protagonist uses the paths of pain to spread out his powers and create two "brothers" to trick the cast. I would rather be reading a story were that trick was what was actually happening.
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this is master piece my bruh....!!! Im one of your fan and you are one of the people inspired me on writing novels....!!! , I salute your work's~!!!!
Everything here is top notch , and the grammar is good so does the plot and plot twists, please don't drop the novel / fanfiction......................
This **** is addicting, don't watch it. First, you will be thinking that this is a story about how an assassin is gonna start feeling some emotions and ****, right? Or how he changes his ways like some other assassin (Black Cat)? Wrong! This is about how a motherfucking badass that doesn't care about others, their feelings, opinions or any kind of **** like that! This is about Mesa Uchiha, a fucking eagle of freedom, that does what he wants, says and thinks what he wants, without being constrained by societies values/principals. Now I repeat, don't read this, you'll get hooked the same way you got hooked on drugs. If you do read this, once you're in, theirs no turning back, so prepare your a*us as this fan-fics about to go deep, real deep into some philosophies and just phycological ****/physcho **** all around. Once again, prepare you a*us as this fanfic's gonna give it to you hard and it's gonna be painful, but you will enjoy it. Everyone who reads this fucking masterpiece to the did as well.
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this is really good.. the mc here is rational,schemer unique one of the kind. thi is master piece, not some retard dumb,panic,eccentric mc, like those xiaxia ... no offense on fans of those.. this is really good... TUMBS UP FOR THE AUTHOR!!!
This is one of the few stories that can be ranked at the top for me sure his actions may not seem logical but thats the point you dont understand what he does he is an experienced asssassin whit no common reason he only does what he thinks is fun sure he might have a master plan but he still the same person in the beginning u will think that its a bit weird whit all that becoming family whit yand and tuby at the start but it adds so much more flavor to the story on the later arcs.
Yo this a story meant for someone like me so for anybody that likes a sadistic,psychotic,mentally crazy mc this is for u!😈hehehehe come join the darkside
...... Holy S#!@..... im sorry... If you wan't a happy sunshine and rainbows novel, avoid this like the plague, but if you like deep and dark writing that heavily boarders on twisted, F#!@ is this the novel for you.
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I love that this is a mc that a villain and not some guy that was evil turn good there are to many strays that have goody toshoe mc this book is a refreshing read and I love it I just wish yiu continue it.
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The main character is a personality is psychotic, stupid, and sometimes especially childish. Plus his views are as thin as paper, he says he would only remove those threats to society but he killed people for fun and he also manipulated Jaune to commit suicide. A certain part from the fanfic itself chapter The black reaper 'While the targets need not to be necessarily evil, if they are truly a good people who seek the good of the others unconditionally, he would refuse. ' This more or less shows that he would only kill people if they are evil and not kill innocent people but he killed innocent people for fun. Plus Jaune who legitimately want to help people is someone he wants to kill it's even stated in the chapter Beacon Part 1 ' [ I didn't like that trash in the show. I shall give him a chance, but if he is the same as in the show, then I will get rid of him personally] With these thoughts, A smile filled with evil drawn on Mesa's face. ' What about his thing about not killing innocent, he more or less broke that just in a couple of chapters. Plus how can Jaune be different in the show if you didn't change his life in a way? I guess maybe the assassination the mc did but Jaune's family probably aren't bad so there mostly did not die or maybe Jaune's friend or family friends before he went to beacon but Jaune has shown to be socially awkward as Ruby so he most likely didn't have that many friends like Ruby.
Reveal Spoiler this novel isn't for me. I love dark novels but this isn't dark it's just ****ed up. first you sexual assault neo my favorite character then wanting to kill my waifu glynda even went as far as manipulating jaune to commit suicide, this is just a ****ed up novel written by an author who's trying to make his oc dark and is just pissing off readers in the process
Well i found the novel really enjoyable. but i am doubting that the novel wasnt dropped considering there hasnt been a new chapter for a year
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Reveal Spoiler I'm I am just telling you guys this is the best novel for me THE BEST EDGY psychopath Mc which is toward my liking and this is the first story I ever read that's soooo good unlike those story's that say the mc is edgy and evil and turns out in the end he will become good and those harem trashy plots (no offence to other stories this is just from my view) cool novel for those people liking edgy manipulative and not turning good (maybe?) I wish it's not dropping
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How this novel has over 4 stars baffles me, if you are reading it, word of warning, you are reading it for its trash, edge, and violent mood swings that suddenly happen with no warning. If you dislike stories that aren't serious in their development, then you might want to give this one a pass. There are some things that make it a worthwhile read, but never take the novel seriously The hell did I just read, "I don't kill innocents" (kills them for fun) "They are future wife material" (Nothing before or after that saying he's wanting them) "Ah I understand my mistake" (proceeds to commit the same mistake in the future, cause inconsistency (also it happened without any real warning)) And the killing and the whole assassin thing is just a joke, the author does like 3 chapters being an assassin.... Now then, the quality is decent (though it's typo galore), I don't know about updates, story development is just a tweens horny story, character design if we look at the mc's OC alone, we can see it's terrible, and the world background..... I'm just gonna say the only redeeming factor is the prologue, cause that was the whole reason I was interested in the story, but now that I read all this.... I'm disappointed Readers who still hear, I shall repeat myself one last time. A word of warning if you wish to read the fanfiction, you are reading it for its inconsistencies, and for how trashy a novel can be. This may be an insult, but no joke you are reading it for its trash, and it's comedy aspects. Believe me when I say that you should never read it seriously, otherwise you will never get through it. There are some inclusions inside this terrible novel that just make you continue forward, but there are also spots where you will just drop right then and there. You have been warned
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I seriously didn't like how the story is going.... I mean mc personality is **** and author is showing how that is good and somehow many of the readers like this kind of dark story like they are fulfilling their inner beasts
Can't wait for this to be continued!! Mc: Evil bastard, like, really evil. So if u can't handle that, then this probably isn't for you. The mc was starting to soften a bit, but later in the novel he made a complete asshole turn. Great. He's also intelligent, cunning and devilishly handsome (that's always a plus) World: since issa fanfic, the world building is basically already there, but for me who knows nothing about Rwby, I can be slightly confused sometimes, but it's mostly easy to understand. Characters: They have feelings, you really feel that they're alive (sounds kinda weird but yk what i mean). Sometimesss it's a little weird that people always forgive Mesa very quickly, no matter what he's done, and find ways to pity him etc. But yea as long as mc keeps not caring about anyone, like, not loving anyone at all. Then I'm all for it
A great story. I like those stories with an evil MC/puppetmaster who just dicks around looking innocent but is secretly the greatest danger the world had ever seen. PLEASE, FOR THE LOVE OF EVERYTHING HOLY. Don't drop this gem.
More chapters please!!! This is fck great you dont need to watch rwby to understand the plot 1400p0000000000000000
Rocky at the beginning but get better later on. His actions are also explained in the latest chapters and are reasonable. Now im just rotting away, waiting for more chapters since it's one my my favourite novels I've read since it hit around 50 chapters.
This story has been nothing but a trainwreck. I had my hopes that the chapters and the Main Character "Mesa Uchiha" will improve, but so far, I haven't seen anything that can fix his character and this story. I really wish you can think of something to fix this. Introducing an MC that has OP powers is no problem, but the fact that you made him way too powerful and even describe him as an "excellent" character to the point of him becoming a narcissistic completely lost my interest as a reader and I can probably say the same to the others that have read your fanfiction.
Edgy and all powerful protagonist is edgy and all powerful is an accurate summary of what I read before calling it quits. Grammer and sentence structure is somewhere between average and above average for the site. I chose to drop when the protagonist uses the paths of pain to spread out his powers and create two "brothers" to trick the cast. I would rather be reading a story were that trick was what was actually happening.
Reveal Spoiler this is master piece my bruh....!!! Im one of your fan and you are one of the people inspired me on writing novels....!!! , I salute your work's~!!!!
Everything here is top notch , and the grammar is good so does the plot and plot twists, please don't drop the novel / fanfiction......................
This **** is addicting, don't watch it. First, you will be thinking that this is a story about how an assassin is gonna start feeling some emotions and ****, right? Or how he changes his ways like some other assassin (Black Cat)? Wrong! This is about how a motherfucking badass that doesn't care about others, their feelings, opinions or any kind of **** like that! This is about Mesa Uchiha, a fucking eagle of freedom, that does what he wants, says and thinks what he wants, without being constrained by societies values/principals. Now I repeat, don't read this, you'll get hooked the same way you got hooked on drugs. If you do read this, once you're in, theirs no turning back, so prepare your a*us as this fan-fics about to go deep, real deep into some philosophies and just phycological ****/physcho **** all around. Once again, prepare you a*us as this fanfic's gonna give it to you hard and it's gonna be painful, but you will enjoy it. Everyone who reads this fucking masterpiece to the did as well.
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this is really good.. the mc here is rational,schemer unique one of the kind. thi is master piece, not some retard dumb,panic,eccentric mc, like those xiaxia ... no offense on fans of those.. this is really good... TUMBS UP FOR THE AUTHOR!!!
This is one of the few stories that can be ranked at the top for me sure his actions may not seem logical but thats the point you dont understand what he does he is an experienced asssassin whit no common reason he only does what he thinks is fun sure he might have a master plan but he still the same person in the beginning u will think that its a bit weird whit all that becoming family whit yand and tuby at the start but it adds so much more flavor to the story on the later arcs.
Yo this a story meant for someone like me so for anybody that likes a sadistic,psychotic,mentally crazy mc this is for u!😈hehehehe come join the darkside
...... Holy S#!@..... im sorry... If you wan't a happy sunshine and rainbows novel, avoid this like the plague, but if you like deep and dark writing that heavily boarders on twisted, F#!@ is this the novel for you.
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I love that this is a mc that a villain and not some guy that was evil turn good there are to many strays that have goody toshoe mc this book is a refreshing read and I love it I just wish yiu continue it.