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Write a reviewWow, like so much about history in the first chapters! I don’t mind but I’m not a history geek so I didn’t knew a lot about it, and your way of describing things are amazing, excellent grammar, and I kinda like it, so I’ll keep checking up on it though!
I loved, loved the first chapter because it reminded me so much of the Byzantine Empire lol probably because I'm a history buff? The descriptions were well written and the background was very, very detailed and well thought out. The writing style is great and thus far, I have not observed any errors. Amazing work!
Wow! This really amazing, something about the novel is really captivating, and I really appreciate the psychological and philosophical aspects of it, keep it up!
I like it a lot . It’s a very cute story. The characters are just awesome. I like how they seem to just naturally go together. I loved the first chapter it draws you in
A Distinct Writing Style Paired with a Good Story to Tell. Each chapter is progressive and clear. If Inkstone wasn't so limited on writing tools, I'd say the author would definitely own the immersion aspect of readers. There is a firm grasp of writing which creates prose that touches the reader's affect. Well-structured and well-conveyed.
Hello! I found your book from the review swap but I came to read because the title drew me in. This book is omg amazing! It drew me in real quick and the beginning, you detailed the scene so well. I couldn’t stop reading. I hope you keep writing because you don’t find many authors like This!!! 😌✨
I've been reading Volume Two: Heartstrings because I thought the synopsis was very intriguing. It's great to see how well the relationship between teacher and students has been portrayed and you can really get a sense of how close Heather is with the class. It's really sweet to see them get along so nicely. The Author has a lovely writing style and I like the somewhat dark twist on the story!
This novel is very good. I am not regretting that I started to read it. Keep up with your good work writer. I really do like the writing quality.👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾
The story is nice and excellent I have nothing else to say for this except improving on descriptive abilities. The dialogue and the thoughts of the characters flows smoothly.. Nicely done Miss MFC... Nicely done..
It's Good One.. Absolutely read it.. So You get a overview of the City and the background from the start of the story so there's little to no chance of confusion. Then there are some words... I'm writing them.. they're going to be useful 😂. Ok.. there's somewhere some typos but not that traceable cause you're already lost in the story and wanting to figure out what will be next. So I'm going to read it till the end cause you know... I need answers... so please author keep writing up and releasing chapters as much as you can...
Down to chapter 10 and will definitely continue reading it! I must say...you really are an admirable writer. The flow of the story is really good and the choice of words and how you put it is incredible. I mean you sure have a wide vocabulary. The words are colorful and it truly gives spice in your work. Really impressive!
I enjoyed this book so much! It just makes you read after another chapter. The author has such a wonderful choice of words, It just makes you read it more because of its awesomeness, The grammar is great that it makes you understand the story more. I love the prose of it because it conveys the Author's Idea, He/She painted the whereabouts of the story perfectly. I Loved and Enjoyed the story so much! Btw, sorry for the late review author, I read more chapters because It really is Fantastic! I would recommend this story so much!
First off, I would like to thank you for having close to zero grammatical and spelling errors. Dialogue and setting is specific and concise, which makes it even better.. This would be my first romance novel so it was nice that I started with this to get into the genre. I like how compelling the characters are, and the way that the story develops. It's not too slow or too fast- just right. In all, this novel has a lot of potential and I hope you continue to add more compelling plot points to the story.
A good story!! I don't know what to say. There's nothing wrong with the grammar. Mostly because English is not my main language. At first, when I started reading this, I don't really have big impression. Mostly, because i never read this type of novel. But, after giving it some time to reading, I find this story entertaining. I didn't read to far into the story yet, but I will be sure to read it. Keep up the hard work 💪!!!!!
Not bad not bad, I say. Characters has their own general purposes and that's pretty nice, you as an author also know how to do it good. Hehe, I shall steal your wise words Overall I give you this. →_→ (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧ Take the stars kohai, take it!!!
Enjoyable read. I'm not a fan of the romance genre but this was a compelling story with interesting characters and a fulfilling plot line. Would read again.
Very well written, the author's unique style is delightful to read. I went on to read heartstrings directly after taking a look at runaway and both the beginnings have been artistically explained. Dio's crazy tendency shocked me a bit, yet it was original to read. Looking forward to this story now.
Reveal SpoilerI want to preface this by saying this novel is leagues better than the other novels on this website. Probably the best one I've read on the website, in my terrible opinion. I've waded through so much crap here I forgot some people understand how actual people would talk to each other, or at least believably talk to each other. It's built on such a great, grounded foundation that some of the problems I had with the book didn't bother me nearly as much as they would have with other novels. The absolute best parts of the story's when the grounded characters are talking to each other. Wonderful stuff. There are a couple word choice things that kind of mess with the flow of conversation, pretty minor as far as things go; but there are some character's I don't feel are so grounded like (spoiler) Athena's mom. She feels kind of caricature-y along with the whole secret underground auction thing. Like I find it extremely hard to believe that Eremes wouldn't be absolutely dead considering he tried to blackmail her, as does Eremes too I guess. I don't really know. Its probably just the nauture of the beast though, at least my beast. I believe that stories are always the strongest when you can draw upon your own experiences and apply them to your story, and I don't know you so I could be very wrong; but the underground auction doesn't feel quite right. The story functions best when it's grounded like with most of the interactions between Athena and Eremes. It really feels as if you know what you're doing there, so much so I'd wish you'd lean into it even more. I really do appreciate the scene setting, it's really good most of the time; but, and I'm sorry, but I feel like the most boring part of the novel was the arcade fight thing. It was mostly description, rather good description albiet, but description nonetheless. I've subscribed to the idea that characters are what make the meat of a good story, while the scenes are kind of like the seasonings. I could be wrong, but I feel as if the dialogue takes up about 60% of the word space. I would really lean into the dialogue and try to make it around 80%, maybe even 90% dialogue considering how great it is, if you could figure that out. There are some minor things with descriptions, POV, and the kind of weird punctuation thing I'm kind of glad you dumped (though that could just be my close mindedness speaking); but the fact that I'm even speaking about some high ****tin punctuation bullcrap really does speak to how good the writing is. shame it isn't more popular, since this actually made me want to write this review. I'm just a terrible author and a random ****ter on the internet though, not even close to representing your readership; so I'd take what I wrote with a massive amount of salt. Might even ignore it altogether. Thanks for writing this and keep up the great work.
Reveal SpoilerSo first things first, your stability of updates is absolutely insane dude. I can't imagine how many days you would have had without motivation to write but still pulled through. Secondly, your writing style is really good, and the grammar flows really well. I haven't read enough of the chapters (I quickly went through a couple) to know how well your story development is, but it seems to be going along pretty solid rn, keep up the work!.
I've only read a few chapters of the 1st Volume: The Runaway. I like how the writer used this time for the readers to get to know the characters. It would allow them to either relate to the characters and/or understand them. Both of them are quite the thinkers. Their internal monologues added to their depth. The flow of events are just right. If you decide to read this, please go past the first chapter, at least. Although, this chapter did feel a bit rushed at some points. (Maybe it was to add in showcasing panic and adrenaline while reading... but some details could be added for a bit of a punch so the readers could feel along with the characters.) I found myself in an immerse of quality writing later on. The descriptions were easy to read. Following along the sequence of events was also a no brainer. There are some things I felt off about. I think this is more of a personal taste so, as a reader, please take it with a grain of salt and see for yourself. There are times when I can't tell who spoke or who had a mental comment/reaction. The POVs keep switching and sometimes the dialogue for one character is mixed with the description of another in a paragraph. I find myself a bit lost in this. Another thing was a few lack of details on how they speak at times such as grumbling, groaning, snappily, mumbling, loudly, muttering... these show the intonation of their voice. More often than not, the saying goes "It's not what you said but how you said it." Athena is supposed to be snarky at some points but I only know that because Eremes said so. I read her dialogue first but didn't get the idea of how it sounded until Eremes gave me the info. Others, the mental dialogues get in the way of body language. Using their thoughts are great in adding personality but it might not be good to always use them in exchange for body language--particularly with some reactions. An example is Eremes being surprised by Athena's laugh in Chapter 2: I.I The First of Many. I know he's surprised because of his mental dialogue... but how does he look when surprised? Wide eyes? Calm face? He sounds frantic but does he look like it too? I'm not sure if I'm making sense at this point myself. I don't want to drag is on either. Overall, the concept is good. I see the potential--especially with it being multiple stories. I wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors, author! Ganbatte!
I only read up until chapter 20 yet I found it very entertaining. I love the interaction between the two leads, they are both witty. For me, the story is relatable for it depicts the reality of life. I felt the struggles of the female lead and also the male lead though he was not really vocal about it. I also like how the male lead reacted to his situations, he's funny yet cool. There are still lot of chapters for me to read but I guess the story centered to how society works. The leads are totally balanced and I'm excited of how will they understand each other despite of their own circumstances. For me, this story is perfectly written. Thumbs up for the Author.
very good stories . i liked the characters and the grammar was good although some words were ...(where the hell did you find them ?) thats what i though hehe i like what you did really ! now i will go back to reading !! ^_^
The stories themselves are immersive and extremely detailed. And I really enjoy how there are separate anthologies that all weave together into this one collective story. Unlike most stories on here, there is actually a lot of worldbuilding, not just in the original few chapters but also pretty consistently throughout. However, (I know you mentioned formatting is a big part of your writing style), but whenever I want to get immersed in the actual story, I just find all of these other things that I need to watch out for. I fully understand the pain of working around them, but after reading for a bit, the boxes and italics got to me ;-;
This is a very well-thought out story in a detailed world. The concept of various tales weaving into one large one is interesting. I look forward to seeing it happening, and I really like the shift in perspectives.
Amazing story, absolutely loved it. I connected with the characters from the first chapter and i just kept on reading till i realized what I was doing. Amazing story. Love the interactions and how what the character feel are expressed. Very little grammar/ spelling mistakes thus it is an extremely smooth read.
Great story so far. The writing quality is very good, the characters are well written, the storyline is well thought out. Though the formatting was clearly explained, it can be confusing to follow. Apart from that, great novel. Good job.👍
The dialogue and character interaction in this story are very well made. The author uses interesting dialogue punctuations that take a bit to get used to, but nothing that would be an instant turn off. I strongly enjoyed my time reading, feeling accustomed to the scene before me as if I was there. Overall, I highly recommend this author, he/she clearly knows what they're doing.
Great book, overall. I only read the first eleven chapters before deciding to leave my review because I fell in love with the sensei writing style, great writing style, I'll add it to my collection and read it after while studying your writing style maybe I can learn something out of it.
Love the concept of it being a collection of various story that was set in a city, fictional or not. Kind of reminds me of the novel Durarara!! and I like the idea of it. This is just my initial thoughts as for the first 10 chapters of the novel. The story is quite good. To be honest, I like it a lot. Love the scenario being played in this one and I am sure the succeeding chapters will exceed my expectations of it. I am looking forward to reading it and will definitely recommend this one to a friend.
I am in awe with your writing style. The first few chapters already hooked me because of its easy readability. The characters are also relatable so it isn't hard to connect with them. Love your book so far. Keep writing!
Wow, like so much about history in the first chapters! I don’t mind but I’m not a history geek so I didn’t knew a lot about it, and your way of describing things are amazing, excellent grammar, and I kinda like it, so I’ll keep checking up on it though!
I loved, loved the first chapter because it reminded me so much of the Byzantine Empire lol probably because I'm a history buff? The descriptions were well written and the background was very, very detailed and well thought out. The writing style is great and thus far, I have not observed any errors. Amazing work!
Wow! This really amazing, something about the novel is really captivating, and I really appreciate the psychological and philosophical aspects of it, keep it up!
I like it a lot . It’s a very cute story. The characters are just awesome. I like how they seem to just naturally go together. I loved the first chapter it draws you in
A Distinct Writing Style Paired with a Good Story to Tell. Each chapter is progressive and clear. If Inkstone wasn't so limited on writing tools, I'd say the author would definitely own the immersion aspect of readers. There is a firm grasp of writing which creates prose that touches the reader's affect. Well-structured and well-conveyed.
Hello! I found your book from the review swap but I came to read because the title drew me in. This book is omg amazing! It drew me in real quick and the beginning, you detailed the scene so well. I couldn’t stop reading. I hope you keep writing because you don’t find many authors like This!!! 😌✨
I've been reading Volume Two: Heartstrings because I thought the synopsis was very intriguing. It's great to see how well the relationship between teacher and students has been portrayed and you can really get a sense of how close Heather is with the class. It's really sweet to see them get along so nicely. The Author has a lovely writing style and I like the somewhat dark twist on the story!
This novel is very good. I am not regretting that I started to read it. Keep up with your good work writer. I really do like the writing quality.👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾
The story is nice and excellent I have nothing else to say for this except improving on descriptive abilities. The dialogue and the thoughts of the characters flows smoothly.. Nicely done Miss MFC... Nicely done..
It's Good One.. Absolutely read it.. So You get a overview of the City and the background from the start of the story so there's little to no chance of confusion. Then there are some words... I'm writing them.. they're going to be useful 😂. Ok.. there's somewhere some typos but not that traceable cause you're already lost in the story and wanting to figure out what will be next. So I'm going to read it till the end cause you know... I need answers... so please author keep writing up and releasing chapters as much as you can...
Down to chapter 10 and will definitely continue reading it! I must say...you really are an admirable writer. The flow of the story is really good and the choice of words and how you put it is incredible. I mean you sure have a wide vocabulary. The words are colorful and it truly gives spice in your work. Really impressive!
I enjoyed this book so much! It just makes you read after another chapter. The author has such a wonderful choice of words, It just makes you read it more because of its awesomeness, The grammar is great that it makes you understand the story more. I love the prose of it because it conveys the Author's Idea, He/She painted the whereabouts of the story perfectly. I Loved and Enjoyed the story so much! Btw, sorry for the late review author, I read more chapters because It really is Fantastic! I would recommend this story so much!
First off, I would like to thank you for having close to zero grammatical and spelling errors. Dialogue and setting is specific and concise, which makes it even better.. This would be my first romance novel so it was nice that I started with this to get into the genre. I like how compelling the characters are, and the way that the story develops. It's not too slow or too fast- just right. In all, this novel has a lot of potential and I hope you continue to add more compelling plot points to the story.
A good story!! I don't know what to say. There's nothing wrong with the grammar. Mostly because English is not my main language. At first, when I started reading this, I don't really have big impression. Mostly, because i never read this type of novel. But, after giving it some time to reading, I find this story entertaining. I didn't read to far into the story yet, but I will be sure to read it. Keep up the hard work 💪!!!!!
Not bad not bad, I say. Characters has their own general purposes and that's pretty nice, you as an author also know how to do it good. Hehe, I shall steal your wise words Overall I give you this. →_→ (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧ Take the stars kohai, take it!!!
Enjoyable read. I'm not a fan of the romance genre but this was a compelling story with interesting characters and a fulfilling plot line. Would read again.
Very well written, the author's unique style is delightful to read. I went on to read heartstrings directly after taking a look at runaway and both the beginnings have been artistically explained. Dio's crazy tendency shocked me a bit, yet it was original to read. Looking forward to this story now.
Reveal SpoilerI want to preface this by saying this novel is leagues better than the other novels on this website. Probably the best one I've read on the website, in my terrible opinion. I've waded through so much crap here I forgot some people understand how actual people would talk to each other, or at least believably talk to each other. It's built on such a great, grounded foundation that some of the problems I had with the book didn't bother me nearly as much as they would have with other novels. The absolute best parts of the story's when the grounded characters are talking to each other. Wonderful stuff. There are a couple word choice things that kind of mess with the flow of conversation, pretty minor as far as things go; but there are some character's I don't feel are so grounded like (spoiler) Athena's mom. She feels kind of caricature-y along with the whole secret underground auction thing. Like I find it extremely hard to believe that Eremes wouldn't be absolutely dead considering he tried to blackmail her, as does Eremes too I guess. I don't really know. Its probably just the nauture of the beast though, at least my beast. I believe that stories are always the strongest when you can draw upon your own experiences and apply them to your story, and I don't know you so I could be very wrong; but the underground auction doesn't feel quite right. The story functions best when it's grounded like with most of the interactions between Athena and Eremes. It really feels as if you know what you're doing there, so much so I'd wish you'd lean into it even more. I really do appreciate the scene setting, it's really good most of the time; but, and I'm sorry, but I feel like the most boring part of the novel was the arcade fight thing. It was mostly description, rather good description albiet, but description nonetheless. I've subscribed to the idea that characters are what make the meat of a good story, while the scenes are kind of like the seasonings. I could be wrong, but I feel as if the dialogue takes up about 60% of the word space. I would really lean into the dialogue and try to make it around 80%, maybe even 90% dialogue considering how great it is, if you could figure that out. There are some minor things with descriptions, POV, and the kind of weird punctuation thing I'm kind of glad you dumped (though that could just be my close mindedness speaking); but the fact that I'm even speaking about some high ****tin punctuation bullcrap really does speak to how good the writing is. shame it isn't more popular, since this actually made me want to write this review. I'm just a terrible author and a random ****ter on the internet though, not even close to representing your readership; so I'd take what I wrote with a massive amount of salt. Might even ignore it altogether. Thanks for writing this and keep up the great work.
Reveal SpoilerSo first things first, your stability of updates is absolutely insane dude. I can't imagine how many days you would have had without motivation to write but still pulled through. Secondly, your writing style is really good, and the grammar flows really well. I haven't read enough of the chapters (I quickly went through a couple) to know how well your story development is, but it seems to be going along pretty solid rn, keep up the work!.
I've only read a few chapters of the 1st Volume: The Runaway. I like how the writer used this time for the readers to get to know the characters. It would allow them to either relate to the characters and/or understand them. Both of them are quite the thinkers. Their internal monologues added to their depth. The flow of events are just right. If you decide to read this, please go past the first chapter, at least. Although, this chapter did feel a bit rushed at some points. (Maybe it was to add in showcasing panic and adrenaline while reading... but some details could be added for a bit of a punch so the readers could feel along with the characters.) I found myself in an immerse of quality writing later on. The descriptions were easy to read. Following along the sequence of events was also a no brainer. There are some things I felt off about. I think this is more of a personal taste so, as a reader, please take it with a grain of salt and see for yourself. There are times when I can't tell who spoke or who had a mental comment/reaction. The POVs keep switching and sometimes the dialogue for one character is mixed with the description of another in a paragraph. I find myself a bit lost in this. Another thing was a few lack of details on how they speak at times such as grumbling, groaning, snappily, mumbling, loudly, muttering... these show the intonation of their voice. More often than not, the saying goes "It's not what you said but how you said it." Athena is supposed to be snarky at some points but I only know that because Eremes said so. I read her dialogue first but didn't get the idea of how it sounded until Eremes gave me the info. Others, the mental dialogues get in the way of body language. Using their thoughts are great in adding personality but it might not be good to always use them in exchange for body language--particularly with some reactions. An example is Eremes being surprised by Athena's laugh in Chapter 2: I.I The First of Many. I know he's surprised because of his mental dialogue... but how does he look when surprised? Wide eyes? Calm face? He sounds frantic but does he look like it too? I'm not sure if I'm making sense at this point myself. I don't want to drag is on either. Overall, the concept is good. I see the potential--especially with it being multiple stories. I wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors, author! Ganbatte!
I only read up until chapter 20 yet I found it very entertaining. I love the interaction between the two leads, they are both witty. For me, the story is relatable for it depicts the reality of life. I felt the struggles of the female lead and also the male lead though he was not really vocal about it. I also like how the male lead reacted to his situations, he's funny yet cool. There are still lot of chapters for me to read but I guess the story centered to how society works. The leads are totally balanced and I'm excited of how will they understand each other despite of their own circumstances. For me, this story is perfectly written. Thumbs up for the Author.
very good stories . i liked the characters and the grammar was good although some words were ...(where the hell did you find them ?) thats what i though hehe i like what you did really ! now i will go back to reading !! ^_^
The stories themselves are immersive and extremely detailed. And I really enjoy how there are separate anthologies that all weave together into this one collective story. Unlike most stories on here, there is actually a lot of worldbuilding, not just in the original few chapters but also pretty consistently throughout. However, (I know you mentioned formatting is a big part of your writing style), but whenever I want to get immersed in the actual story, I just find all of these other things that I need to watch out for. I fully understand the pain of working around them, but after reading for a bit, the boxes and italics got to me ;-;
This is a very well-thought out story in a detailed world. The concept of various tales weaving into one large one is interesting. I look forward to seeing it happening, and I really like the shift in perspectives.
Amazing story, absolutely loved it. I connected with the characters from the first chapter and i just kept on reading till i realized what I was doing. Amazing story. Love the interactions and how what the character feel are expressed. Very little grammar/ spelling mistakes thus it is an extremely smooth read.
Great story so far. The writing quality is very good, the characters are well written, the storyline is well thought out. Though the formatting was clearly explained, it can be confusing to follow. Apart from that, great novel. Good job.👍
The dialogue and character interaction in this story are very well made. The author uses interesting dialogue punctuations that take a bit to get used to, but nothing that would be an instant turn off. I strongly enjoyed my time reading, feeling accustomed to the scene before me as if I was there. Overall, I highly recommend this author, he/she clearly knows what they're doing.
Great book, overall. I only read the first eleven chapters before deciding to leave my review because I fell in love with the sensei writing style, great writing style, I'll add it to my collection and read it after while studying your writing style maybe I can learn something out of it.
Love the concept of it being a collection of various story that was set in a city, fictional or not. Kind of reminds me of the novel Durarara!! and I like the idea of it. This is just my initial thoughts as for the first 10 chapters of the novel. The story is quite good. To be honest, I like it a lot. Love the scenario being played in this one and I am sure the succeeding chapters will exceed my expectations of it. I am looking forward to reading it and will definitely recommend this one to a friend.
I am in awe with your writing style. The first few chapters already hooked me because of its easy readability. The characters are also relatable so it isn't hard to connect with them. Love your book so far. Keep writing!