yizreel_jez

yizreel_jez

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17 year-old aspiring author!

2019-01-26 Joined Philippines
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yizreel_jez
3 years ago
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Nice, Nice!! I love the structure of how it was written, it was so poetic and lovely, it is as if I can feel the words that I am reading, It was vividly awesome that I could imagine and feel what the character is saying, it is like I am beside the M.C. listening to his wonderful story. Kudos to the Author😁😁 A very well written Novel and I look forward to the next chapters🙌

yizreel_jez
yizreel_jez
4 years ago
Posted

Good job author for a job well done😁. First off, the title is quite catchy and fascinating. Yes it is a captivating title which is a good start. The writing quality is quite profound and descriptive in somewhat ways, I love how you descriptively wrote this. The grammar is little to no error, and yes, to all who'll ever read this too, its quite understandable as well as enjoyable. The story, the plot is good, I am into this kind of genres, and author you did a good job expressing your love for writing with this book. The characters are also well-designed, which is great, and it makes the story have more life. Well lastly the synop**is, Its good, but to further captivate us readers, it must be more interesting. I look forward to further chapters author, a job well done💓😁

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yizreel_jez
4 years ago
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haha i cant believe i wrote this

Fritz then responded as he was soaping his wet and sexy fit body "Ahh, okay hehe"

Unfairly Fair

Unfairly Fair

Fantasy · yizreel_jez

  • Unfairly Fair original

    Unfairly Fair

    Fantasy MAGIC SUPERPOWERS OVERPOWERED CULTIVATION CAMPUS

    4.63

    What if people have abilities? The people where a world called "Elmentus" were all born with individual abilities. Whether strong or weak abilities they have, it must be used to help each other. Azelus, Ignis Caeli Aquila Terrance Quint, age 16, wondered why people start to abuse their power for no good, they use it for crimes, use it for greediness, and use it to obtain more power by stealing each other's ability. Quint wants to restore the world from its destruction, with his faith to the highest deity, and with his good deeds, he pondered..., "What if the world continues to be in its chaos? "Will there be a hero to save it? "Will there be unselfish people who want to restore it like me?" "Will I be able to save it just on my own? ,"

    15 Chs 19 Collections

  • Converted original

    Converted

    Realistic ROMANCE ADVENTURE CULTIVATION

    A man named Luke Luxer, 19, deeply got depressed because of himself, lack of confidence, and bad appearance....but upon seeing the vision in his dream. His mindset changed and his life slowly changed from grayscale to Colorful.. Come, let us read the story of a boy who got converted and how his life was changed by God.

    1 Chs 1 Collections

  • Potentially Potent original

    Potentially Potent

    Sci-fi WEAKTOSTRONG CULTIVATION TRANSMIGRATION LEVELUP EVOLUTION

    In a world where hierarchy and power only matters. I feel like I'm just a pointless dot, weak, and always hearing people tell me "LAME", I admit it! I'm frail and impotent but I will not quit until I prove I will become potent someday to all those people who told me I'll never become stronger. I am Leo..err..Geo, please join me on my journey.....

    3 Chs 11 Collections