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What would you do if you had a book that told you how to get the love of your life?
Teenage emotions, what can you really do. it's a feeling that just happens.Henry is a high schooler that really needs a book like that cause he is hopeless in love.
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Finally am on holiday can finally get this book completed, my first attempt in writing its based on my life tho, the ending would be unpredictable but I'll finish this story
Reveal Spoiler Getting better chapters please I need support 😛😛 Feel free to comment with you thoughts so I can use it. No bad vibes please🙏 am still learning, and I need motivation 😀 thanks and I love you all
School is really stressful takes me time to calm down and write a chapter, please bear with me guys. New chapters are coming prepare for more drama, comedy and a little bit of sci fi
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Not sure why kakashi hatake likes it so much and did master Jeriah really write this if he did write it why doesn’t it say so also naruto could use this book and saskue also sai and probably choji Where all my naruto fans at
Teenage awkwardness, just the way I like it. Grammar has minimal errors, nothing another once over can't fix. Prose is good, and dialogue flows naturally. Might want to flesh out some of the single line dialogue IMO, just to give it a bit more spice. Keep on writing, I want more of this. 👍
Well I'm leaving a review on my own book ( ꈍᴗꈍ) About 6 chapters left, I've written 3 I'll upload them soon. Thanks for sticking with me till the end ❤️
I'm very sorry that I took so long to update this book, it's my first time writing so be nice🙃. I'll try my best to finish the book before the new year thanks for the support guys.
Volume 1 : #1
- 1 The Beginning 6 years ago
- 2 What is happening to me? 6 years ago
- 3 This is such a drag! 6 years ago
- 4 Chapter 1: Meeting the list 6 years ago
- 5 Shit!! I forgot 6 years ago
- 6 Just a normal day 6 years ago
- 7 Left him stunned 6 years ago
- 8 What we are 5 years ago
- 9 Best day ever? 5 years ago
- 10 He sounds nice 5 years ago
- 11 Chapter 3: Finding out what she likes 4 years ago
- 12 Lets just have fun 4 years ago
- 13 Make me proud kiddo!! 4 years ago
- 14 Kawaii!! 4 years ago
It's a really neat and cute story, I I like how you arrange your sentences. It is easy to read in my opinion. I feels that you can try to write more, I'm sure you will be a good writer.