The Newest Dungeon Master Has An Anime System(Dropped)

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memberberry

If you have three to four neurons, do not read this, save your brain. 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩

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Nier_Xue

Really good novel, not... I didn 't even reach 2nd chapter yet.. i didn't bother to... This is nota dating sim game site or visual novel, nor this is eroge site.. this fuqing webnovel.. and honestly speaking.. for the first time in my life i saw someone writing a novel in 2nd person prospective.. and the mc is You.. i mean me.. wtf... If it was game with multiple choice then sure.. i would have loved playing it... But reading it as a novel feels weird.. i cringed so hard when i skipped through some chapter.. i am not use to this ****.. and i dont need too.. other can. Enjoy this if they can, but its not my cup of tea.. but if the author change it into first person or 3rd person prospective i will be back..

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BlackDragon18

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BowmanW

The writing is criminally lazy, skills and spells from various anime's are thrown around without a care in the world and no explanation is given. It's an anime system, I understand, but when you randomly give out 7 skills that I am not going to remember from Naruto, it becomes a bit jarring. Instead of "You learnt [Blargh Blargh]" it should be "You learnt [Blargh Blargh], a powerful skill that Naruto had used in this scene and that scene, you feel strange wielding the same skill you had seen on television once, the anime does not do the effects justice" or something along those lines. Actually describe the skill and spell instead of just throwing a name at us, does the author expect me to have a wikipedia open by my side all the time? The author also expects you to have read various other animes and novels, such as the novel 'Lazy Dungeon Master', he takes ideas from LDS and literally says "he crafted the golem to allow for more spells, think what the mc did in lds." It's lazy, indeed. The author decided to write it in a way where the reader is 'you' and 'your name', which is jarring and is not done well at all. Character development is non-existent and the writing quality really isn't even worth 2 stars. In conclusion, it's a low-tier time killer.

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The_Grindelwald

I can't even read this, the "mc" don't have a name since the author want to make the reader feel like he is the mc so the mc is "you", it's just so weird and inadapted and if you want to the reader feel like he is the mc then you can't use "your thoughts" and tell what are the thoughts of the mc since it's not our thoughts but your's mc's ones, well in my opinion it doesn't works at all, if you want to make a feeling of immersion just use first perspective, my rating don't judge the story since the "you" bother me too much for continue the story. Sorry for my broken english^^.

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SHIROSAIKI

This novel deserves 5 star and a higher ratings!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddddddddd

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Chaotic_Winter

Definitely worth reading!!!! Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good

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Chaotic_Winter

this one deserves 5star rating, just for fulfilling all mens dream and also because it's an amazing read If the author abandon this, then I'll curse him from the Bottom of my hentai heart!!!!!!!!!!!

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TrueImmortalDevil

only good thing about the story so far is stability of updates ... the rest is basically scrub tier ... sorry author ... also i know i wouldnt be able to do better since i tried to write but only got stuck after 3 rows so i deleted everthing >.>

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Daoofspace

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BlackDragon18

Really good novel 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒🆒

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AldiXanana

its an interesting novel featured both anime and dungeon i hope the author will release more chapter in the future at leaset 5chap/day and improve his writing style (ゝω・)(ゝω・)(ゝω・)(≧∇≦)b(≧∇≦)b(*⌒▽⌒*)(*⌒▽⌒*)

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crimson_killer

Uhhh it’s pretty good I don’t know why ya left buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut uhh come back soooooooo yeah that’s kinda it

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JRT02

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Satrio_Hidayat

Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter...................................................................................'.'...............................Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter.................

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ba_sing_se

my head fucking hurt after reading a few words into the story, at first l read the glossary and thought maybe it was good but then when the system summoned the user it fucking my brain. the author named his mc 'you' what kind of shi **** is that, the first thing l read when the mc come was the mc thinking. the author writes it like this 'you thought' anshansjak. just reading hurt my fucking brain. 🐖💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩

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Gilgamesh113

The author hasn’t updated in almost half year, otherwise the raising would have been higher. Needs an update! This had the makings of being one of the better fanfics.