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I mostly write this just to help people understand some of the premise and not be disappointed if they are looking for something else. Now, this is not a wish fulfillment story about travelling across various anime worlds and fighting and adventuring. This is a story about the life of a 14 year old who has spent his entire life in captivity, being exploited by others . Literally. He was found to have panacea like blood as a newborn and was kept in a research facility since he was like a month old. He has not been loved or cared for at all and is just used as a blood producer. His common sense comes only from animes and mangas. Now, you have to understand is that what he does and how he acts is entirely different from normal considering he is a broken, ignorant child. He does not process emotion as casually as we do and is basically just a giant bleeding heart because of his past. Because of this he will not act like shounen protagonists or wuxia MCs at all. They are hot blooded idiots who like fighting, want women and are usually extremely ambitious. Vahn is none of those. He is someone who has been given a life and freedom and just wants to experience it. To him, fighting is a nuisance and despite his claims of being a battle junkie, does not like having fights to the death. He does want to explore, but he has no urgent desire to make it his immediate goal. Understand that this is a rather realistic story of Vahn's growth despite the fantasy tag. He mostly just wants to live in peace and love because of the fact he never had it for the first 14 years of his life. He appreciates it. Some of you like to think of him as a generic japanese protagonist but thing is he grew up watching them as well as suffering great injustice so he has an actual reason to be so merciful. If you expect an MC that goes around all excited and battle hungry or has some vague reason to become the strongest, this is not it. Also, I'll just adress another issue that is going to come up as you progress. He has a huge harem. As in over a dozen girls after the first 100 chapters or so. And the reason for this is because he is a capable male that is highly empathetic and thus becomes attractive to most women who live in a rather shitty world. Also, since he himself has no resistance to others, he accepts basically everyone. He craves love and if someone gives it he'll take her. So yeah, it can become rather unbearable to watch him forsake higher power just to mess around with the harem members and basically start a slice of life but if he doesn't do this, it would be highly unrealistic. This is not a one dimensional novel about fighting progressively stronger enemies and becoming the greatest of them all for no particular reason and neither is it for exploring universes and collecting women. It's about a shattered person trying to enjoy life and fulfill his desires. He wants to explore but won't just leave his family behind for it. He wants to become strong but won't neglect his reason for becoming strong for it. I hope you found this useful.
honestly, I hate this MC as far as I read it (chapter 215) I only keep reading because I have nothing to read and worse than that the protagonist is on this path of karma, what kind of shitty freedom is this that you can't even kill your enemies? significant freedom to do what you want, it also counts to kill who you want
The story and characters are all over the place, but in a good way. I genuinely enjoy this novel a lot and it's one of the only ones I really look forward to new chapters.
One of the first novels I came across here and it is infredibleeee. ILOVEITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
love this novel. allnthe characters so far are fun and unique and a decent amount of spicy chapters so far.
Leí 500 o 600 y poco de capítulos cuando comenzaste autor y me gustaron, aún no habías salido del mundo. De danmachi, pare un tiempo y lo retome en el mundo de Nasuverse por aburrimiento, pero cuando observó que un protagonista hace gimnasia mental para justificar su depravasión y negar hipócritamente la realidad de otros a pesar de ser personas que se parecen mucho en el sufrimiento que han tenido solo porque tiene toda la suerteaa del universo a su favor como. Lo hizo en el mundo de Nasu, ahí es donde me desagrada y ya los odio Puedo decir que como escritor eres muy bueno en tu estilo y según los puntos de clasificación te daría no menos de 4 estrellas Por el gusto y luego disgusto que me provocó tu obra te daría 3 estrellas Por tu protagonista le daría 2 estrellas al ser la representación self insert de un puberto hormonado sin conciencia más allá de sus deseos y necesidades, vamos que representa a un chico que solo quiere coger, que se transforma en una especie de genio de Aladin pero sin ataduras Hay reseñas de NTR con Freya, que están mal, estoy invalidando esas opiniones, porque Vahn no tenía a Freya en el Harem y tampoco hay sentimientos relacionados en ese punto en la obra Antes podía leer estas obras sin molestarme y me gustaban, realmente no era capaz de ver el egoísmo extremo de las acciones y psique de los protagonistas, pero algo que novi pasar me reconfiguró la psique, y ahora cualquier acción incivilizada que sienta desproporcionada y por lo tanto hipócrita me produce rechazo Y todos sabemos lo difícil que es escribir a una persona que no sea innecesariamente agresiva, menos un protagonista que caen muy cercas del bullyng promedio
Started to read the story, and so far it's pretty good but I'd love to know if this is purely a danmachi fix or has the mc already moved to another world? (I saw one piece mentioned in the first chapters and I'd absolutely love to see Vahn go there)
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Reseña en español esta no es una novela para todos, puedo decir que la historia, la acción, los personajes están muy bien hechos, sin embargo pasan múltiples cambios en el enfoque de la novela, el primero y el que más saca a todos es apartir del cap 100+ donde la historia pasa de ser de acción, aventura y romance a una de romance, harem, aventura y acción. si te adaptas a la historia puedo decir que es muy disfrutable, incluso utilizando la tradición automática tanto de Google como de la aplicación de webtoon. francamente yo creo que merece el intento, yo tuve que leer esta novela intermitente por los cambios algo bruscos que pasan de vez en cuando pero es una excelente novela.
Seré sincero es una gran historia me encanta como el personaje se desarrolla y actúa, llega hasta el cap 118, pero sinceramente se a vuelto insoportable continuar, y sentido que me dará dolor de cabeza mas de una ves leyendo y la razón principal, única que le encuentro es algo que menciona el autor que lo recalca y es el HAREM, que será y es enorme, ¿ahora es el tamaño del harem?, para nada! no me interesa si tiene veinte o cien mujeres, !el problema es su actitud!. que fue muy destrozado que paso su vida anterior o quiera vivirla con amor o consentir a todo el mundo etc, se vuelve super fastidioso e irritante exactamente eso "QUIERE COMPLACER A TODOS" con solo la aparición de Lili comienza a dar señalas de a donde el prota va con su actitud con las mujeres, que no puede decir que no, que si se ponen triste por que les gusta el prota el para consolarlas, si vamos juntarnos, literalmente su jodido primer beso fue robado y posterior a eso lo obligaron a besar. una amazona que en lo personal no me encanta para nada ella, pero el prota se enoja o molesta, no para nada, la amazona solo se pone triste y dice ¿me odias? y el prota no para nada esto y lo otro por que cada chica que se pone triste para que no se sienta mal dice o acepta parcialmente la situación, no digo que la historia este mal, me encanta la aventura que conozca gente, chicas etc, pero esta creciendo exponencialmente cada jodida mujer, que le pone ojos de cachorro y el simplemente acepta, o de repente me gustas el prota no lo sabia así que acepta tus sentimientos, "que te jodan" protagonista, entonces ese es mi problema, hubieron muchos momentos donde me hubiera gustado que el prota evaluara mejor sus sentimientos antes de hacer promesas, que te quiero acá, te quiero por acá, eso estaría mucho mejor, por que uno entiende el es como un papel en blanco y no entiende muy bien las integraciones. hombre y mujer, que Aiz le pidiera hasta sexo así sin mas, no estuvo mal realmente, se sintió natural por la exploración del genero ya que ambos son casi iguales en ese sentido, mas tranquilo uno lo asimila mas, pero Lili super fastidiosa y el mc en algún momento le dice que más adelante, pero ya está en la lista para que me entiendan. si la hubiera dejado como una hermana menor, en serio queda perfecto, por que queda una historia de superación que me a encantado como Lili a estado creciendo, pero su pegajosidad con el prota es super fastidiosa, entiendo que asi esta hecha por el creador original , pero para que no este triste el prota no la sienta hablar, no la rechaza, no le dice que no es el tipo de relación que quisiera tener con ella, ella llora y pasara tiempo en que tenga que superarlo, pero aún así quererse mucho , NO simplemente de repente observa que tiene sus curvas etc, mas adelante podemos intentarlo, "no me jodas", las relaciones mas buenas para mi en su harem son hefesto que a sido un romance de los mas bello, me a gustado como los dos se complementa, Ais en lo que salió, me pareció super lindo esa exploración juntos, ojo no han tenido sexo todavía, pero hay aviones, la cuestión es que super natural y genial y esta tipa de gato aventurar ladrón que lo recibe al principio, le dio el espacio al prota para que explorara sus sentimientos, en ves de aprovecharse de el cuando era ingenuo, ya van tres chicas en el harem y todas muy buenas, el resto super fastidiosas, lloran por todo, el acepta para que no estén tristes, no dice que no, no se toma las cosas con calma, NADA SOLO ACEPTA, entonces bueno lo dejo hasta aquí, considera que los que puedan seguir leyendo, lo disfrutaran no este mal, me encanta verlo pelear, si soy amante de las peleas, de las aventuras. por que considera que el autor hasta ahora, entretiene y hace que uno quiera seguir leyendo, el creador de este fan fic, recalca que quiere que su prota, tenga razones para crecer, se dedique parte al amor etc, no esta mal, pero perdóname si integras personajes femeninos en el harem, que de por si son fastidiosas, obligan de cierta manera al prota aceptar por que no quiere nadie se ponga triste, bueno a mi me fastidia ye visto que hay comentario donde otros se fastidian, claro no se puede consolar a todo el mundo, pero sinceramente Creo que el harem es lo que mas o menos no te favoreció por que te digo la historia esta buena, pero empezaste a metro uno tras de otro. algunos gusto, otros realmente son la razón por que uno no quieres seguir leyendo y la actitud del prota solo lo empeora, creo que te hubieras tomado las cosas con mas calma, digamos que la amazona te la acepta por que me encanto la introducción de Ais en esto, pero ya, una promesa de hijo, eso pa que, solo para que la tipa no este triste, cuando nunca se le había ocurrido ser padre, entonces bueno el que le gusto, adelante, no es mala historia pero tanto idiota del prota tampoco, miren la ultima parte donde lo dejo, la tipa de las plantas que no quiere pelear por traumaz, la salva el prota, le gusta el prota, le dice me siento inferior etc, el prota para que no este triste la besa, ósea que carajo, nunca la había visto románticamente, pero cuando aprendió a besar, ahora esa es su solución, nada perdóname pero que cagada, estar aceptando a todo el mundo aquí y allá, pero no es mi fan fic pero ósea ni para una persona que esta aprendiendo como el prota, mas parece que los lectores se fastidien es todo.
Amigo, dime. En serio escribiste un ntr de freya y otra. Solo pregunto noe.gusta esos fetiches raros incluso vahn a sufrido o lo que sea. Una buena historia debe tener un buen protagonista sea m/f, dejando eso de lado. Responde o dejame el cap. !!! El peor golpe no es al principio sino cuando leíste mucho y te decepcionas!!
The grammar and stability of updates are great but a major issue with the book is how 1 dimensional the characters feel, with many being constantly pitying the protag. While reasonable given his situation I didn't come to read some teen kid coping with everyone around him constantly thinking about how they bad for him
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Ich persönlich muss sagen nach den ersten 150 Kapiteln dass sein charakterbild sehr chaotisch vorkommt das in kürzester Zeit in allen möglichen extrem auswachsen. Einerseits hat er in seiner Kindheit in einem sehr missbräuchlichen Verhältnis gelebt und hat daher extreme Bindung probleme doch sobald er jemanden besser kennengelernt hat ( viele Frauen ) schlägt dieses ins andere Extrem um und er bindet sich stark an diese Person bis zu sexueller Beziehung. Zumal ich auch das Verhalten deren Person die eine Aufsicht oder Lehr-Position für ihn übernommen haben dumm finde da sie festgestellt haben dass er extrem wenig gesunden menschenverstand und allgemeinwissen hat wäre es doch logisch diese Defizite Stück für Stück aufzuklären und ihn beizubringen. Selbst wenn der Autor die charakterentwicklung nicht wirklich schreiben möchte kann er diese in zeitsprüngen von paar Tagen oder Monaten relativ leicht abhandeln. Ich persönlich muss sagen dass der Charakter viel zu viele Widersprüche in sich hat umpassend in den setting von Welten reisen und Shonen Geschichte passt.
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Firstly only the first 100 or so chapters is about fighting in dunguon after that dont expect much action for a long time. my opinion of the story: Mc lacking common sense is understandable what makes no sense is that despite reading a lot of anime or mange in his first life, he still doesnt get that too uch affection is not always good. He basically doesnt have a line or an ability to say no to girls he has a good opinion of unless they are like a child. At first he takes other peoples advise seriously and try to use it in daily life, after the story shifted from action to romance at 100+ chapters, its like advise goes in one ear and out the other, he acknowledges the advice and trys to do it at first but stops and forgets about it after a while. Also the hestia in the story is a bit worse than loki in my opinion, she acts as clingy and spoiled to the mc as compared to the original hestia to bell. The issue here is that their circumstance is different, bell is a very kind boy who is a bit native while mc is a boy who cant say no to her due to his views and needs someone to ensure he doesnt push himself too much. This job was tina's before that incident and since then it was hestia job but she only does it when its with other women and not with herself, basically being very jealous and selfish despite having no right to. Thats my opinion of the story, take it with a gain of salt as i could not take it any longer and quit around chapter 250 while the story has 2000+ chapters.
A very nice to read novel. I'll like if a few new fan-fic of this writer were to come by.
This was one of the first fanfics I listened to in the past. Hnestly I feel like a lot of people take some things from this book and cursed gamer. Both have harems but there not horrible the way things play out. Also the stuff actually has plot that doesn’t seem like it was copied and pasted. It actually feels like this person tried to make there own story. Instead of taking 10 stories and mashing them together.👌
I can't tell you how many times I've reread this series. Overall just fantastic story
goods bro its very good i like the story from beginning to the end i hope this novel will be popular
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You can see how many chapter that i already read, so ill give some head up. MC is what you called brat with background, so you can't say MC too naive because he is. The Development of MC character is too much long for i like but im still try to read it, already 200 but still in Danmachi, its WOW for me.
It's an interesting story, did not realise it was going to be a harem but could handle that, it's very slow paced, especially after the first 100 chapters, I don't mind slice of life but this was a bit too slow for me the characters are well written through.
The start of the story is quite interesting. This author has a great imagination and presents the story in a stable way. I just hope the quality remains good and this is not dropped.
Well, this is a ridicuously well-written story. The chapters where he just played with his children in Danmachi were my favourite by far.
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Ok. I am bored as heck, and so, I decided to make a proper review of this without being biased. Story - 4.6/5 Characters - 4.8/5 World Building - 4.4/5 Romance - 4.6/5 (smut) Writing - 4.9/5 _________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ok, so here is a little summary of the book so far: MC is born with an unknown mutation that makes his body pretty interesting for scientists. Long story short, he becomes a lab rat for years, dies, meets a "system", and goes into the world of Danmachi. Now for the story:- One word - Mysterious. It's basically about going from one world to another. Why? In order to get stronger. Why? To go to another world. Why? To save a certain someone. Now the mysterious part. It's the MC's mother as well as the MC himself. What is he and what is she? Why is his body made up of certain energy and why is he able to travel from one world to another. Simply put, the ability wasn't just handed to him by some god, or it happened randomly. There is something set in motion. You could say, gears of fate turning. The plot itself does feel a bit TOO slow at times, but it manages to pick up later on. Characters:- A really good portrayal of the characters. This is a fanfiction at its core, yet it doesn't follow the plot AT ALL. The MC is in the world of Danmachi years before the plot of canon begins. What does this have to with characters? Well, have you wondered what the characters would be like if the dumbo-harem-aura didn't affect their personality? Well, this is it. MC does get to have a relationship with the girls, but that doesn't affect their personality. Each girl acts in their own unique way and no stuff like "everyone did (insert comedic/dramatic reaction)." The characters are properly fleshed out, and if you pay attention to the core of their personality, there is a portrayal of the weakness of all sentient beings. World-Building:- I don't need to say much about this one. It's a fanfic, basically borrowed worlds. The author describes it well and tries to show a clear image of what it's like. In the end, though, it mostly depends on whether you've seen the original anime/ played the original VN. Romance:- This one's a tough one to describe. How do I put it, "MC loves to love, and his partners love being loved." Basically that. MC is mentally unstable due to what he's gone through in his past life. This makes it very hard for him to differentiate between a lot of stuff. (eg. love & like). This makes the relationships seem almost unnatural, but you mustn't forget that the world isn't Earth. The girls in the anime are totally different from the monstrosities here. It isn't the MC that is mentally unstable. Most of the girls he's with have been through SOMETHING. They all have a past, a wish, and a dream. Also, lots of smut. Writing:- Very good. Mistakes are kept to a minimum and the grammar is fantastic. No headaches while reading. Chapters are also pretty long.
Reveal Spoiler I mostly write this just to help people understand some of the premise and not be disappointed if they are looking for something else. Now, this is not a wish fulfillment story about travelling across various anime worlds and fighting and adventuring. This is a story about the life of a 14 year old who has spent his entire life in captivity, being exploited by others . Literally. He was found to have panacea like blood as a newborn and was kept in a research facility since he was like a month old. He has not been loved or cared for at all and is just used as a blood producer. His common sense comes only from animes and mangas. Now, you have to understand is that what he does and how he acts is entirely different from normal considering he is a broken, ignorant child. He does not process emotion as casually as we do and is basically just a giant bleeding heart because of his past. Because of this he will not act like shounen protagonists or wuxia MCs at all. They are hot blooded idiots who like fighting, want women and are usually extremely ambitious. Vahn is none of those. He is someone who has been given a life and freedom and just wants to experience it. To him, fighting is a nuisance and despite his claims of being a battle junkie, does not like having fights to the death. He does want to explore, but he has no urgent desire to make it his immediate goal. Understand that this is a rather realistic story of Vahn's growth despite the fantasy tag. He mostly just wants to live in peace and love because of the fact he never had it for the first 14 years of his life. He appreciates it. Some of you like to think of him as a generic japanese protagonist but thing is he grew up watching them as well as suffering great injustice so he has an actual reason to be so merciful. If you expect an MC that goes around all excited and battle hungry or has some vague reason to become the strongest, this is not it. Also, I'll just adress another issue that is going to come up as you progress. He has a huge harem. As in over a dozen girls after the first 100 chapters or so. And the reason for this is because he is a capable male that is highly empathetic and thus becomes attractive to most women who live in a rather shitty world. Also, since he himself has no resistance to others, he accepts basically everyone. He craves love and if someone gives it he'll take her. So yeah, it can become rather unbearable to watch him forsake higher power just to mess around with the harem members and basically start a slice of life but if he doesn't do this, it would be highly unrealistic. This is not a one dimensional novel about fighting progressively stronger enemies and becoming the greatest of them all for no particular reason and neither is it for exploring universes and collecting women. It's about a shattered person trying to enjoy life and fulfill his desires. He wants to explore but won't just leave his family behind for it. He wants to become strong but won't neglect his reason for becoming strong for it. I hope you found this useful.
honestly, I hate this MC as far as I read it (chapter 215) I only keep reading because I have nothing to read and worse than that the protagonist is on this path of karma, what kind of shitty freedom is this that you can't even kill your enemies? significant freedom to do what you want, it also counts to kill who you want
The story and characters are all over the place, but in a good way. I genuinely enjoy this novel a lot and it's one of the only ones I really look forward to new chapters.
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love this novel. allnthe characters so far are fun and unique and a decent amount of spicy chapters so far.
Leí 500 o 600 y poco de capítulos cuando comenzaste autor y me gustaron, aún no habías salido del mundo. De danmachi, pare un tiempo y lo retome en el mundo de Nasuverse por aburrimiento, pero cuando observó que un protagonista hace gimnasia mental para justificar su depravasión y negar hipócritamente la realidad de otros a pesar de ser personas que se parecen mucho en el sufrimiento que han tenido solo porque tiene toda la suerteaa del universo a su favor como. Lo hizo en el mundo de Nasu, ahí es donde me desagrada y ya los odio Puedo decir que como escritor eres muy bueno en tu estilo y según los puntos de clasificación te daría no menos de 4 estrellas Por el gusto y luego disgusto que me provocó tu obra te daría 3 estrellas Por tu protagonista le daría 2 estrellas al ser la representación self insert de un puberto hormonado sin conciencia más allá de sus deseos y necesidades, vamos que representa a un chico que solo quiere coger, que se transforma en una especie de genio de Aladin pero sin ataduras Hay reseñas de NTR con Freya, que están mal, estoy invalidando esas opiniones, porque Vahn no tenía a Freya en el Harem y tampoco hay sentimientos relacionados en ese punto en la obra Antes podía leer estas obras sin molestarme y me gustaban, realmente no era capaz de ver el egoísmo extremo de las acciones y psique de los protagonistas, pero algo que novi pasar me reconfiguró la psique, y ahora cualquier acción incivilizada que sienta desproporcionada y por lo tanto hipócrita me produce rechazo Y todos sabemos lo difícil que es escribir a una persona que no sea innecesariamente agresiva, menos un protagonista que caen muy cercas del bullyng promedio
Started to read the story, and so far it's pretty good but I'd love to know if this is purely a danmachi fix or has the mc already moved to another world? (I saw one piece mentioned in the first chapters and I'd absolutely love to see Vahn go there)
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Reseña en español esta no es una novela para todos, puedo decir que la historia, la acción, los personajes están muy bien hechos, sin embargo pasan múltiples cambios en el enfoque de la novela, el primero y el que más saca a todos es apartir del cap 100+ donde la historia pasa de ser de acción, aventura y romance a una de romance, harem, aventura y acción. si te adaptas a la historia puedo decir que es muy disfrutable, incluso utilizando la tradición automática tanto de Google como de la aplicación de webtoon. francamente yo creo que merece el intento, yo tuve que leer esta novela intermitente por los cambios algo bruscos que pasan de vez en cuando pero es una excelente novela.
Seré sincero es una gran historia me encanta como el personaje se desarrolla y actúa, llega hasta el cap 118, pero sinceramente se a vuelto insoportable continuar, y sentido que me dará dolor de cabeza mas de una ves leyendo y la razón principal, única que le encuentro es algo que menciona el autor que lo recalca y es el HAREM, que será y es enorme, ¿ahora es el tamaño del harem?, para nada! no me interesa si tiene veinte o cien mujeres, !el problema es su actitud!. que fue muy destrozado que paso su vida anterior o quiera vivirla con amor o consentir a todo el mundo etc, se vuelve super fastidioso e irritante exactamente eso "QUIERE COMPLACER A TODOS" con solo la aparición de Lili comienza a dar señalas de a donde el prota va con su actitud con las mujeres, que no puede decir que no, que si se ponen triste por que les gusta el prota el para consolarlas, si vamos juntarnos, literalmente su jodido primer beso fue robado y posterior a eso lo obligaron a besar. una amazona que en lo personal no me encanta para nada ella, pero el prota se enoja o molesta, no para nada, la amazona solo se pone triste y dice ¿me odias? y el prota no para nada esto y lo otro por que cada chica que se pone triste para que no se sienta mal dice o acepta parcialmente la situación, no digo que la historia este mal, me encanta la aventura que conozca gente, chicas etc, pero esta creciendo exponencialmente cada jodida mujer, que le pone ojos de cachorro y el simplemente acepta, o de repente me gustas el prota no lo sabia así que acepta tus sentimientos, "que te jodan" protagonista, entonces ese es mi problema, hubieron muchos momentos donde me hubiera gustado que el prota evaluara mejor sus sentimientos antes de hacer promesas, que te quiero acá, te quiero por acá, eso estaría mucho mejor, por que uno entiende el es como un papel en blanco y no entiende muy bien las integraciones. hombre y mujer, que Aiz le pidiera hasta sexo así sin mas, no estuvo mal realmente, se sintió natural por la exploración del genero ya que ambos son casi iguales en ese sentido, mas tranquilo uno lo asimila mas, pero Lili super fastidiosa y el mc en algún momento le dice que más adelante, pero ya está en la lista para que me entiendan. si la hubiera dejado como una hermana menor, en serio queda perfecto, por que queda una historia de superación que me a encantado como Lili a estado creciendo, pero su pegajosidad con el prota es super fastidiosa, entiendo que asi esta hecha por el creador original , pero para que no este triste el prota no la sienta hablar, no la rechaza, no le dice que no es el tipo de relación que quisiera tener con ella, ella llora y pasara tiempo en que tenga que superarlo, pero aún así quererse mucho , NO simplemente de repente observa que tiene sus curvas etc, mas adelante podemos intentarlo, "no me jodas", las relaciones mas buenas para mi en su harem son hefesto que a sido un romance de los mas bello, me a gustado como los dos se complementa, Ais en lo que salió, me pareció super lindo esa exploración juntos, ojo no han tenido sexo todavía, pero hay aviones, la cuestión es que super natural y genial y esta tipa de gato aventurar ladrón que lo recibe al principio, le dio el espacio al prota para que explorara sus sentimientos, en ves de aprovecharse de el cuando era ingenuo, ya van tres chicas en el harem y todas muy buenas, el resto super fastidiosas, lloran por todo, el acepta para que no estén tristes, no dice que no, no se toma las cosas con calma, NADA SOLO ACEPTA, entonces bueno lo dejo hasta aquí, considera que los que puedan seguir leyendo, lo disfrutaran no este mal, me encanta verlo pelear, si soy amante de las peleas, de las aventuras. por que considera que el autor hasta ahora, entretiene y hace que uno quiera seguir leyendo, el creador de este fan fic, recalca que quiere que su prota, tenga razones para crecer, se dedique parte al amor etc, no esta mal, pero perdóname si integras personajes femeninos en el harem, que de por si son fastidiosas, obligan de cierta manera al prota aceptar por que no quiere nadie se ponga triste, bueno a mi me fastidia ye visto que hay comentario donde otros se fastidian, claro no se puede consolar a todo el mundo, pero sinceramente Creo que el harem es lo que mas o menos no te favoreció por que te digo la historia esta buena, pero empezaste a metro uno tras de otro. algunos gusto, otros realmente son la razón por que uno no quieres seguir leyendo y la actitud del prota solo lo empeora, creo que te hubieras tomado las cosas con mas calma, digamos que la amazona te la acepta por que me encanto la introducción de Ais en esto, pero ya, una promesa de hijo, eso pa que, solo para que la tipa no este triste, cuando nunca se le había ocurrido ser padre, entonces bueno el que le gusto, adelante, no es mala historia pero tanto idiota del prota tampoco, miren la ultima parte donde lo dejo, la tipa de las plantas que no quiere pelear por traumaz, la salva el prota, le gusta el prota, le dice me siento inferior etc, el prota para que no este triste la besa, ósea que carajo, nunca la había visto románticamente, pero cuando aprendió a besar, ahora esa es su solución, nada perdóname pero que cagada, estar aceptando a todo el mundo aquí y allá, pero no es mi fan fic pero ósea ni para una persona que esta aprendiendo como el prota, mas parece que los lectores se fastidien es todo.
Amigo, dime. En serio escribiste un ntr de freya y otra. Solo pregunto noe.gusta esos fetiches raros incluso vahn a sufrido o lo que sea. Una buena historia debe tener un buen protagonista sea m/f, dejando eso de lado. Responde o dejame el cap. !!! El peor golpe no es al principio sino cuando leíste mucho y te decepcionas!!
The grammar and stability of updates are great but a major issue with the book is how 1 dimensional the characters feel, with many being constantly pitying the protag. While reasonable given his situation I didn't come to read some teen kid coping with everyone around him constantly thinking about how they bad for him
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Ich persönlich muss sagen nach den ersten 150 Kapiteln dass sein charakterbild sehr chaotisch vorkommt das in kürzester Zeit in allen möglichen extrem auswachsen. Einerseits hat er in seiner Kindheit in einem sehr missbräuchlichen Verhältnis gelebt und hat daher extreme Bindung probleme doch sobald er jemanden besser kennengelernt hat ( viele Frauen ) schlägt dieses ins andere Extrem um und er bindet sich stark an diese Person bis zu sexueller Beziehung. Zumal ich auch das Verhalten deren Person die eine Aufsicht oder Lehr-Position für ihn übernommen haben dumm finde da sie festgestellt haben dass er extrem wenig gesunden menschenverstand und allgemeinwissen hat wäre es doch logisch diese Defizite Stück für Stück aufzuklären und ihn beizubringen. Selbst wenn der Autor die charakterentwicklung nicht wirklich schreiben möchte kann er diese in zeitsprüngen von paar Tagen oder Monaten relativ leicht abhandeln. Ich persönlich muss sagen dass der Charakter viel zu viele Widersprüche in sich hat umpassend in den setting von Welten reisen und Shonen Geschichte passt.
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Firstly only the first 100 or so chapters is about fighting in dunguon after that dont expect much action for a long time. my opinion of the story: Mc lacking common sense is understandable what makes no sense is that despite reading a lot of anime or mange in his first life, he still doesnt get that too uch affection is not always good. He basically doesnt have a line or an ability to say no to girls he has a good opinion of unless they are like a child. At first he takes other peoples advise seriously and try to use it in daily life, after the story shifted from action to romance at 100+ chapters, its like advise goes in one ear and out the other, he acknowledges the advice and trys to do it at first but stops and forgets about it after a while. Also the hestia in the story is a bit worse than loki in my opinion, she acts as clingy and spoiled to the mc as compared to the original hestia to bell. The issue here is that their circumstance is different, bell is a very kind boy who is a bit native while mc is a boy who cant say no to her due to his views and needs someone to ensure he doesnt push himself too much. This job was tina's before that incident and since then it was hestia job but she only does it when its with other women and not with herself, basically being very jealous and selfish despite having no right to. Thats my opinion of the story, take it with a gain of salt as i could not take it any longer and quit around chapter 250 while the story has 2000+ chapters.
A very nice to read novel. I'll like if a few new fan-fic of this writer were to come by.
This was one of the first fanfics I listened to in the past. Hnestly I feel like a lot of people take some things from this book and cursed gamer. Both have harems but there not horrible the way things play out. Also the stuff actually has plot that doesn’t seem like it was copied and pasted. It actually feels like this person tried to make there own story. Instead of taking 10 stories and mashing them together.👌
I can't tell you how many times I've reread this series. Overall just fantastic story
goods bro its very good i like the story from beginning to the end i hope this novel will be popular
Reveal Spoiler You can see how many chapter that i already read, so ill give some head up. MC is what you called brat with background, so you can't say MC too naive because he is. The Development of MC character is too much long for i like but im still try to read it, already 200 but still in Danmachi, its WOW for me.
It's an interesting story, did not realise it was going to be a harem but could handle that, it's very slow paced, especially after the first 100 chapters, I don't mind slice of life but this was a bit too slow for me the characters are well written through.
The start of the story is quite interesting. This author has a great imagination and presents the story in a stable way. I just hope the quality remains good and this is not dropped.
Well, this is a ridicuously well-written story. The chapters where he just played with his children in Danmachi were my favourite by far.
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Ok. I am bored as heck, and so, I decided to make a proper review of this without being biased. Story - 4.6/5 Characters - 4.8/5 World Building - 4.4/5 Romance - 4.6/5 (smut) Writing - 4.9/5 _________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ok, so here is a little summary of the book so far: MC is born with an unknown mutation that makes his body pretty interesting for scientists. Long story short, he becomes a lab rat for years, dies, meets a "system", and goes into the world of Danmachi. Now for the story:- One word - Mysterious. It's basically about going from one world to another. Why? In order to get stronger. Why? To go to another world. Why? To save a certain someone. Now the mysterious part. It's the MC's mother as well as the MC himself. What is he and what is she? Why is his body made up of certain energy and why is he able to travel from one world to another. Simply put, the ability wasn't just handed to him by some god, or it happened randomly. There is something set in motion. You could say, gears of fate turning. The plot itself does feel a bit TOO slow at times, but it manages to pick up later on. Characters:- A really good portrayal of the characters. This is a fanfiction at its core, yet it doesn't follow the plot AT ALL. The MC is in the world of Danmachi years before the plot of canon begins. What does this have to with characters? Well, have you wondered what the characters would be like if the dumbo-harem-aura didn't affect their personality? Well, this is it. MC does get to have a relationship with the girls, but that doesn't affect their personality. Each girl acts in their own unique way and no stuff like "everyone did (insert comedic/dramatic reaction)." The characters are properly fleshed out, and if you pay attention to the core of their personality, there is a portrayal of the weakness of all sentient beings. World-Building:- I don't need to say much about this one. It's a fanfic, basically borrowed worlds. The author describes it well and tries to show a clear image of what it's like. In the end, though, it mostly depends on whether you've seen the original anime/ played the original VN. Romance:- This one's a tough one to describe. How do I put it, "MC loves to love, and his partners love being loved." Basically that. MC is mentally unstable due to what he's gone through in his past life. This makes it very hard for him to differentiate between a lot of stuff. (eg. love & like). This makes the relationships seem almost unnatural, but you mustn't forget that the world isn't Earth. The girls in the anime are totally different from the monstrosities here. It isn't the MC that is mentally unstable. Most of the girls he's with have been through SOMETHING. They all have a past, a wish, and a dream. Also, lots of smut. Writing:- Very good. Mistakes are kept to a minimum and the grammar is fantastic. No headaches while reading. Chapters are also pretty long.
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